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Reviewer: EverlastingMuse (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 22
very good!
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 22
It was just JACOB in the garden?!?! Oh......
Interesting conversation between Edward and Carlisle. I like their relationship and ease of talking while ignoring Bella.
Gag left on, because she'd been a noisy girl.... LOL.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 22
great chapter i love the fluff, thanks tracy
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 22
nice and fluffy, nothing wrong with that....but i am curious about what Edward said to Jacob, did he already know about their lifestyle?
Reviewer: tigerlili48 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 22
why are you making me wait TWO WHOLE WEEKS for an update?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! thats not FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 22
Thanks for the chapter. Jeez, I am noisy a lot. Good thing my hubby doesn't gag me!
Reviewer: realitysucks (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 22
Gosh what a hugely complex story you weave. Ilove it. i just read a comment about whether this is ever going to turn into a love story. I guess that person missed the point. Its a very definite dom/ slave story. the opperative word there being Slave. I have no bdsm knowlege myself but have read loads of good stories and there is definitely a difference between slave and sub. Also you have given some very good teasers about the background to their relationship, especially chap 10 & 11. They are obviously(to me) very in love. I would say Edward worships Bella and although he seems to be a rather harsh master it is all done for Bella's "need" to be his slave. In fact there are some parts in the story where i think Bella needs this lifestyle more than Edward does. Anyway i'm hooked(lol)Cant wait for the trauma with Tyler. Just 1 question : is there a wedding date set? i cant remember.OMG i'll die laughing if she tinkles goin up the ailse!!!
Reviewer: Sheaden (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 22
Good chapter.
Even though life keep throwing you curve balls the story is great and you have fans. Much love and hope the next chapter is up son
Reviewer: irishwitch (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 22
This is my favorite of all my stories. absolutely yummy.
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 22
I was hoping that would be Jacob in the window! :-D And thanks so much for letting him watch, lol! I'm sure that made his whole week.
Could never get enough of All of Me! It's kind of far-out for my world, but I'm a voyeur so I like to watch. Thanks so much for sharing!
Clicking "Submit" now!
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 22
Fluff is good!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 22
Ah, so it was just Jacob - I take it he works Sundays?
Thanks for answering the question about how Bella would alert her Master if she were gagged, had no buzzer, and was in distress.
We learn a little nit more about Carlisle & Esme.
So Bella makes it to subspace again. It seems as thoguh it takes such extreme measures to get her there, and I can't even begin to imagine headspace you have to be in to write this - wow.
Reviewer: bjelaja (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 22
OMG so hot!!!!!!! Thanks for the chapter.
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 22
wow - that was intense! I could almost feel her anxiety and excitment at wondering who was with her in the room. Great chapter and I loved the outtakes!
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 22
That was interesting. I like how you gave us the insight into Bella's thoughts-it is like she uses this as her drug-she even admits she can forget all the trouble and turmoil. I guess I would never see it that way, but that was very helpful to me to accept her character and how she handles herself.
Reviewer: sheknitsnicely (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 22
Ooooh what's the shit going to be! I'm excited. I thought it was a great chapter. Loving the voyeurism. Thanks! - skn x
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wonderfuly hot, as per usual!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
OK, I want one of those...
Reviewer: xoxokristen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 22
awesome! can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: reblit (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 22
Can you tell me if this, at any point, is going to develop into a love story between Edward and Bella? Or if Edward will become more likeable? He's so misogynistic; letting any man view her and touch her as he treats her like cattle. I know that every once in a while Bella talks about how much she likes it ... but does she really? In equal measure, she is nervous, embarrassed and humiliated by what he does to her. Would a man who loves a woman not let her use the restroom when she needs? Humiliate her in front of other men? Tell the gardener not to let her come? If it's pure dom/sub, I guess all that would happen. But I was hoping it would be more.
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 22
I have to admit I am disapointed, I thought the shit was going to hit the fan. But I guess you enjoy "toying" with us just as Edward does to Bella.
Reviewer: Miss_Beckie_Louise (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 22
Awesome chapter <3'd it.
Update soon
xo Beckie
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 22
mmmmmm ok that was way interesting. i can't wait for may 25th!
Reviewer: khytruckle (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 22
This story is so very different from anything else I've ever read. I can't say that I relate to it very well, but it is fascinating and oddly arousing.
Thanks.
Reviewer: Emmi (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 22
I love the fluff, so it was good to read :D and a light chapter before more serious events is nice to see. The web thing was really interesting :) IDK how you find this kind of stuff :D
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