Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Closer
This was FABULOUS!!! I cried, I screemed, everything... I am so excited that some communication has started even if Bella was drunk. I am so anxious for those two to talk and healing to begin....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter! Methinks it would have taken a lot longer to get to this point without this happening...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: landslide (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Closer
WOW, I'M DYING INSIDE FOR THE BOTH OF THEM! Great, great, great chapter!
Author's Response: They are both so broken, just in different ways. Lots of healing that needs to happen.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Closer
love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: angela2805 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Closer
Wow that chapter was awesome...great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Openhome (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Closer
Oh, thank you for letting the emotions play out and letting the healing take more than a single chapter! Beautifully written again. I love the road they are on, and I love that they have to work at forgiveness. Thank you for that!
Author's Response: Fixing this magnitude of damage will definitely take time.
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Closer
ahhhh alcohol always makes everything come out in the open! So Bella has finally told Edward that she has always loved him...but will she remember ANY of this? Does Edward grasp how hurt she is? Where do they go from here...Great chappie.
Author's Response: We can only hope that she remembers some of it. I do think Edward is getting an idea of how broken she really is, although you will find out for sure in the next chapter.
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Closer
That was intense. It is good that Bella and Edward have started to work through everything that has happened over the last eight years. Even if it took lots of alcohol to bring it around, it is a good thing. I just hope that in the morning when the alcohol wears off, that Bella remembers what they have talked about and is still willing to stand up for herself and speak how she feels. I cannot wait to see what the morning after looks like. I am sure that Bella will have one major hangover!
Author's Response: We can only hope that she remembers some of it. However, I think that without the liquid courage, there is no way that they could have had this conversation, as... interesting... as it was a times.
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Closer
Oh Ladies, I find myself a bit numb after reading this chapter. I have listened to your song choices and now I listen to Her Diamonds by Rob Thomas. It seems our dynamic duo can not win for losing no matter what.
I loved that Emmett was able to bring Bella out of her shell to rap with him. It was a fun moment to read. One cannot help but wonder just how long it has been since she has had such a fun interaction with another human.
Perhaps the evening would have ended differently had it not been for Irina's and Lauren's reactions toward Edward. There is no doubt that this is not the first time they've thrown themselves at him. I'm sure that had Bella not left the table and ended up on the dance floor we would have seen more of the same and what has become of Edward's life. But it wasn't necessary as we got the picture loud and clear.
The alcohol made Bella very uninhibited, no more hiding in a dark corner away from those that might look at her. Once she entered the dance floor it was only natural for a random guys to want to join her in the seductive dance, it is as if they saw her as a whore. And I must be more emotionally invested in this story than I thought because the tears began to streak down my own face.
It was good that Edward was able to get her out of there. Maybe it was a good thing that she had had too much to drink as she was able to open up. I can't believe I actually giggled at Bella's words about Edward's penis. But too soon we were thrown back into the angst of the story. Her admission about leaving and that she should not have come back brought a fresh wave of tears. But it was his plea to her to stay with him for the night that leaves me with a heavy heart.
Sometimes I forget how difficult the teen years can be. E/B were a lifeline for one another. How was a young, naive Edward to know that a few words, 8 years ago could cause aweak link in that lifelife to snap and so completely break both of them?
Fuck Me! Am I becoming a drama queen or what?
Sandra
Author's Response: The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter! It likely would have taken much more time to get to this point when sober. And she certainly had her say... Alas, will she remember?
There is still so much for these two to repair, but no one is without hope.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: handiangel (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Closer
Drunkella is awesome... I love her! Made me snort (oh-so-ladylike) with laughter... then it turned all angsty. Talk about an emotional rollercoaster... lol
And bring naked ex-Chub-now-Chiselward back! Lol
x
Author's Response: Drunkella lost her filter, that's for sure! All over the map!
We'll bring nekky Chubward back if you give us nekky Tudorward with a jaunty crown....
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Closer
Great chapter! Loved the way she yelled at mike. The things she said to Edward were pretty funny.
Author's Response: The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Closer
"Lauren.Fucking.Mallory?...What?...No...Edward and… Lauren Mallory?...I was going to be violently ill."...Me, too...Oh and I'm crying my eyes out, too
This kills me:“How many, Edward? How many of them? How many did you fuck? How many? Lauren? Lauren Mallory? She… she… she hated you. She made fun of you. I loved you, Edward,” my words were choking out in stuttered sobs now. “I only wanted to love you.”
In a chapter of extreme pain and sadness, these stood out " “It’s never the time for me,” ...“It’ll never be all right,” I whimpered, swiping tears from my cheeks. “It hasn’t been all right since…”.........My heart is really breaking for Bella
Well, they have each had a breakdown.....
PLEASE, give us a happier chapter very soon...Can't take the pain anymore....
Author's Response: Hang in there. There's a lot left for these two...
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Closer
LOVED the rapping with Em mah man! w00t w00t! Was Awesome!
I do know the song, it's just old and I haven't heard it in awhile, GREAT choice btw.
*TEARS* :'(
OMG I want to crawl into bed and not come out until the next chap!
THOUGH I gotta say Alkie is the devil LOL.
OMFG I died when she talked about his pretty penis and how she wanted it in her vagina! *Thud* Died with shock and laughter.
but then alas the tears were back in full force :(
He grabbed her and he got pissed and I wanted to yell at Bella and yet Yell at Chubward...Sigh*
I am DIEDED. yes Dieded...lol
Luv u ladies <3
Lee
Author's Response: Oh, the Bella/Emmett rap was SO much fun! I’m glad you liked it! And the CPP rant (Captain Pretty Peen) was a blast to write, although it was actually a really poignant and important discussion.
Thank you so much for all of your support.
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Closer
Poor Bella
Author's Response: Bella is definitely having a tough time.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Closer
I just feel so bad for Bella. I just hope Edward can pull her out of her insecurities because she is really broken. Then she sure put it out there on the table with her conversation (ahem!) on the way home with Edward. That was a hilarious drunk move but she might want to try it again so that she can say what shee needs to once and for all!!
Author's Response: We can only hope that she remembers some of it. Glad you liked her educational discussion, so to speak! You're right, though. They do need to follow it up with a coherent one!
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Closer
OMFG!!!!! Finally a few steps forward. Unfortunately she will probably not remember it. Oh, please for the sake of my sanity and all that is holy, let this be a step forward.
I trust you girls. I don't know why, and I shouldn't, but I do. Oh, chisleward, where for art though chisleward and your rock hard ass and pretty peen? One in which Bella so desperatly wants and is worthy. Talk to her in the morning and make her yours again. OK E and V. Update this shit soon so I... I mean Edward and Bella can have their happy ending.
I think we are forming a love/hate relationship here, girls. I love you for ten to fifteen minutes after I see the update and madly click on the link, but hate you again when I am done bc there is not more. Add the stalker tendencies I have when I threaten your hard drives safety and it is toxic love here people. IF you love me...put it in the line and show me...mwah.
Author's Response: We can only hope that she remembers some of it. Chiselward has his work cut out for him, but if anyone can do it, CPP (Captain Pretty Peen) can!
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Closer
Wow, so intense, such an amazing read. Can't wait for an update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Closer
Fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Intense!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: pdxamy (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Closer
i love this chapter (and hate that i can't review on my iphone) anyway please update soon. i love damaged bella and am so glad she didn't just act like a whore but decided to do the opposite and be in control. thank you for giving her power.
Author's Response: Bella is definitely having a tough time, but she does have power - more that she knows...
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Closer
Wow! That was so heartwrenching! Poor Bella...she is beyond messed up. I don't know if she will be able to bounce back even when she realizes Edward loves her. Eight years of seclusion basically?? Well, if anyone can heal her it will be Edward!
Author's Response: Bella is definitely having a tough time, but we both believe that no one is a lost cause. There's always hope.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Closer
poor bella it was good that they opened up
Author's Response: Bella is definitely having a tough time.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Closer
wow...a lot of angst AND progress (maybe?) in one chapter! And the man standing over her bed at Renee's...well, sadly, not shocking. Am very anxious to see where you take this. Great update!
Author's Response:
It’s definitely a roller coaster, that is for sure! Lots of stuff going on in this chapter...
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Closer
Okay you two are EVIL!! First you had me laughing and by the end of it I was crying my eyes out. AGAIN! I think you to should stop writting cause otherwise there will be a shortage of tissuse in the world with how much my making me bloody cry!!
Author's Response: It's definitely a roller coaster in this chapter.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Closer
Oh my god! That was intense at the end. I just knew the bar wasn't going to end well. Lauren is such an idiot. You would've thought his parting words after he got off would've been enough to make her slap him the next time she saw him. Dear Lord, does he have the magical peen or what? I understand where Bella is coming from and how she is still hurt by what Edward said and did to her, but I'm glad Edward pointed out that he tried to talk to her and beg for forgiveness. Bella needed that reminder that she did push him away. I'm dying for their big talk. Plaease let that happen soon.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: We just knew Lauren would be back to bite him.... Grr....
And I do think Bella is aware of her part in this, although that will be much more clear in a few chapters....
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: AmandanaVamp7 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Closer
HOLY Crap. I just said this last chapter was one of my favorites.. and then you go ahead and write this! This chapter is complete amazingness. Seriously everything that Bella went through during this chapter i felt soooo bad for her, it was horrible. And then at the end with her being so confused and angry and having all these conflicting emotions was just heartbreaking and i loved it all. I cannot wait to see whats in the next chapter!
Author's Response: The next chapter overlaps this one from about half way - from Chubward's POV. You need to see his reaction to her rant..
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: JED (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Closer
Ugh just when I thought she was starting to lighten up she goes all 'woeth me' again. Christ Bella get over yourself. How many times has he got to say sorry to her??? If I was him I'd have given up a long time ago as she's obviously unstable.... And at what point did she see his peen? - when he heard the gasp he turned around but she was already gone...?
Author's Response: Yes - that was when.
She's been through a lot - not just what happened with Edward. So bear with her a little....
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
