I feel sorry for Edward :( Even though he's lied and been a jerk etc, but he loves her,

and what can I say about Bella?! Marcus, Felix, Edward and Demitri all after her, the word selfish springs to mind, I want me some vampire! :L

Great story, faved :)

Nice chapter! keep up the good work!

i am so in love with this fanfiction

i always like reading stories were bella is a vampire

SUCH A CLIFFHANGER. you have GOT to update fast!!!!  :)) I loovvee it.

Oh dear lord honey this story is magnificent and so spellbinding. I do a happy dance everytime I get a notice that this is in. I lost this story once when my computer went down and spent the next two hours trying to get it back. It was well worth the time. The one shot sounds fantastic and can't wait to read it.

Moving huh...sigh...well I wish you well and hope you don't lose to much net time *wink* Hope all goes well and take care

Yes Bella! Do it girl...take Marcus up on is offer lol

I wonder if Edward is willing to fight for their relationship now? ={

I love how assertive and firm Bella is being...I hate reading stories in which she is helpless of overly forgiving. I also like how supportive the Cullen's are being towards her.

Great add!

 

 

OMG, OMG AND OH YEAH... OMG!!!!!!!!!!! POOR EDWARD EVERY1 WAS SOOO MEAN TO HIM I CNT BELIEVE THEY BEAT HIM UP!!!! AND CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER U FREAKING ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Truley enjoying this tale - and I love Bella's personaility.  I love how you have the Cullen family chipping away (very slowly) at her armor as you steer Bella towards her "past."  I just reread the prologue again, and I must admit I'm getting anxious.  Awesome writing - and look forward to more reading!

PLEASE CONTINE! I lov this story, and to be honest I really dont want Bella and Edward to get back together. Isabella isn't right for Edward, and I would hate to see her go back to timid Bella because of him. I actually really like her with Marcus, he was one of my favourite characters in the books and I think Isabella would make a good queen. Please dont put them back together!

OH MY GOD!!!

That was just evil, to put that teaser.... but more chances than one, someone will walk in, she'll pull back, or it'll just be a kiss on the cheek or forehead...

I liked the juxtoposition in Esme's statement: "We had lost the child we’d had the longest amount of time and the one we had for the shortest."

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As always I love reading you're updates!  You rock!

I love the Jasper and Rose input in this chapter.  I think it added a lot.  Emo Edward needs to buck up, be the tough vamp he can be and start working on winning Bella back! 

I am so intrigued with the love relationship btw Aro and Bella.  Humm... and Poor Demetri, I do hope you let him down gently or let him fall for someone else.  He is such a sweety...

Good luck with your move!  That is never fun!  I will miss your updates, but I am looking forward to your one-shot!  :)  Thanks for writing!