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Reviewer: mychemfan78 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
HOT HOT HOT!!!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
I knew they loved each other. I have faith that Jasper will come to terms with his feelings and won't make them both suffer too long.
Reviewer: fnmom68 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 10
What a great chapter! I've enjoyed reading about the whole Dom/Sub relationship, but it gave the story some real depth to have real love shown between B&E. It makes their D/S relationship more real - to know that there is something underneath it all that they hold so dear.
What's up with the wedding? I'm curious about the proposal. Was it Edward's decision or did he actually propose? I'm hoping it was something real and involving their true love rather than a Dom requirement. Maybe something you might mention in a future chapter??
Looking forward to the next one, as always!
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
my love is like woah. see i like this relationship.
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow, beautiful. Edward indeed learned a lot since his college days. Let's see ow Jasper fares.
Reviewer: McKenzieMac (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 10
Def not my usual kind of story but I totally luv it! Cant wait to see more! and BTW the story Fourteen, great rec! luv that fic.
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
oh! this was the sweetest ending to a chapter ever! I loved it! The love is always openly there but this just stressed it and brought it to the forefront where it couldnt be denied at all even by the biggest skeptic of the lifestyle! I loved it! Please please update soon!
Reviewer: aimeexjeannette25 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 10
Awww, just Bella and Edward.I love it.
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 10
Another great chapter. Loved the end of this chapter particularly- it was nice to see the two interacting outside of the D/s relationship.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 10
O my that really started out difficult, but with all the information it made for a very important step for everyone. Hopefully Jasper hasn't been scared off! How wonderfully symbolic that he removes her collar and cuffs, and she relinquishes his title at the very end. Ahhhh love...
Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 10
Let me leave you much, much love. For a non BDSM reader, you have weaned me from following Jasper's POV in chapter 1 so that by the time I got here, I could really follow and believe in Bella. And Edward. They're so tender with each other, it's just lovely.
Reviewer: MIna (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 10
I loved this, the softer side of them, it is good to see the love they actually share is deeper then just slave and master, and when needed they can be just them.
I love this story. PLease right more soon
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
Liked it? how about loved it!!!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 10
Amazing chapter! So damn good. I felt bad for her after what happened w/Jasper and thought it was so sweet of Edward to ask her to punish him and then explain to her why it was his fault. And he took off her cuffs and collar and they made love! It was beautiful. I always wondered if they ever told each other that they loved one another. I know that they are engaged but to hear them say it and for her to call him Edward puts a whole new spin on the story. I love this story!
Reviewer: Anne Shirley-Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 10
I can't recall ever reading about such an intense connection.
Thank you for showing us the love between them.
Reviewer: immortal (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
IMHO one of the best BDSM fics out there. Keeping the entire story contained in Bella's POV and of course the way you've written her, gives this story so much more depth. All of Me feels so much more intimate and revealing and less about gratuitous sex. Love it! Can't wait to see how these two evolve.
Reviewer: jadediamond (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 10
awesome story! cant wait for the next chapther
Reviewer: missy85 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow! So, I actually cried when bella was crying. Very powerful. I loved that edward saw that they needed bella and edward time, that there is more than the slave/master dynamic to their relationship and their love.
Reviewer: TwiMom4Claire (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 10
I hope it's nowhere near over, there is so much to tell. Such talented writing, bringing to life the realities of this lifestyle. Will Bella get an opportunity to speak freely to Jasper about her choices and how she isn't damaged because she enjoys relinquishing control and living this life? Is there more to her leaving her journal on the refrigerator? Does Edward access her journal or is that her sole source of privacy? Will we hear more about their decision to marry and whether it is truly out of love? And I certainly hope for more scenes similar to the first few chapters, even though sexually explicit, they truly show how much of Edward's life is devoted to making sure Bella is loved.
Reviewer: HisVolvo (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 10
Happy Thanksgiving. This chapter (well the whole story really) was wonderful. And what an image. Edward standing holding onto chains bent over asking to be flogged. Hmmmm... Tasty. Keep it up
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 10
loved it...can't wait for more
Reviewer: rakiba (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow! This is by far the most intense chapter in the story, IMO. It had me on the edge of my seat and even squealing with joy at the end!
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
Loved it!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 10
I like that I've seen for the first time a glimpse of just Edward and Bella in this story, and not just Domward and Submissive Bella.
Great job with that introduction!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: CorBen (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
That was awesome!! See that's what I'm talking about! LOVE!!!!! Finally, this story has been awesome but it needed just one scene that showed that he really does love her and that was it. Even if you don't put another like this for the rest of the story that's ok, because what you wrote was beautiful.
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