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Reviewer: faith3 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Wow, that was one heart-stopping kiss!!! Great chapter.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Wow a save from the fire and a first kiss...dear lord you know how to get a heart racing...was a magnificent chapter
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
I'm so glad I added this story to my favorites.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
it was so tender
Reviewer: marie-jo (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Love love love the new chapter! I adore this story of your, it is so good! I like how Bella and Edward are slowly getting to know each other. I am so happy that they finally kiss! And what a kiss. WOW! I must say I completely understand Bella when she did not want the kiss to end.
Cannot wait until next Sunday to read Edward POV!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
His closeness, his incredible scent, his sheer physical presence was making every nerve in my body sing. I’d been awakened to a state of hypersensitivity. I could feel the pinching of my shoes, how my jeans hugged my thighs tightly, the smooth cotton knit of my shirt on my belly and shoulders, the tight band of my bra binding me, the cooler night air as it grazed my arms and face, the door against my back, but most of all the energy pouring from him, saturating me and the way his cool breath grazed against my face and hair.
He was just inches from me, and still I stared at his shirt and collar, almost afraid to raise my to see the naked vulnerability on his face.
He leaned toward me until his mouth was just inches from mine. “I’m going to kiss you now.”
Perfect title to this chapter. Ooooh baby!
Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
awesome as before :) love them!!! Please continue!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you-working on it!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
“Harder to stop from doing what I want to, to continue this.”.....He smiled, the most enchanting crooked smile and I was glad for the door behind my back, holding me up. “Good night, Bella.”.....I love this!
Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Love this story! Great characterization! I watch for every new chapter.
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection
I am absolutely in love with this. Ive never came across a story that Bella was deeply religious before. Its a nice change.
Cant wait to find out what happens next!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
A reluctant hero. I’m still tingling from that kiss! Miraculous indeed.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
That was lovely. I absolutely adore your story.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Wow, Edward really risked everything by going into that burning building. He risked being discovered, he risked being burned to death, literally, his very existence snuffed out.
The kiss was just wonderful. Bella is falling/fallen in love, hasn't she?
Reviewer: cullencrazed2 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Gahhh...wahhhh...ohhhmy...I'm tingling to pieces.
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Another really awesome chapter! :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Hey! I voted for you-I hope you win! So, what part of that speech/kiss was spontaneous and what part was planned seduction by Edward to gain Bella's desire to become like him? It was smooth, sexy, and dazzling! I want more!
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection
Maudette Perkins?! And now you're just stealing from Trueblood. All this time I thought you were using a name generator.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection
Maudette Perkins?! And now you're just stealing from Trueblood. All this time I thought you were using a name generator.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection
Corbin Dallas?! Oh, my god! Edward killed Bruce Willis?
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Great chapter. I like how their relationship is developing
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Cool beans Congratulations!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
OMG, this was fantastic. You paint the picture so well. I can almost feel the rain pouring off the porch and dripping onto the ground. And this is so romantic. Love it. Update soon?
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
A bold Edward is a sexy as hell Edward, that is for sure...
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
I vited for you. Good luck and I hope you win!
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