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Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 9

i'm very interested to see where they go from here.. thanx for writing and sharing!

chasity

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 9

Again with the WOW.  I have to go to the forum to talk and see what others are saying!!!!!   I hope I don't annoy you!

Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wow, way to leave us hanging!

A WHOLE WEEK, im gutted :(

x

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

This is a strange and disturbing yet compelling story of such a relationship.  You write so well; as uncomfortable as parts of it are, I still wanted to read and see what happened.

I am interested to see your description play out:  what force will threaten to expose her life - so far the candidates are Jasper, Tyler, & Lauren.  And will there or won't there be a wedding?  So many questions to answer.

Reviewer: 1coo123 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great so far! Please keep going!

Reviewer: domward (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 8

wow - I am loving this story.. keep them cumming please !!!!!

Reviewer: Just4ALE (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 8

So, I've read this story with my eyes bugged out of my head most of the time. I've never heard of this consentual slave stuff, my only experience w D/s being The Sub/The Dom/The Training by TaraSueMe and Icy's Master of the Universe.(It was your banner that caught my eye. Beautiful, by the way.)

Holy cow. Fan fiction sure opens your eyes (hence the lovely bugged out look I have going on right now... LOL.)

For someone who says they don't live this lifestyle, you're sure doing a good job of making stuff up.

Wow. I have NO idea where you're going with this... Jasper, their wedding. I guess if I can bear through it - punishment scenes really skeeve me out - I'll find out.

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

Whee!

Reviewer: chinakat (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 8

Delicious! I *love* this story. It's one of my absolute faves. You're a great writer and fill a huge gap that exists in the Twi-Fanfic World. Who can get enough of Dom Edward? :-D Also, I can tell you've done a lot of research into the BDSM community, which can be very misunderstood. Let me know if you ever need a beta!

Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

Love this story! Hope the next update comes really soon (I'm a greedy bastard, I know...)

I'd like to support Nightchill's request for an EPOV on how Bella and Edward met! That would be really interesting. And of course totally hot!

Reviewer: earth-fairy2006 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

loving it so much, can't wait till the next update.

Reviewer: lmlx8 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

ok, I'm here, found your story as a rec from someone on "Master of the Universe" forum. So far so good.

Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 8

Awe how lovely! Edward can share <3

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 8

I would love for you to write an outtake of how Bella and Edward met, preferably in EPOV so we get a gilmts of his thoughts!

I'm very curious of Jaspers roll, and if Alice will have a part in this story.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 8

Awesome job this chapter!

I don't mind at all about Jasper and Bella- I enjoy it, actually!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

An outtake that I would really love to read is the first time they met.  Please, pretty please?

Reviewer: shaleann (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

Not fond of the Jasper incident,  although I too have a soft spot for Jazz.  However,  I will be Edwards slave anyday of the year and all in between if he'd let me!  Great Writing!

Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

good chapter!!! the slave thing isnt exactly my style, but i like this story!

Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 8

Excellent! Can't wait for chapter 9! And I'm glad Jasper won't be overly involved. I think he's sexy too, but I think this story is best jsut between Edward and Bella. Though I'm very surprised Bella wasn't punished for her ungracious display at the dinner table.

Reviewer: leetc (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 8

i have to say i'm rather curious about how did edward proposed to her, i would really like if you explained it :D i still love your story and i wait anxiously for every wednesday (:

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

Interesting....I think Edward was showing off!!

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 8

can't wait to read more about this couple, this is a very informative story and written with class and elegance, but so kinky by nature it just makes you hot and begging for more

Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 8

Yeah, I'd have at least as many questions as Bella. Let's see what Edward plans, and how he he "makes up" for it

Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update I have soft spot for Jasper as well. Great chapter I enjoyed it very much!

Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 8

Huh.  Don't know how I feel about that.  Definitely demonstrated that she is his property.  Certainly can't interpret any love in Edward's actions there.  Seemed to showing off a toy.

I'd love to know why he did that.

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