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Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 23

I am really enjoying this story and I am so glad I found it on here.  I can not wait to see where you take this and I am excited to say the least!  Thank you for sharing your story it is really good!

Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 22

one other thing I want to comment on. In chapter 23 Edward tells Jasper he gets no pleasure from Bella's gag. Sorry, don't buy that for one second. Edward gets pleasure from Domination and that is one of the ultimate forms ESPECIALLY the dinner through the funnel.

Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 23

I guess this is the way some people choose to live but I just don't get it. The whole dinner through the gag thing and letting Jasper watch and Bella... needing it? I'm taking this story off alert. I've written a couple of questions asking for more into Bella's psyche as to why this extreme commitment to this lifestyle is necessary or pleasurable to her and while I know it's difficult to answer everyone I haven't received either an answer or anymore depth within the story to explain. To me it's almost a manual for the lifestyle, a how to, not a why to. I guess I'm not that voyeuristic or I prefer my voyeurism to focus on something I actually find sexy. Without any more answers I just find this disturbing.

Author's Response:

Right now in Bella's world, everything is happy and normal and she doesn't have a whole lot of reason to question the status quo.  She isn't examining what motivates her to do this. 

Events are coming that will change that.

That said, if you aren't enjoying the story, then please feel free to stop reading it.

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 10

Hands down my favorite chapter...I have no words to explain the emotions this one brought out in me. All I can off is this, for a rough as it got, the ending was pure loveing bliss. I can't even begin to thank you enough.

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 9

Now that's what I call a goooood morning!

Excellent chapter, as always!

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 8

Damn, just damn...smokin' chapter!

Thanks for the insight in to Edward's voyeuristic side & Jasper's part in the story as well.

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

Another great chapter!

Tyler is still creepy.

I loved Edward's "hello" to Bella when he got back from picking Jasper up at the airport. As for Jasper's visit & the possiblilty of him moving closer to Edward & Bella...all I'm going to say is "oh boy." Dun, dun, dun... *winks*

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ooooh, you sneaky woman! Here I thought Edward was being shady, but no our boy is smmoth as silk. The way that he put Lauren in her place by having Bella stop by the office was priceless! I'm just hoping Lauren gets the message, but Lauren being Lauren, that's doubtful.

Thanks for explaining Bella's reaction to the previous night's Chamber time, now it all makes sense. And once again, I thoroughly enjoyed seeing Edward's tender side.

Another great chapter, loved every word!

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

Fuckmefabulous chapter! I loved seeing Edward's more tender side.

See, I knew Lauren was not to be trusted! I'm glad that they talked about the situation & that Bella had come up with some suggestions on how to handle her. I think that Edward should talk to Carlisle & Mike, just to cover all the bases.  Non related to that conversation, I think Bella should tell Edward about her little interaction with Tyler, just to be on the safe side.

Once again the thing that bothered me most was the thought of either one of them being with someone else, but that's my issue. Just know that I will be sticking with this story to the end.

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

First off, I forgot tomention in my last review that I neither like or trust Lauren as faras I can throw her.

As for this chapter...the intensity continues & I love it. I can hardly waait to see what they are going to talk about.

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

Another eyeopening chapter, I loved it (I think). I'm still getting used to the intesity of this story, but like I said, I do love it for the most part. In this chapter one thing bothered me even more than Tyler being creepy. And that was when Bella stated that Edward allowed others to use "this body"...that just didn't sit well with me as Edward doesn't seem to be the type to share especially Bella.

Onward...

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 2

Damn, what a chapter! Gotta give Bella mad props...I could never do what she does so willingly for Edward.

~Kat

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well that was intense, to say the very least. I have to admit that I am extremely intrigued & I can't wait to see how this all plays out.

Beuatifully written & flowed like a dream. Thanks so much for sharing.

~Kat

Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 23

Edward is scarily sexy.  Thank you. :)

Reviewer: piccilover33 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

what would happen if bella was on her period :) but love the story

Reviewer: eleonor317 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 23

lmao i loved your hinting LOL great chappie!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 21

ok so is the spidey web thing for real? If so I gotta see pics!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 19

God tell me about it.....my hubby always has something smart to say about it!  Well, why he watches outdoor tv and the whitetail channel...i read!!!!!!!!!

I hope Cauis ends up having nothing of any circumstance!  Jasper will be training with  esme and carlisle..............that's cool....I am glad he won't be under Edward...that might be weird.

SO will there be an Alice?

And of course you were right...lots of my questions have been answered!  That's great!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 18

thank god she told him!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Slimey worm!!!!!!!!!!  He needs to be put in a cock cage! 

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 17

ok so is this club real, or is there a place that you are basing this off of?  Or is it all coming from that deliciously dirty mind of yours? ;)

Reviewer: Jay0404 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 23

oh i cant wait to see what happens! I am enjoying this story immensely and June 8th cannot get here soon enough!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 16

that outtake sounds like fun!   Are they all under one name?

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 15

definitely yummy!  I really like Jasper's character in this and the fact that Edward is so good with him not only as a friend would be, but also as a Training Dom.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 14

I have loved all the Jasper time!  EXCELLENT!!!!!!!  The perv in me wanted more...lol.....but I think you did a great job!

Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hmm, I thought the funnel thing was cruel, especially since he knew her fears. 

I'm interested to see the wedding planner, although it still feels so strange they are getting married.

 

 

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