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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 03:42 AM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
dear sweet and innocent my bootie, Alice has an evil streak a mile long and I love it :)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:45 AM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
ohhhh game on! Looking forward to what Bella does to get "rid" of Tanya :)
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:26 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
Okay everyone in this story has a serious sproblem with over reacting. Just syaing.
I think the vampiress in Bella needs to come out and play with naive, inexperienced Edward :) hehehe
~ B
Author's Response: LOL, well its nice to see someone else other than Edward overreacting dont you think...And Bella plays nicely in the next chap, trust me.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:02 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
she wants to be the princess of sex
Author's Response: O.O Who? What? Huh...
Reviewer: locksofglory (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:15 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
more more!!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:28 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
aaawww damn...it ended too early again! Let's read about Bella kicking Tanya's whore trampy slutty skanky dumb bitch ass out to the freaking curb! I hate Tanya's character...can't stand her! I wouldn't piss on her if she was on fucking fire!
So please, for the love of fanfiction...can somebody write a story were Tanya gets her ass handed to her?!?!?!?! PLEASE!
I'm sorry to put it so bluntly but....Edward needs to NUT UP...grow a pair and tell Bella how you feel, then make it happen!
Author's Response: OMG, your comment is hilarious. Don't worry, Tanya gets it next chapter. FYI: in my new story, Tanya good.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 06:48 PM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
WTF!!! Really Bella? Really? I think she has over reaction issues.
~ B
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 06:05 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
Yeah you got a pretty good fix. I thought there was gonna be a next chapter,wait was up with that?!?!
Reviewer: Uncoordinated Princess (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 05:38 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
Love this story it is amazing. Love everything about it. Hope to see more updateing soon. Please.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 05:15 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
the best chapter. wow edward really gets her going i pray none of the cullens are around when she starts getting worked up like that. i wonder if they'll talk about it. damn tanya she always messes stuff up. i cant wait to see what she has planned for her and i'm surprised that alice didnt see what gifts were purchased. what will alice do that will get rid of tanya for good.
Author's Response: Alice can't see Bella in her visions. She can see a bit if she's touching her but that is it. Bella's gift prevents it.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 04:34 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
oh leaving it like that is just plain mean!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 04:16 PM · On: 7: Snow Angel
OH - SO CLOSE ! TANYA ALWAYS RUINS EVERYTHING!!
Author's Response: Without even knowing it too.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:23 PM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
OKAY - NOT SO FUNNY - I GUESS IT WOULD NOT BE EDWARD & BELLA WITHOU A LOT OF DRAMA AND ANGST
Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:13 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
*Snickering* Evil Pixie Alert
Level 5. All stay clear.
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:33 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
i cant wait to read what happpens bella needs to be seductive with edward infront of tanya then claim her man and tell tanya where to go.....lol
Reviewer: vashbak (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:26 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
I SO hope she's going to get an Alice makeover and put Tanya in her place by pretending to be his girlfriend all the while driving him crazy b/c they're obviously stupid-in-love with eachother!
Author's Response: Yeah, very stupidly! lol
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:23 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
LOL Oh I would just love to see what Alice is cooking up for Tanya! LOL Please write next chapter ASAP!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:17 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
OKAY - IREAD A LOT OF FEN FIC - CURRENTLY FOLLOEING 72 STORIES - THIS IS JUST GREAT
MY FAV VAMPS ALWAYS HAVE BEEN ALICE AND EMMETT - LOVE THEM
FAV VAMP COUPLE ALAYS - EDWARD - BELLA - I AM TEAM EDWARD ALL THE WAY!
I LOVE EMMETT BOUNCING UP DOWN( USAUALLY IT THE PIXIE) OW OW ME ME - " ALICE WHY AM i WEARING A DRESS" I LAUGHED SO HARD - TEARS CAME DOWN MY FACE
YES ALICE IS AND ALWAYS WILL BE A WRECKING BALL -THATS WHY WE LOVE HER - GOD I WOULD LOVE A FRIEND LIKE HER
I HOPE YOU PAIR BELLA & EDWARD UP SOON!
Author's Response: Yes, it will be soon.
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:15 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
oooo tanya is gonna get an ass wooping!
Reviewer: StephanieDeShaw (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:02 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
Oh No!! don't leave me hanging like this please! lol So good!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:46 PM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
awsome!!!!
Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:19 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
Yes ma'am, yes you did. I look forward to Alice's part in all of this, I'm sure it'll be perfect :).
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:13 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
Eeegats!
Only Tanya could mess things up when things were going so well. I sure hope Alice and Bella have something devious up their sleeves. I have no ideas but have every confidence that you will come up with something perfect.
I have been feeling under the weather but reading your story will sitting her sick still puts a smile on my face
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:13 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
this is great - yes i would like a sparkly vampire on top - lol
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:02 PM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
love it.
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