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Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Dare
that was jokes. i needed some comedy after reading quite a few of ure stories.
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Superwoman
great story. You are amazing with the ideas you come up with. This one is hysterical! Hope you are going to continue it!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Superwoman
Great chapter. Can't believe Edward let her walk away! GO DEV! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:34 AM · On: She Does What Now?
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Superwoman
Awww :(
GO DEV!!!! But I want to know.. who is Bella? Edward is right.. agent, actress, nuerse? Update soon!
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:13 AM · On: She Does What Now?
Edward vomits when he smells blood! Hahaha And Emmett.. even when his wife is giving birth he jokes like that.
“What? I’ve been a bad boy.” That was the best line!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Superwoman
I can't wait to see what happens next, please don't keep us all waiting to long to find out what Dev and the trusty Bazooka get up to. And Edward had better be there when Bella gets back, or there will be some family members ready to hurt him in all sorts of different ways.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:45 PM · On: She Does What Now?
oh god, dare I ask what else could possibly go wrong. Great chapter, very entertaining, I can't wait to se who shows up next, or faints, what ever comes first.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:38 PM · On: ETA Six Minutes
Can't wait to find out more about Bella's Boss who just called, nor can I wait to see what Emmett and Rosalie have. I love Edwards idea for lots and lot's of condoms, but I don't think Charlie was as keen on Edward having a need for them.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Shotgun Shells
I am loving charlie almost as much as Edwards cowardly Dev and Angel. I can't wait to see what happens the next morning. Especially if Edwards marks on Bella are noticable.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Payback
oh daddy, this could get very interesting, read painful for Edward. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Little Miss
oh boy, I am still loving the angel and Devil, not to mention Edward asking Bella to be his girlfriend. Emmett was as entertaining as always, but I wonder who had his spidey sense tingling. I can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Leather and Kisses
I am really loveing Edwards little angle and devil. I can't wait to see what they get up to in the next chapter. Especially if Charlie makes an appearance.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Bars
oh ues Emmett is very entertaining. I can't wait to see what happens next. This story is great, I am loving it, well written and very amusing. I can't wait to see what happens when the truth comes out.
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Shotgun Shells
I loved Dev's POV! And Angle is not that good. I know it.
The bullets, I like Charlie more and more!
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Payback
Hahahahaha FISH?!?! Charlie is cruel, I love him. In my opinion Jasper had it worse than Emmett.
'tittie twister' Let's hope Charlie didn't hear that.
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Little Miss
Spidey sexdar?!?! Only Emmett!
I hope he doesn't ruin the lucky night for someone!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:46 AM · On: The Purse
Hahahah, he was humming along! Just like Jasper said! This was brilliant! I loved this. It was really funny. Especially Edward's reactions to Bella when she told him that she knew him and Emmett/Alice.
I can't wait to read the rest, although I might have to read it some other time.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Dare
vegetarianvamps told me to read this story. So I am :)
This first chapter made me laugh so much, especially with the way Jasper was describing Edward. He is such an idiot. He actually kept running! Lol! That made me laugh so much when they both said that it was a draw.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Superwoman
yeah GO Dev GO!!!! Ooo I cant wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Superwoman
hmm I know Edward was overloaded with all the shocks in such a short time frame, but I'm disappointed in him for not getting more than two words out, and none of them meaningful... hell, going for the non-verbal hug would've been something. The poor boy seems to have totally zoned out though hehe
Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Little Miss
for emmett, spidey sexdar would be the PERFECT vampire gift!!
this story is making me ROFLMAO! my husband probably thinks i'm nuts cackling away at a story at 2:30am!! haha
Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Lojack
it's a good day when the little jerks on your sholders are doing the macarena! haha
Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 08:41 PM · On: The Purse
fiessty bella kills me! it's great when "the mark" plays along, and not to mention, i've pulled stupid stunts while humming mission impossible myself! LMAO!!!
this story is a roit! thanks sooo much for writing it!!
ginger
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Superwoman
This story is a totally unexpected riot. Thanks for the comic relief!
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