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Reviewer: Pyejammies (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oooh you are evil keeping us waiting but I suppose we'll let you enjoy Christmas, just know that I'm waiting with bated breath. Not sure I like the idea of putting her lady parts on the seat. Isn't it a bit insanitary and doing that on a restaurant seat ugh! Just think about all the germs left behind by it's previous occupants. Jasper has now done a complete about turn. Are we going towards a threesome here? Is Jasper going to the wedding which can't be far off now? Anyway, have a merry one.
Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 12
So loving this story!!! I hope Tyler turns out to be an actual threat so we can see Protective-Ward in action! Eagerly awaiting 12/29..more so than Christmas actually lol.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 12
Stupid Tyler, what is he up too?
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 12
oh you are a mean! but obviously you have us HOOKED.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 12
Awesome chapter! Loved every word. And yes that was evil to leave us w/no cliffie but making us wait 2 weeks! This is the season of giving!! Lol. It is getting so good!
Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
Pleased to see Jasper (re-?) discover his inner Domsper. The moment with Bella/Jasper in the bathroom was hot -- definitely looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: nikkib (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 12
fantastic as allways!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 12
great chapter.
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
Loved it!
Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 12
LOVE IT!
This is amazing, caannot wait to see where this story goes cause i dont have a clue tbh!
2 WEEKS, how come??
Reviewer: kneon (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great as usual. Tyler is going to be a major problem.
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great story! Is Edward going to be jealous of Jasper?
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 12
I am so addicted to this story!!!!! I am glad you put it up when you said you would. Your doing a great job on this story THANK YOU!!!!!!!
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
O I hate this story. It pisses me off to the hilt. Freakin no way should he feel okay with sharing her. And she just realized the Tyler coincidence. Before it was nothing. She can't catch a break. Where's the love? Makes me so mad I want to jump through the screen and beat him. I literally hate this story. Thanks for the update. The love/hate relationship is mighty fun!
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 12
So, is Tyler stalking? I can't really get a read on his character yet to tell if he is evil or not, but if he overheard Bella and Jasper talking he could have some preconceived ideas about Bella and her submissiveness. All the exhibitionism does make me a little uncomfortable.
A happy holiday to you and your family, also.
Jill
Reviewer: alisharae83 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 12
MMMM I think Jasper is HOT!!!
Reviewer: mad4hugh (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 12
Heh, heh....it's the promise of a lemony evening to come that's the "cliffie"! Poor Bella, I knew she'd have to be punished for not telling Master about Tyler, but DAMN! that sounded like it hurt...A. LOT. (Oh well, it sounds like she 'enjoyed' it, based on how turned on she was!)
Have a lovely holiday!
Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 12
I hate these two week waits!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great chapter...can't wait for 12/29!
Happy Holidays:)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 12
=] its really good jasper understands
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 12
I don't like Tyler... but I think that's the point. I foresee him causing trouble later. Hopefully not very bad.
I cracked up when Bella was trying to sit in the car with the dress. I was imagining her sitting there with the dress all the way up to her bellybutton. It was hilarious to me! I'm sitting here laughing all by myself...
Thank you for the update. I will patiently wait for 12/29 (even though I will be in Vegas. I will read it on my laptop!)
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 12
Awesome story as always. I look forward to your updates!
Have a Merry Christmas!
~Sapphire
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
I continue to be so intrigued by this story. I am relieved that Jasper has a better understanding about Bella and Edward's relationship. And, I have to admit, I really liked Jasper as a Dom. Very, very hot!!!
Can't wait to see what happens at dinner. I wonder is Tyler will be there to see Bella with two hot men!!!
Reviewer: Rennykins (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow I love that chapter, is it wrong I'm wanting more Bella/Jasper action ??? Hmmm he's so sweet in this story. Cant wait for the next chapter, 2 weeks is long *pouts*
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