Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Your writing is captivating as ever. But I still can't see HEA for Bella and Edward in this story((((
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Ugh... is it wrong to be dreading the next chapter?? I do believe Bella's scream will push Edward over the edge.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
quite the fight a brewing
Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
That was exciting! I was so disappointed not to see the Edward/Bella confrontation, but you more than made up for it with this riveting chapter.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Yikes! He'd better think fast to keep the Volturi away! He should not have been so monstrous to the monsignor! Love your story, thanks for not having Edward kill Jake, as dumb as he is. Can't wait for more, I missed you!
Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Another great chapter! You have me on the edge of my seat as to what happens next!
P.S. Loved the fight/interaction with Edward & Jacob... like a big pissing contest!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
so glad you updated. Crazy wolves I can't believe them. update soon
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
OH man, I can't wait for more...
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
You have really painted Bella and Edward into a corner, haven't you? The Quileutes as well.
I am loving every single second and am looking forward to seeing how Bella and Edward get out of this alive and together.
HEA, right?
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Oh my.
I feel just awful for Edward. I of course want him to be successful with Bella, but he didn't get to tell her in the way he had hoped. Jacob certainly earned the epithets of "volatile" and "dangerous" didn't he?
And then Edward got rather crude...for Edward...which surprised me. I was shocked he'd refer to the night's lovemaking while making his case (?) to Jacob. It doesn't seem like him to do so.
Can't imagine the wolves actually following through and harming a human Bella. They might be angry, but they're bound to protect human life.
I wonder very much what's next for these guys!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Jake is totally unredeemable. What is he thinking?
Great fight scene!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
WOWOWOW! I read this so fast because of the action sequences that I had to go back and reread the chapter! LOL I am not complaining. I think I was holding my breath.
I hope your holidays were restful. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Dramatic update. Jake was an arrogant idiot. Edward shouldhave killed him, afterall he attacked him first. I hope that Bella is OK. Update soon. Happy New Year.
Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
AWESOME EXCITING CHAPTER!!!
I look forward to reading more more more!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
I kind of like cocky Edward but I think it will come back to bite him. Nice chapter.
Reviewer: fadingembers (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
Ah! Exciting! I am anxiously awaiting to see the next conversation between B & E :)
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves
another good chapter thanks
Reviewer: Mrs Buckets (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind
I've just read all 22 chapters in a single sitting, and you leave me with a cliffie! :D Great story, this is the first fic I've seen with religion in it- you make it work well, I love it, and I'm a Catholic. Now update, update, update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Update is in the queue!
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind
Great job. This was a really good new way of Bella finding out about Edward and Jake. Really one more plausible. Scream your lungs out and run for your life. LOL. Can't wait util Jan 3rd to read the new update.
~Shani
Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews! Its been fun seeing how many people enjoy Bella's screaming reaction! Update is in the queue, and thanks again!
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 21 Fusion
That was beautiful. I love that Bella showed Edward that he was ticklish. That was a great idea to put in the story. You have a fantastic unique story. Thank you for bringing this to us.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 20 Returning Home
This is so good girl. It's like a sultry dark cloudy dream with sexual tension. *fans self*
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
That was good. Great little lemon.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 No Rest For The Wicked
O found it at Most Recent here on the site awahile back and the when I saw a recent update I wrote down the name to come back and read it. Everytime I'm on this site I go to that part to see who has uploaded their stories. I read the premise and look at how many reviews. If the story sounds good I will read it regardless of how few reviews it has received.
And no I have never seen any of your stories here or over at fanfiction.net
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 3 Innocence and Ecstasy
Love Darkward!!!
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 2 Dark Angel
I love the religion part. I'm christian and of course it doesn't bother me. Really those people need to find the Lord and start a relationship with him. It's not about religion, but a relationship with the Lord. That's why so many have turned away from him. They let what man say or a misconception of the Bible lead them away from his presence. God wants us to talk with him and share our fears and doubts so that he can turn it all around for the good. He wants to bless us not curse us. He wants us to go to church and worship and praise his holy name. Lift him up and he will lift us up when we fall. I'm Baptist and I look at other preachers on TBN breaking down the word of God so that we can understand what he wants from us. I go to the same church I've been going to all my life. My preacher also knows how to break down the word and we have Bible study on Wed's. See, you have to read the word. Get a great Bible that simplifies what the word is saying. So many people aren't in a great church that teaches them the word of God. So things get pushed aside and they never feel close to God. Anyway, love your story and can't wait to read the rest of it.
~Shani
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