Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
OMG how hot is this story?? I read it from start to finish before reviewing. WOW, just WOW. Never tried internet sex so don't know how it feels but if it's anything like this I'm not surprised people do it. What a fab story, please post the next chapter soon.....
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Oh Yeah! That's what I'm talkin about!!!!!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
YAY!!!! Thanks for the updates!!
Reviewer: pickeljuice (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Now that was hot! Think I'll have to go have a cigarette for him since he quit! Ya Baby....Can't wait for the next update:)
Reviewer: chishi09 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Hot damn. Been waiting so long for them to get together. I often wondered if it would be ackward. Obviously, it hasn't been. Which is why it was hot!
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
That was hot. I loved how they were able to connect just the same as they did online. I also love how passionate they both were with each other. I cannot wait to see what Edward has planned for the rest of the week. From the looks of it, it will be impressive!
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
OMG, I CANT WAIT FOR 5 DAYS OF THAT. THANKS, UNTIL THEN. THIS IS TRUELY I WONDERFUL, HOTTTT STORY.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
I am so loving that they are finally together. And I really appreciate that they went to dinner first before all the sexing. It shows that there is more to their relationship than sex. And, of course, the sex was HOT!
Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: LittleMissy (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh omg. wow. I loved it. Another part please. :)
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
loved it just freakin loved it!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Loved it! Lucky Bella...
Reviewer: zaiche (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
oh man, this chapter was soo hot...wonderful first time for bella and edward
i loved how edward didn't let her touch herself because he wanted to be the one to make her come, that was a really nice touch:)
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
HOT DAMN!!!!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
excellent!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
OMG! that was hot
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Mm, it's hot in here! Great chapter!
Reviewer: lizann (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Finally! I really loved this chapter. Their meeting was perfect!
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Phew!!! Finally....goin to smoke a cigarette now...
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Ahhhh! Update soon?
Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Oh God, that was so hot! I'm so glad they finally met, although Edward had to be Edward and not only come late but berate her on telling no one.
They seem so good together, can't wait what will happen this week and when they have to return home. It will be a tearfull goodbye, but I can't imagine them wanting to go back to their internet relationship!
Eagerly awaiting an update!
Reviewer: nbpowlk (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 5 ~Desire
umm bella's eyes aren't emerald green, they're brown. lol.
Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Hot. Love them finally together. I'm glad there was no question about seeing one another, they just fell right into it. Keep up the great work. Love it! Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
Great chapter! I'm so glad they are actually together. And the sex was super hot!! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: NICOL3 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
plz add another chapter xx
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
That lemon was amazing, your writing made me all hot and bothered.
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