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Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 20

Tyler's being very creepy. Caius... deadly. Their happy little bubble keeps being encroached on. As if the final preparations for a wedding isn't stressful enough!

Reviewer: mousekemom (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 20

OOooohhhh, my!  Not only do they have to worry about Tyler, now Caius.  I am guessing Caius is the bigger Tyler is just a college crush gone wrong.  Creepy little monkey....ewwww.  How will Jasper play into all this?  Will he move in and train as a Dom and help protect Bella?  Things to ponder....Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 20

Caught up...I am really enjoying this story

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 19

What would a story with Bella be without danger and desperation... good on you.

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow amazing chapter! omg total cliffhanger!! Thanks soo much for the update! Soo looking forward to the next one :) I really enjoy this story and Bella and Edwards relationship

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter! Tyler is just asking for trouble. Does he honestly think acting like this and basically stalking her is going to win Bella over. He really is delusional. I wonder how Edward will react to the hit and run. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 18

Go get him, Edward!

Reviewer: kneon (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow, we have Tyler messing with Bella's life and wedding and the Caius causing some problems.

Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: swift-lovestory (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 20

I love how Edward can be so caring to Bella. Cliffies are horrible, but understood, they keep you coming back for more. I will see you again on the 20th!!! Thanks for updating

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 17

Nah, it's not just

Reviewer: mamaheartstwilight (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 20

Another amazing chapter!  Great job!!!

Reviewer: ladykt (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 20

hmmm  ok can caius get hit with a car please.....and drug.....a long time.

Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wonderful. I enjoy this Edward and Bella so much.

This Tyler business is creeping me out. I'm sure that's what you are going for though.

I can't wait to see how things play out, especially this new revelation of Victoria's death. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great cliffie!

Reviewer: benna (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh wow. That is soo crazy. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 16

As if Tyler wasn't enough...Bella does have a kind of danger magnet associated with her, no matter who writes her.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 15

They probably will excuse the artistic license...after they quit hunting for it.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: baby_pau (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 20

OMG!!!! NOOOO!!!!Why a cliffhanger??? lol.

Is amazing this chapter, and the story is just great, i love bella/edward relationship.

Reviewer: KaiaRose (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow!  I really love the multiple dimensions you are showing in their relationship.  While they have their definete roles, Bella and Edward are clearly in love and happy with their lives.  Bella is still intelligent and Edward loves that about her and can tease with her too.  It is not always so serious in BDSM relationships, there are plenty of laughs too.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 14

Okie dokie.  Is all right with the world.  My guess is, not for long.

Reviewer: shar0525 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 20

eek. 2 psychos?  Tyler seems like a 'harmless' kinda stalker but I have a feeling he's not, right Mistress Flibbins?

Love your story. following you on twitter in case u tweet some hints.  The only thing that I don't like is that you're only on Twilighted. I can't get Twilighted to work on my crackberry so I have to wait to read...

Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh shit!  Everyone is out to get her. I hope Edward can keep her safe.  I love reading about their time together and how they interact.  It's very loving.

Reviewer: Motherthing (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 20

After the last chapter all I could think of was "MY EYES!! MY EYES!!  I'll never see New Moon in the same way again!"  I love this story.  I lost it for a week because I hadn't learned how to use the site when I first started reading, but now I'm glad I found it again.  You have more than enough plot to keep the smut interesting and just enough loving between the full-on BDSM to keep it from being over intense for those who know nothing about the culture.  My email is if you have time or inclination to communicate.  I have been on the extreme fringe of some form of BDSM for years now and am interested in tallking about it with someone who may know more than I do.  What you have written feels so authentic that there is no way you are a complete newbie to this life.

Motherthing aka Jeri

Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 20

Thanks for another excellent chapter.  I am imagining Bella with that leash preparing breakfast.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 13

nice batch of plot thickening, author.  Good chapter.

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