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Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:36 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

Really loving this story, chubward is so wonderful

Reviewer: faldo (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 03:03 AM · On: The Words I Couldn't Say

Can see why you wanted help from a psychaitrist - I think we all do after that. Loving the story and looking forward to the next chapter.

Just a question - how do I know when the nexxt chapter comes out?



Author's Response:

And help, we got!

If you go to the main page of the story and add the story to favourites, then you will get an alert each time a new chapter goes up!

Feel free to contact either of us if you need assistance!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Prologue

Hmm, very interesting, I wonder what he did to push her away? I mean obviously it has something to do with him calling her a whore but why and what was the context of the conversation?

Looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.



Author's Response:

That, you will definitely find out, in gruesome detail....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MKT (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 06:40 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World

hehe I love Alice



Author's Response:

People tend to love her or hate her in this fic....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MKT (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 06:19 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Dear. Lord. That was horrible! Poor Bella...Poor Edward! Ugh! It made me cry...my husband is making fun of me! You guys rock!



Author's Response:

LOL!  We rock for making your hubs laugh at you?  Too funny!  It's definitely a tough chapter....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Hallelujah

Great chapter - glad he took it slow with her. ;D



Author's Response:

Slow is the only way for it to work with her...  Baby steps.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:32 PM · On: As Time Goes By

Wish I knew what they were saying in french!

It would be really hard for Bella and Edward not to think about the 'what if's' - can completely sympathise! :(



Author's Response:

Wasn't the translation in the end notes?  If not, feel free to PM or email me (Ellie, pomme_de_terre) and I will gladly provide translations.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:21 PM · On: I'd come for you

Good to see Jacob's appology - I'm sure that Bella will heal a lot more because of it. ;P



Author's Response:

He needed to apologize.  Granted, it didn't seem like much, but so much time and distance have passed... it was all that could happen.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Fragile

Such a lovely way for them to come together. Her desperation for him to be okay, and real, was a great way for her to see how much she needs him. Loved it. ;D



Author's Response:

Almost losing him, permanently, definitely was a jolt to her system.  Even when he was out of her life physically, she always knew he was still in the world and that was enough... then.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Losing My Religion

Loved drunk Charlie and Carlisle! Glad things are heating up between them too :D

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Banana Pancakes

*giggles big time*

Very educational (:D) chapter!!!! Thanks!

Loved how easy and relaxed they were - especially Rose's vocabulary!!!!



Author's Response:

*bows*  Education is a major goal of our fic ;)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Two is Better than One

So Bella's slowly beginning to trust him again. Yay!!! Very nice kiss too! Damn!!!!! ;D



Author's Response:

She is starting to, although it's a long road.  Yummy kisses!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Changing Channels

Great chapter for moving forward. Didn't follow Bella's train of thought for some of it, but am very pleased that they're both willing to try and take it slow. ;D



Author's Response:

I'd be more worried if you *did* follow her train of thought!  She's a bit of a trainwreck, so she often jumps thought trains.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Crash

;P



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Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Closer

Good to see Bella got some liquid courage to finally speak about some of her feelings. ;P



Author's Response:

Alcohol can sometimes be a helpful truth serum.  Not necessarily the best way to go about things, but effective....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Storm

What a sweetie Bella is for going to support him when he needed her - the deja vu of the flowers was gorgeous. ;P



Author's Response:

They do still love each other and *want* to be there.  But there is so much...damage.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Drop in the Ocean

My throat was tight that whole chapter! Bella's inner pain is so palpable, so real... great job!!!!



Author's Response:

She is definitely an extremely broken woman.  Then again, poor Chubward is a bit of a mess as well....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 02:18 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Very sweet ending for poor Bella. She can't get much of a break can she?! lol. ;P

 



Author's Response:

Poor thing truly can't get a break - especially from herself!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Cry

;P

The first tender steps...

Keen to see what happens next!!!!



Author's Response:

It is definitely a one step forward, few steps back story!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Stolen Away

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 01:31 AM · On: 2009-Ordinary World

Poor Bella - her heart must have been so utterly shattered...

Edward's going to have to tread very carefully to restore her faith in him. :)



Author's Response:

She is pretty darned broken, that's for sure.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 01:18 AM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

So pleased to see Edward desperate to change... and all for Bella - lucky girl. That was some pretty self destructive behaviour Edward engaged in too!!!

Hopefully, Bella will listen to his apology this time...

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:56 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

*sob, sob, sob*

Wow, that is one rotten Jacob! What a bugger.

Can understand Bella's feelings completely, and know how torn up Edward would be after things were explained to him. I feel so sorry for both of them.



Author's Response:

They both made some collosal mistakes, but they really aren't that unlikely being that the two of them relied so deeply on each other and that security was ripped away. 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:39 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

WHOA! Holy hell cowboy! Even I don't think Bella's capable of what he accused her of, and deep down, Edward knows it too. But damn, his words were spiteful and cut to the core... Just as he was by seeing Bella that way.



Author's Response:

Edward had a LOT riding on that night and he didn't think in the LEAST before he lashed out at her.  Those words were meant to hurt her (you'll find out later how true his aim was) and nothing more.  He knew there was no truth to them.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:19 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

*Sob*

Such a horrible thing to happen, to anyone...

So glad that Bella is there for Edward, and that he has someone he can talk to. Hope he's okay...

I dare say Christmas's will be very hard for him from now on. Poor kid. :(



Author's Response:

It definitely put a damper on Christmas for a long time to come.  Who knows what would have happened to him had Bella not been there to tether him....

 

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