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Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
Tell hubby to read a book or watch TV. WE NEED YOU! This was a wonderful chapter. Edward loves Bella ao much and showed he needs her. Loved it!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
great chapter! i really saw edwards love for her here. and i liked how you brought carlisle and esme into the story!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 19
I continue to be intrigued by this story. In the beginning, I couldn't understand how/why Bella would want to be in this type of relationship and now I am in complete awe of their relationship and the intensity of their love.
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: jslpisces11 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh this was the perfect resolution to the club situation- me thinks the drama hasn't ended yet! I love the chapters that show Edward feeling a little weakness/fear of losing Bella- but I LOVES some Dom Carlisle/Esme!!!!
Reviewer: Triger3happy (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 19
GOD DAMMIT!!!! WHY THE HELL DOES IT HAVE TO BE EVERY OTHER WEEK!!!!!!! I want it NOW!!!!!! ¬.¬...... Haha in translation, that means I really liked it ^.^
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 19
I love it love it love it!!! Yes i love the posecessive side of our edward, so damn sexy and I love when they are loving to eacho ther through all of it. It makes it seem more like she is his love than a materialistic item. When is their wedding going to be? OOOh who is invited? I cant wait
Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
a very sweet love story chapter. thanks.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 19
That was so romantic!
Reviewer: fnmom68 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 19
Please pass along to your husband that there are those of us who learn from your writing. I'm not talking about the smut - I mean the flow and context of the story. The writing is excellent, and the smut is done tastefully and with the story's plot and emotion in tact, always.
I am so eager to hear more about Tyler and Caius - I am sure we have not heard the last from either one of them! Wonderful chapter, and I look forward to the next one (almost as much as I looked forward to the New Moon DVD, and that's saying something!).
Reviewer: livindol (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 19
A beautifully written chapter...I love to see the softer side of Edward :)
Reviewer: nothing_but_a_prayer (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 19
another really good chapter. (even if it was almost late!) :-P
I really love this Bella and Edward. :-)
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
I argue with my husband all the time about ff. It's good to know I'm not the only one. I thought this chapter was great. Keep up the awesomeness.
Reviewer: BelleDuJour (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh, I feel you on the arguing with the husband over fanfic. Thanks for putting yourself out there to give us such a great story!
I like how controlled Bella was in this chapter - she shows her devotion even when no one else is looking.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to find out the drama Cauis brings. I'm so glad that this Edward doesn't feel that he puts Bella in danger. His only thought is to protect what is his.
My husband complains too.....Men!!
Reviewer: Moonliteclipse (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 19
Aw! Super sweet and scary! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 19
Loved it
Reviewer: Bella541 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
I argue with my husband about reading too much fanfiction! It's a vicious cycle. :)
Another amazing chapter. :) I loved the ending... all roles aside, you get so see the raw love they share. Beautiful.
Reviewer: Just4ALE (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 19
Okay, I laughed a LOT during this chapter (and the past few, actually), as you introduced all these Twi-characters. LMAO: Aro w/Demetri and Felix as subs. Esme and Carlisle as Doms. Emmett and feisty Rose. Evil Caius. Club owner Laurent. Erik in training. That was all so funny. (And thanks to Icy's story, I know what a cat is now. LOL.)
Nice that Edward feels so strongly about his slave. I wonder what danger is next around the corner for her/them.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
pretty good chapter thanks
Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
I wish everyone told us the dates of their updates. I love having something to look forward to. Bravo. Great story.
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
Fantastic chapter! Worthwhile update, heck all your updates are worthwhile! Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
I can't believe I have to wait 2 weeks to see if tyler or Caius cause some more trouble!!
Love the story
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 19
Lovely, as always! My hubby appreciates the "after effects" of fanfic too much to care about the time I spend on here... always a good point to bring up in arguments! ;-)
Reviewer: ChrisR (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
Something makes me think that Caius will turn up again, like a bad penny. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
great chapter...tell ur hubby that your readers love u and youre making our imaginary lives a whole lot better by writing this smut...lol
looking forward to the next chapter
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