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Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
Okay, that was different.
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 20
How I love this story. The scene in the shower made me almost as wobbly-kneed as Bella LOL! But Tyler is getting closer and closer to invading her safe haven, added to which is the possibility that Victoria has been murdered - which could have potentially dire consequences for Bella. If Caius is so desperate to remove witnesses to what happened then she could well be his next target. Edward is really going to have his work cut out keeping her safe. I'll be counting the days until the 20th because this story has got me on the edge of my seat.
Reviewer: pool718 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 20
I am enjoying all the danger Bella attracts. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: snfrisby (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 20
I am absolutely IN LOVE with this story! I look forward to your updates. Right now I happen to be off every other Tuesday, which happens to be the Tuesdays you update. These updates are the highlight of my day on those weeks lol. Your writing just sucks you in, you give just the right amount of detail. I kinda don't want this story to ever end. It's one that I could read 100 chapters of it and never get tired of the story. Keep up the good work, anxiously waiting for the next 2 weeks to go by now.
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 20
Loved this update!
Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
Nice chapter.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 20
great chapter
Reviewer: ChinaDollz (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
OMG...lol your mean!! cant wait for the 20th!
Reviewer: JustTry (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 20
Man..I do love this story. You always leave us wanting more. No one can ask for anything more from an author. i really like how you're showcasing the love between E & B, and not just protraying their relationship as stricktly D&S. Excellent chapter, as always.
Reviewer: ccf (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wow...What a cliffhanger. I love your story. Thank you again. ;)
Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
I did not miss the lemons. It was lovely having Master take care of Bella. Lauren needs to go somewhere and sit down.
Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 20
That cliffy is just mean thanks for the update loved it so excited can't wait for more.....
Reviewer: dragonlady (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 20
D***!!!! That Caius is pure evil. And I am so fed up with Tyler. Grow up little boy and stop obsessing about a woman who is already taken. Humph.
I do love how you make this 24/7 slavery choice as understandable. I can see why someone could/would make that choice (given the right master). You make this Bella identifiable.
Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: Bella541 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 20
Gotta love cliffhangers! Can't wait until the 20th!
And yes, I do think that we need a support group! :)
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 20
LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Tyler is freaking us all out and I can't believe that Victoria was killed. Who killed her Caius or Tyler???? Can't wait till next update :)
Reviewer: amazingragdoll (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 20
greaT chapter
Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 20
OMG!!! Edward and Bella have to worry about Tyler and about Caius. That is awful. Did Caius have Victoria killed???? Bella just draws trouble wherever she goes. Poor thing. As always.....I can't wait for your next chapter.
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 20
This story just gets more intriguing. So will it be Tyler or Caius that threatens them with exposure? Edward may be right, Tyler may just be a harmless crush, but he's still a threat. It seems like they should inform the police of what they witnessed at the club, but that would mean an investigation into the club and its members, I take it?
Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 5
hmmmm...
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 20
oh no....
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 20
I'll be marking my calendar for the next update.
Keep up the great work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 20
I love this story, wasnt all that excited with this chapter, but alas, it was still wonderful
Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good heavens, this Edward is the consumate dominant. You are amazing at getting inside the submissive head especially since you are not part of the lifestyle.
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 20
They really do not get much of a chance to just enjoy each other that is for sure. Tyler I feel is much more a risk than Bella wants to admit. I would be in denial too I am sure. And words that I do not usually utter in Twilight fanfiction: "Poor Victoria". I am sure that her death was a direct result of the incident at the club. That should lend to more drama and probably will incite Edward to action in many ways. I kind of like possessive, controlling Edward, especially since Bella likes him too. I even like angry Edward, so long as he is not angry with Bella, and so far that has not happened, so it's all good. You do a great job of keeping a great mix of emotions and plot variations in this story. Always something to look forward to in the next chapter.
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 20
Gah! Is this the beginning of Ciaus' revenge? What exactly is Tyler trying to accomplish with that book? Why don't I have a shower like that in my house?
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