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Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh shit!  Everyone is out to get her. I hope Edward can keep her safe.  I love reading about their time together and how they interact.  It's very loving.

Reviewer: Motherthing (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 20

After the last chapter all I could think of was "MY EYES!! MY EYES!!  I'll never see New Moon in the same way again!"  I love this story.  I lost it for a week because I hadn't learned how to use the site when I first started reading, but now I'm glad I found it again.  You have more than enough plot to keep the smut interesting and just enough loving between the full-on BDSM to keep it from being over intense for those who know nothing about the culture.  My email is if you have time or inclination to communicate.  I have been on the extreme fringe of some form of BDSM for years now and am interested in tallking about it with someone who may know more than I do.  What you have written feels so authentic that there is no way you are a complete newbie to this life.

Motherthing aka Jeri

Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 20

Thanks for another excellent chapter.  I am imagining Bella with that leash preparing breakfast.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 13

nice batch of plot thickening, author.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 20

I think I've said it before, but having Tyler on the one hand, and Caius now on the other, plus trying to maintain her slave-persona with Master Edward, has got to be taking a toll on poor Bella now :P

I wonder what Edward's response is going to be when he notices the news article?

Reviewer: spunkluvr (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 20

er err errr errrrr AHHHHHHGGH

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 12

Yeah, that is evil.  Fortunately i won't have to wait since I am just catching up.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 20

another great chapter. can't wait for an update. hubs telling me to get off the computer but i told him my fav story was updated and i had to read it first.

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 20

Caius is dangerous.  Eric is a nusance.  However, I hope these two never meet.  Bella is inn enough trouble.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh oh now what?  Who's that guy?

Reviewer: ChrisR (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 20

Thanks are getting scarier,lol. Thanks so much for the update.

Reviewer: angela of alagaesia (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 20

Nicely written set up chapter!  And now we wait...

it was nice to get anoher glimpse of their routine here, I just wish Jasper didn't keep disappearing!

Reviewer: Jilli90 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 20

Love it

Reviewer: Jaspersaysrelax1901 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

whoa that was intense I really liked it I really like the story... It has chactacter... =DDD

Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 20

Cliffie! How evil of  you. I will be counting the days until the 20th. Thank you so much for the chapter. I love this story.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh, that last was so tenderand affecting.  Good on you, Author.

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 20

oh no!!!  what now?

Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 20

Yes! glad to see Tyler back in the picture or atleast i hope its tyler! I cant wait to see where you go with this next. so exciting! thank you!

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 20

damn things are bad for her right now thanks great chapter

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 20

I am beginning to think that they will never get a moments peace.  I hope that Tyler is dealt with soon and I can't believe that Victoria was killed.  I have a bad feeling about her death.  Eeeks!

Can't wait for the 20th!!! =D

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 9

  Jasper MUST be a very good friend

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 20

You are evil to leave us hanging again!!! Hurry April 20th.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 8

Okay, that was different. 

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 20

How I love this story.  The scene in the shower made me almost as wobbly-kneed as Bella LOL!  But Tyler is getting closer and closer to invading her safe haven, added to which is the possibility that Victoria has been murdered - which could have potentially dire consequences for Bella.  If Caius is so desperate to remove witnesses to what happened then she could well be his next target.  Edward is really going to have his work cut out keeping her safe.  I'll be counting the days until the 20th because this story has got me on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: pool718 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 20

I am enjoying all the danger Bella attracts.  Thanks for the update.

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