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Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 12 Cygnus
The weaving of the Yeats poem into the plot couldn't be more perfect! Awesome!
Reviewer: MsLydia (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
MMM I love it. The ONLY thing that could make this story better is either a longer chapter or more frequent postings. ;)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
ah bella listen and hear what he isnt saying he wants you
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Yeah! Edward's come to save her
Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Wow EXCELLENT chapter! I enjoyed seeing Bella calm down a bit and actually ask some pertinent questions. I am anxious to see how she intakes the information Edward is getting ready to share.
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 10 Choices
You write Carlisle so well!
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
OK! Nightmares if I do get to bed tonight!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Edward better brace himself, because this Bella with her religious beliefs could be a little tough to persuade into turning. The irony of it.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
This is quite an optimistic chapter, really. But I saw you tweeted that the next chapter is all heartfail so I'm all pensive and worried.
I always enjoy your Edward. He's so rich and layered.
His theology and personal hermeneutic is very canon, I think, and revelatory. I'm looking forward to how desperate he will find himself in the future.
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 7 Apologies to Isabella
I just found your story and am impressed! I have a feeling I will be up most of the night. 19 chapters to go! Yeah!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
I'm reading so many fics right now were there are all these secrets. This story is refreshing because Edward doesn't have time to beat around the bush. Everything has to be laid out there and dealt with. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Gin_Mildred (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
lovely!
Reviewer: dreamzuvedward (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Oh how I love this Edward! So caring and considerate in spite of the wolves meddling! Can you tell I am Team Edward? haha. And Bella, continuing to be so brave with so many earth-shattering revelations. Hope she can hang on to just give Edward a chance. LOVE your writing!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
I love that she is giving him the chance to tell his story. I love that he is taking the leap to tell it. He could never have full happiness unless she willingly accepts all of him and offers herself to him. On Bella's part, she is going to need to weigh what her life offers her as opposed to what Edward offers her. Will undying, unconditional love be enough for her? Can she be content with saving one of the flock, or will she turn her back on him?
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Can't wait for more!!!! I really want him to share everything! I'm on the edge of my seat!
Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 No Rest For The Wicked
You asked how I found this story, I found it in the AU catagory and read the description. I almost passed on it not knowing if this was the kind of story I was looking for tonight. I'm glad I gave it a chance, you have drawn me into this little world and I'll be adding you to my fave stories before I'm done reading tonight. Looking forward to frequent updates!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Oh, poord scared Edward. He needs to be honest with her. She feels the connection, too. He needs to trust in that. I love this story so very much!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Bella is a very receptive and fair person. She is handling her new surroundings with grace.
What I'm concerned about is the Volturi.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
at least she is not freaking out this morning
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Wow. This is quite amazing. The lamb/wolf thing is spectacular. Please know I'm not criticizing, but your story moves very, very slowly.
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Wonderful as always. I like the small steps and concessions they are giving to each other. It will go a long way to building their mutual trust.
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Another great chapter - can't wait for Edward to tell about his diet and Bella's reaction.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Wonder why no one answered at home, or why he didnt try their cell phones? Another fantastic update...
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 25 Before The Fire
Well... I'm finally caught up. Dammit....
I really like that this Bella had some sort of sense of self preservation when the supernatural was finally revealed to her. However, the connection with Edward was forged deeply in advance. That was a good thing. I think this was good, cathartic even, for her to be able to learn everything all at once. There are still many obstacles coming, but I think she will stay with Edward through it. She can feel the pull even now, even when she was most afraid. I think it will be solidified as she and Edward face all the hurdles to come.
Great work :)
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind
Gah! I hate when I catch up to where the author is and I have to wait for updates! Only one more 'next' ... You sure have stirred up a hornets nest between the wolves and vamps! And now they'll all have to deal with the Volturi! This could go so many different ways! Everything's been great so far. Keep up the great work!
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