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Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire
I sure do hope that Edward has the satisfaction of a lover soon! I can't wait to read that chapter! ;-)
Reviewer: evieeden (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire
Yay! Edward beat up he wolves...well, one of them anyway. I approve and ask for more wolf-beatings in the future. Also a fan of the dog jokes. Can you tell which team I'm on? :)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire
Wow... I am enjoying these changes in Edward. You've written him so remarkably well! Yes, he's a bad boy any girl would want to take in hand, I imagine...
Great moment @ the gas station. Very nice. I'm relieved that no blood/venom was shed and got a kick out of Edward's surface-cavalierism.
I did feel for him and the three x-rated sets of, erm, brain waves. You know we're all rooting for him to join the "satisfied lover" contingent and I'm just wondering what obstacles will be in place before he gets there?
Another gripping, enthralling chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad you are enjoying!
As for obstacles, you've already met most of them, its just what pops its head up first!
Reviewer: eoanne (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 5 No Rest For The Wicked
my daughter added it to the list...very nice work!!
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 12 Cygnus
ch 12 great job on the glamouring and including Yeats
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad you;re enjoying!
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 11 Chariot Ride
ch 11 is terrific. :)
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 10 Choices
Nice ch 10. I like the way that good feeling are uncomfortable for him as he 'thaws out'.
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 9 May God Have Mercy
Great balance between dark and emotional. Often the Darkward stories make him so cold and hard that he seems to feel nothing whatsoever. Not the case here. Great story. (So sad about the 2 kids though...)
Reviewer: twilightaddict40 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied
You are what you eat......LOL!!!!!!! I love it!
Author's Response: ;-) Thanks!
Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection
Maudette Perkins
wow. that is a character from True Blood.
Did you mean to insert her name? I love it!
This is a terrific story. I have been swept away by it. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Yes, Maudette was in there, if you check previous litanies, yu'll probably recognize a few other names as well. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: fandjio (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
It's a wonderful story. I like everything in the story (the characters, the plot).
Thank you for writting it
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Wow~Lucky Bella! Great chapter
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Oh god, I wanted more!!! That was incredible.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
That kiss was awesome, sweet Jesus girl, and I loved how he left her right their, feeling like the rest of us reading your story were feeling! Glad you are flowing your story at a nice pace and didn't feel the need to let a lemon happen (although I hope they do happen)
Once again your writing is unique and beautiful and I have voted for you when voting first started! Your story is just perfect!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Dear Lord, I felt that kiss in MY core as well!!! Now we are getting somewhere. He is opening up to her, letting her see more of who is really is. He wants her to really know him. I am thrilled that he kissed her. Her physical response to him had to be obvious. He knows how much she wants him. Edward saving the child was great. He has changed so much, because of Bella. He probably doesn't even realize the depth of it. Brilliant update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: twilio (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
amazing. absolutely love it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
AHHHH I freaking loved it....intense kissing scenes are always high up on my loveable list hahaha...pms please
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
What a delicious kiss! Too bad it had to stop...
I especially loved this:
“What is it you need?” I whispered
He took the last step so he was right in front of me. “Everything.”
I just love your characterization of Bella and Edward so much. I love the way you dove into the deep things in this story, and the fact that these characters are flawed. In this chapter, he risks discovery just to make her happy. Interestisng that the people at the fire would instantly suspect that the hero is the perpetrator. Sounds like an accurate portrayal of human nature.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
hmm "kissed by a miracle"; I think we all want that on some level? :)
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
When I look at the little Review box after reading all 17 chapters straight through I feel I must write something in appreciation. But it's hard to put thoughts down in writing. Which makes me appreciate you and the other great writers on Twilighted even more.
What am I liking most about Litany? Everything, really. The story flows so well. Your characters evolve but stay true to themselves. They are recognizably the Twilight characters we know and love, but you definitely put your own stamp on them as well. I also like the pace you've set for your story, a real nice slow burn.
A really great story pulls the reader along - what next? Please, I need to know what happens next! Your story is like that. (Yes, I know it drives some authors nuts to get screen after screen of reviews saying "Update soon.") I also like the pace you've set for your story, a real nice slow burn.
I expect that eventually Bella will confess the abortion to Edward, not realizing he already knows, and that we haven't seen the last of Jake. I am also wondering about the presence of the Monsignor and whether his presence is foreshadowing the arrival of the Volturi into this story. Once Bella figures out Edward's secret [and she will, she's very perceptive and Edward isn't being very careful] the Volturi will demand Bella's transformation or death if they are aware of her existense.
Thank you for a qwonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank yu for the very kind words. You also seem very perceptive about where this story is headed! Thanks!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: Chalice Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Yummmy kiss!
Hero Edward seems like he should be cliche, but somehow the all-consuming kiss following the selfless rescue of a small child is just perfect for this story.
Will Bella continue to think Edward is a miracle when she finds out he was the self-appointed vengeful bitch slap hand of God for the past several decades?
Hmmm..
Author's Response: "the self-appointed vengeful bitch slap hand of God"- Love it!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Loved this update.
Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
OMG I really loved this chapter. The kiss was breath taking. Can`t wait for more. ;-)
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 17 Burning
Oh this was such a GREAT chapter! I'm really into this story and I'm always excited when I see this updated! Also want to thank you for putting up the links for the awards so that we readers can vote! Which I did do at both locations. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you;re enjoying and thanks for voting!
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