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Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 3

Obviously Domward knows what he's doing.!

Tyler Crowley thinking he has a shot with Bella sounds familiar, ha, ha. And his comments regarding her get-up and if her fiancé knows about it is quite insolent, I think.


Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 22

That was something! Keep the fluff coming - no complaints here!!! It was extremely erotic that he just went about his business including bringing Jacob  and Carlisle in as though nothing was out of the ordinary.


Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

So they are getting married. I was wondering about the long time they are in a relationship. I want to find out more.

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 22

What a toy that is!  I love the fluff, but I can't wait to see what the next move will be and if it will be by Tyler or Caius.

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 22

This was a great chapter!! I loved it, I so cant wait for the next one!! :) Thanks so much for the update!

Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 22

that was great loved it update when you can thanks

Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 22

Loved Jacob watching!

Reviewer: ihopatz (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 22

Whew!  I was freaking that someone was coming for Bella, and then it's just Jacob.  Thanks for not leaving 2 cliffies in a row!  I really like Master, and part of me wants him for my very own. 

Also, caught the Jasperific outtake and it died me!  Amazing sour pucker from the lemony goodness! 

Thanks for the amazing story!

Reviewer: bookonabeach (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update, I had been looking forward to it and was so relieved when it was Jacob. I needed a sense of closure after the last chapter!

Reviewer: Moonliteclipse (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 22

I love me some Jacob!

Reviewer: jadedbrowneyes2 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 22

I thought for sure that it was someone other than Jacob outside, but I'm really glad there wasn't. Too close for comfort you know? I can't believe Edward had Jacob watch her! I bet his face was priceless. Great chapter =)

Reviewer: kneon (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 22

Great fluffy chapter.  Thank you .

Reviewer: swift-lovestory (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 22

Another great chapter, I was so excited that it was not a strange person in the garden. Cannot wait until the next one.

Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 22

I so enjoy reading this particular fic. Tyler is getting on my last nerve with his stupidity, but I guess that makes the story. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 22

that was a fun chapter.  Poor Jake, that was funnier than I could imagine!!!

Reviewer: benna (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 22

Loved this chapter. I don't know how she keeps from crying. Like him keeping the gag in after her exhausting time on the wall. I know she likes most of it but that gag would be hard to take. Thanks for the update can't wait for more.

Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 22

Thank you. I love this story.

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 22

"I think it'll see a lot of use.  Next time I'm going to attach her so she's facing the wall.  That way I can smack her ass if she makes any noise.  I'll send you the link to their website."


love that line - keep it up

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 22

This is such a wonderful story. I enjoy every minute of it!!! Please keep updating!!

Reviewer: ladykt (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 22

always love your chapter.

Reviewer: Great Chemistry (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 22

Ha ha, I can relate. The list of things I should be doing might just be longer than my "to be read" list, which is really saying something. And I'm not at all sad this didn't end in a cliffhanger! It's a great relief to the dramatics to have a 'normal' D/s scene.

Also, it really cracks me up the way you use Jacob. I don't know how old you imagine him to be, but I see him as pretty young, and it makes it even funnier. Props to Bella for working the net, and props to you for another great chapter. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Jacob is about 21yrs old in this story, so he is definitely younger.  I feel sort of bad for how he gets teased, but Edward needed someone he could torment!  I'm toying with the idea of a oneshot from his POV, because it is fun to imagine what he thinks of this!

Thanks for taking the time from our "to-do list" to read and review!  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 22


Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 22

great chapter.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

I am very relieved that it was just Jacob outside.  It was an intersting dynamic with Jacob there and Edward involving him.  I wish I knew what he was thinking. 

I am nervous about what will happen next.  I am eager and anxious to find out!

Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 22

I'm sure that when the shit does hit the fan, it will be epic.  But I'm glad it hasn't happened just yet.  Poor Jake, but he deserves it, the wee little perv.  

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