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Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Viva Las Vegas ~ Rose and Emmett outtake

THIS WAS GOOD REAL GOOD SOUL MATES YES THEY ARE!!!!!!!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!

GO ROSE !!!!NOW THATS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT IF IT FEELS RIGHT DO IT DRAGGIN ASS GETS YOU NO WHERE

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 ~ Change in Plans

HOW SWEET AND ROSE NOTICED EMMETT 'S EYES (HAHA)

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice

HOT DAMN  A STRIPPER POLE 

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

OH HOW SWEET AND FINALLY

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

hun first of all i'll address the a/n i am so sorry that your baby was so early but i'm so happy that he made it and that he is towering over you now i'll move to the story haha i am soooo curious as to what edward's problem is and i feel so very bad for bella and her feeling like she does when i'm sure it is nothing like that, at least when it comes to him not loving her, i'm glad that emmett and rose stood strong and that bella eventually gave them the acceptance rose seemed to be looking for i hope that whatever it is edward gets back to himself soon you are brilliant doll every update you give us is amazing and that is why you will never hear me bitch about the length between updates months, weeks, or days because when you give us them they are written to perfection hope rl treats you well and that the next chapter is easier for you to write :D looking forward to the next update :D

Reviewer: frackandbonechick (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

i am really enjoying this story so far, and kinda wish that real life is like this... anyway... cant wait to read more and i hope that Edward gets out of his funk soon...

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 12 ~ It's So Hard to Say Goodbye

THEY LOVE EACH OTHER THEY NEED TO TELL EACH OTHER

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 11 ~ Cherish the Memories

I HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES WHEN YOU FIND SOMEONE SO PERFECT YOU DON'T WANT TO LOOSE THEM

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Haiti Outtake - Promise Kept

WELL HE DEFINITELY DELIVERED THE GOODS

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 10 ~ Here in New York

OH THIS IS GONNA SUCK WHEN THEY HAVE TO LEAVE EACH OTHER

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

hmmm wonder whats up with edward...feel sorry ofr bella...ud soon

Reviewer: owenic (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

Great chapter.  I really felt Bella's pain, but Edward's moreso.  That God awful silence is like a brick in the stomach and I kept waiting for Bella to cry.

Is the reason Edward is so upset because Emmett and Rose have what he wants (just thinking, "to hell with it" and jumping in with both feet??) or was Edward going to ask Bella to marry him, but felt now he couldnt because Em and Rose beat him to it??

Mmmm, thanks for updating.  Thanks for sharing.  =)

 

 

Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Need

Totally Hot!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

Stop being a douche, Edward lol

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 ~Anxiety

AWE SO SWEET

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Not Backup

A POSSIBLE FACE TO FACE NOW THATS EXCITING

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point

OH PLEASE DON'T FUCK THIS UP BELLA

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 5 ~Desire

WOW

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

interesting response edward is having to rosalie and emmett's marriage. i don't want to speculate, but...

he's jealous.

he's scared that if he doesn't propose, bella will be hurt.

he's afraid to ask in case bella says no.

he's being EDWARD.

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Need

SHE NEEDS TO SEE WHAT HE LOOKS LIKE AND THEN GO PURCHASE THE BEST ONE OUT THERE  CAN YOU IMAGINE EDWARD FUCKIN CULLEN NAKED AND STROKEN HIM SELF TO YOUR WORDS AND ACTIONS HELL YES!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation

OMG  I LIVE FOR THIS SHIT YOU ARE GOOD

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected

WOW THAT WAS GOOD!!!!

Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

Welcome back!  This is one of my favorite stories and I've been anxious for an update. 

Soooooooo, what the heck is the matter with Edward?  Please don't let them break up!  Not after they've waited so long to be together!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence

What the heck is Edward's problem?  okay Rose and Emmett got married and it's a shock, but why treat Bella like nothing.  Affection is just hand holding and chaste kisses.  What is going on in your mind?  Edward is hurting Bella's feelings, she is feeling rejection and unwanted.  She took her time to visit you in Chicago.  Edward wanted Bella to meet his parents.  Is he ashamed of Bella because of the website they met on.  I know it's not because he doesn't care about her.  He does.  Is this something to do with Rose moving to Chicago and Bella won't yet.  She only has a few more months to complete her degree.  I would think they could survive a couple more months separation.  Edward answering the work call for brief meeting.  I wouldn't be surprised if Bella doesn't just pack up and head back to LA.  Be a big surprise to Edward and might make him realize how his shutting her out is hurting her and their relationship.

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