Reviewer: marybetherrrrs (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
Holy fucking shit! This is bloody fantastic. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: JustineNicole (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
uh..wow. Yep, wow. She's one lucky girl. Hot chapter. I am curious to see the fallout from this escapade. Ahhhh-mazing!
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
*blushes* [looking around tyring to appear innocent]
Yeah umm the chapter was umm kinda well ...kinda f'n awesome!!!
And where can i get a guy w/o a need for any down time that can give 5 freaking Big "O"s in 1 night??
Reviewer: armywife (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
are you going to write a sequal to this?if you are i cant wait bc i loved this story!!!!
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
that was fucking awesome and even though I hate to say it..so so worth the wait...you are incredible and I would read anything u wrote..even if it wasn't twilight...can't even believe I said that,,,lol
Reviewer: jesabaker (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
I would just like to say that this is one of the best fanfic's i have ever read. So gripping and I hung on to each update.. LOVELOVELOVE both Edward and Bella in this story. I can't even say enough great things about it!! I am hanging on to all other story that come from hunterhunting and am throughly enjoying her new story MOB!!
Reviewer: kryjen (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
All I can say is I think I need a shower now. I mean HOLY FUCK! Damn I wish I had a peen handy because that was some hot stuff and now I'm horny as hell! Thanks for that by the way! In a word, this was AWESOME!
Reviewer: JustineNicole (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
What a beautiful beginning! I love your descriptions. I can actually see these things happening, see their faces and feel the emotions! Fantastic!
Reviewer: HRiffner (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
There are no words. Best book I have EVER read! Best Chapter EVER!
Reviewer: Yadira_Haddock (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
loving this story cant wait for next chapter!!!!!!
Reviewer: parker137 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
I read the first several chapters of CM&IA this weekend again. I forgot how much I really love the begining of the story. I love seeing how they got to know one another after knowing how the end up. Unfortunately, I read on my phone and cannot review on Twilighted for some techy reason- iPhone must not support something about it. Thanks again for your writing!
Reviewer: EsmeC (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
Jesus Christ, that shit was hot. Crazy, intensely hot. Thank you.
Reviewer: daniilsihastrul (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
I wanted so much to read the story on FFnet, but then I found out it was pulled off! I’m glad I found it here. Well, the start is good, since I’m more than willing to get to the next chapter!
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
whoa... that is some serious smut-writing skillz!!!!! Where can I get an Edward like that? *melts*
He's a possessive mofo isn't he? But oh so mezmorizing!!! <3
Reviewer: saunett08 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
Yay!
Reviewer: lectrice34 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
Edward in tune with Alice, not just brothers and sister but intune emotionationally and otherwordly.
Reviewer: nolachic504 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
I am exhausted and in desperate need of a cigarette... and I don't even smoke.... Loving the story so far.
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
Such an awesome beginning! Looking forward to the rest! <3
Reviewer: Edwardismyherion (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
Hot Diggied dam and now i cait wait for them to finally have the "Talk"
Reviewer: amc (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
Reviewer: swannygirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
Reviewer: BellaDonnaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
Wow. W.O.W. I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters because I couldn't stop reading. I just went from one chapter to the next. I'm addicted like Edward is to Bella. Umm, let's see... I was with Edward about the clit piercing, I really felt like Bella should have just talked to him about being in control. Edward wasn't fucking with her, he was legitimately freaked. But I have to remember that Bella's just 21, and maybe this Edward wouldn't have responded to communication. Although I want to think he would, he's a freakin' genius. Anyway, honestly, this is how you write fan fiction! This story is awesome. I love how you carry character traits and situations from the original, but make them completely yours. And the sex... finally! So hot. And I CANNOT wait for Edward to go from saying "I love fucking you, Bella." to "I fucking love you, Bella." I hope he does. Of course, this story is like, already written, so I can only hope... Anyway, off the the next chapter. m
Reviewer: toodamnoldforthis (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
Um...wow! I have to go "take care of something", then I'll read more!
Reviewer: Edwardismyherion (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
Very good chapter can't wait to read more.I have been watching this story from the begining and i am so glad it's done now so i can read it.Off to read the next chapter keep up the great work Hun!!!
Reviewer: Love Bites (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming
After Chapter 1 . . . I hooked! I guess it will be a night of no sleep . . . I'll be reading til dawn!
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