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Reviewer: GoldieLucks (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 May God Have Mercy
Yeah, that felt good to read! No mercy. I thought it was cool that you took us to the bottom of the water where he leaves the bodies. And the sealing of the wound...nothing short of awesome!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 May God Have Mercy
Ah, Edward in a rage! Magnificent! Messy, but...yeah. The decapitation was vividly captured!
Nice "clean up the damsel" moment... Hot. Sweet. I can see her blush. :)
I appreciate Edward's levels of vulnerability even while he is so decisive in so many ways. This is SUCH an amazing portrayal.
Reviewer: Jocasta (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Holy muggle on a piece of bread! That was amazing! I was scared for Bella and wondered how far it would go before Edward saved her, because, come on, it's Edward. He's Bella's personal stalker! He's always close by! LOL!
This was an exceptional update and I can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: Hey, thank you for all your reviews! You were right, of course, Edward has to save her. We'll get his POV next, its in the queue. Thank you!
Reviewer: Jocasta (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 7 Apologies to Isabella
I had a very bad thought...I mean...Father Brian isn't the dude from the gas station is he? I know that's just me using the stereotypical preacher guy being a child molestor...but...that's not true is it?
Anyways, I'm glad Edward is back on his bike and is heading back to Seattle. He needs to suck it up and deal with Bella being his one and only. :D :D
I have a question...and then I'm off to the last updated chapter...where is Edward's litany? I enjoyed reading the names, wondering if he'd killed anyone I know. LOL!
Great update and I'm falling more in love with this story as it progresses!! :D
Reviewer: Jocasta (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 6 Many Mysteries
I took way too long to get to this update, and I apologize for that. I've been busy with my own fanfics over on ff.net and I've neglected some of my more favorite stories; like yours.
But, I'm back! LOL!
I feel so sad for Bella and am so angry with Jake. I'm anxious to move on and see where Edward is now: physically (Is he back in Seattle?) and emotionally (Has he given up with trying to fight against Bella and fate?).
I'll see you at the end of chapter seven. :D
Reviewer: StephanieDeShaw (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
UPDATE UPDATE! im holding my breath, what an amazing story!
Author's Response: Take a breath! Its in the queue! :-)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Vaderian (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Trouble does follow our Bella everywhere, doesn't it? Every chapter is as interesting as the next. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, its in the queue!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Well, I doupt that she'll be walking alone again for a very long time. I'm glad Edward was there to save her, even though it was very close to being too late. I'm even more pleased with him that he was able to let her go. Alice must be chearing him on from Forks right about now.
Author's Response: I'm sure! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Marykate 113 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
I'm excited to see how this goes from here... Add more soon!
Author's Response: Its in the queue! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Great story! I really am enjoying it!! Can't wait for more! I found this by accident actually!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Wow! This chapter was gripping! I can't wait to see the update.
Author's Response: On its way, thanks!
Reviewer: lailax3 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
i love this story! i can't wait for you to update. i love your writing style; it's so eloquent and just so real. please update soon!
Author's Response: Well, thank you so much!
Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
That was great! Where is Edward?! Where is EDWARD?! Oh. There he is! Very well done! What took him so long? lol, I was pretty mad at him. Silly, huh.
Author's Response: Edward's POV is up next so you get a chance to hear where he was. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
thank heavens, its about time he showed up i was getting worried
Author's Response: He wouldn't let that happen to Bella! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
EEEKKK! Very graphic and well written chapter!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 Innocence and Ecstasy
I love dark Edward too! Just started reading this. Can't wait to read more, but had to leave you a note saying how good it is so far! Can't wait til I can read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Nice timing there Edward! hehe
Author's Response: He made it, just barely! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Oh god, poor Bella, what a nightmare. I'm so glad Edward got to her in time. I love the way you write this, it seems so real!
Author's Response: Thank you! More is in the queue!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Wow! That was close! I'd like to see it from EPOV so we can know where the hell he was that he didn't get there first! :)
Author's Response: He's coming, next chapter is Edwards POV. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Hi, the only thing I really dislike in this story is the banner. Canìt you have a better one? I am not sure, because I am Italian, but do you call what he is wearing a wifebeater? (canottiera in Italian). It is, at best, a homely garment and absolutely not suited to your Edward (not to SM's or any vamp Edward).
The Edward you are giving us is dark, sexy as hell, and about to repent and find true love (I hope). So please find a more compelling image for him. I will continue reading of course, curious about your too religious Bella too,
Author's Response: "A homely garment" I like that description! I guess I like this banner because of the brooding sense which is I think appropriate for the story. I also have another banner that I may put up when I get some time.
Thanks for reviewing, hope you're enjpoying the story!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
OMG I'm glad he got there in time! Bella has had enough in her past so she so deserves some happiness with her "dark angel" Great story, you make my feel like I am right there with Bella! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Next chapter is in the queue! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GoldieLucks (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
I'm confident you'll let Edward sink into these thugs, no mercy! It would be a nice justice, since his last attempt to handle things civilly went in vain.
A sad one to read, but B&E will surely have much to learn from each other after this.
Author's Response: No mercy it is! Next chapter is in the queue. thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: A_Cullen_Wannabe (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
I'm really looking forward to more. I planned to go to bed an hour ago and yet here I am not able to lay down until I was caught up! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, next chapter is in the queue!
Reviewer: A_Cullen_Wannabe (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 No Rest For The Wicked
This is really great...very original. I found it just by browsing the most recent updates tab on here when I logged on.
Author's Response: Thanks for coming by! I glad you're enjoying.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Poor Edward, he did what he could to save those boys short of tying the kidnapper up in the gas station bathroom, and it wasn't enough. At least he got to Isabella in time though, sadly not a bit earlier. She'd definitely think he's an angel now, I think.
Author's Response: Yes, and she'll have even more evidence,soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
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