Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 03:21 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
the dress Rose is wearing is something Hera the queen of the Greek gods favored. She loved red or was rumored to.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:53 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
" wolf whistle" NICE CAR!
Reviewer: achangeofheart (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:50 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
my fav chapter so far. i really loved the explantion of bellas rebirth. i became so envolved and felt like i was almost there. brilliant writing to be able to captivate an audience in that manner. bravo!!
what month is it? huh huh? should we know? i dont know. grrr
sure ill find out. thanks for a fantastic chappie. 10/10 from me. moving on!
Author's Response: lol, I said what month it was at the start of chapter 1.
Reviewer: mini (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:02 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
i love it. but please update asap...im obsessed
Reviewer: achangeofheart (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:45 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
hmmm i pick jasper. anywho, love love love this, edward isnt being moody or mardy. me likey. i still want my own alice but i suppose more chapters will do for now. also i bloody love the handwriting. its spot on, you genious you!
Author's Response: *bows* Thank you very much.
Reviewer: achangeofheart (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:01 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
me likey!! so yeah bellas not so bad now,shes growing on me. and i want my own alice!!
Author's Response: Your own Alice? Okay, that requires some explaining. lol
Reviewer: achangeofheart (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:29 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
from what i can see i love the change in writing styles to different POV's
bella seems like a bit of a cow, just because she was ignorant but i have a feeling it'll get better. im intrigued as always next chappie!!
Author's Response: A cow? That's a new one. She has her reasons.
Reviewer: julzrox (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 04:30 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
I really like you're story so far but I reckon that Edward would want to get mariied first before going all the way with Bella
Reviewer: Tunesgrl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:10 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
Well, I personally think this WAS a gift giving chapter...Maybe not for the Cullen family, but certainly for me and I'm sure most of the readers! Great Job on making things steamy and wanting more! And btw, thanks for bringing up the concerns of being a female virgin vampire...I thought I was the only one who wondered about that! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:59 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
I am not yelling at all!!!! I love it! I can't wait to find out what the presents are!!!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:54 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
haha nice interruption Alice! :)
poor Tanya... hmm... not sure I do feel that much sympathy... maybe I'm bad? ;)
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:47 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
DANG IT! So.... Close.....
~ B
Author's Response: Lol, sorry bout that.
Reviewer: sis_is_me (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:22 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
That was a great chapter. I love this story!! Alice will give Bella something black and lacey or plane tickets to the Isle of Esme!!!
Reviewer: lilkeykey14 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:47 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
more, more, more, MORE!!! your writing is absitivly posilutely incredible! (btw, i like to wait till i finish reading the fanfics to review & rate.) : ) >
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:52 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
i realize i worded that wrong i meant alice ruined the moment not the chapter sorry i find it funny how the spouses can have their moments and time with their significant other but when edward is involved everyone wants to cockblock
Author's Response: What is a cockblock(er)? I have never hear that until yesterday.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:00 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
YAY!! Im all caught up now, Loved this chapter and all the others that i have read. I cant wait for the next one :)
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:17 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
hey, another great chapter.
Reviewer: vashbak (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:52 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
I can only hope their gift is more of THAT action!
Oh wait...maybe that's a gift to me :)
Author's Response: LOL, I don't think that would be a gift to give each other if front of everyone.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:26 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
stupid tanya.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:55 AM · On: 5: Monster Mash
Loved this chapter and thanks again for the pic :)
Reviewer: zmom (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:50 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
Really great chapter. I am always happy to see a new chapter in this story. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:42 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
I don't read many vampire stories but I have to say I like this one. It's different and very well written. Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:58 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Sweet!! Loved this chapter and thanks for the pic of what Bella'a car looks like. I cant wait to get caught up :)
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:04 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
okay, the hours inside thing is unique. kinky, but cool. and i am betting that emmett will give edward a vibrator. just to push his buttons.
Author's Response: Nothing electonic, sorry.
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:51 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
Again???????
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