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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 02:59 PM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go

Awwww Bella that's not true you are worthy, Edward has put you on a pedestal and thinks he is the unworthy one and I think he's scared.  Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 01:41 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash

Emmett's costume is hilarious and I can't get the picture of him in it out of my head, lol.  So it's becomming more noticeable that Edward likes Bella and if I'm reading this right, although Bella is a bit more cool about it she likes Edward too.  I love this story it's so funny.  Jane x



Author's Response:

Their feelings are mutual and it will become more obvious as the story goes on.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:39 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited

I loved Bella's story, one thing I really want to know though is whether her mum an dad are still alive???  Jane x



Author's Response:

Keep reading, your question will be answered.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 05:10 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber

Zombie, lol, duh Emmett, glad to see nothing has changed there.  Awww poor Edward, he's beginning to crush on Bella, lets hope he works out what he's feeling soon.  I really like this story, I have a bit of catching up to do though.  Jane x



Author's Response:

By all means catch up. I can promise you the humor will not end for say....20 chapters or so. ^_^

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:44 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations

So Bella is the ultimate shield and was changed by Maria, wonder how Jasper will react to that one.  I can't wait until she meets the rest of the Cullens.  Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:23 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?

Like the story so far, it's been in my favourites for a while but I'm only just getting round to reading it.  Like Bella's car, nice.  It seems that Bella and Edwards roles seem reversed at the moment with her leaving class in a hurry instead of Edward, I like it, it's different.  Jane x

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 02:59 PM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

 

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 02:59 PM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

 

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 02:59 PM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

 

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 07:31 AM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

hmm it occurs to me that the water gun fight would be a good exercise in small motor control for a vampire as well. Those plastic things are good, being designed for kids and all, but a vamp would still have to be careful they don't snap them :)

Author's Response:

LOL, very true, they would make for a good training tool for a newborn. Since Bella is the youngest at 40 odd years she's had practise, they all have. ^_-

Reviewer: Lady Skyelite (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 11:26 PM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

Can't wait fo the rest. This is fantastic!

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:14 AM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

Well I've got up to date and I can't wait for the next up date. I have really enjoyed reading all the way through to here. T x



Author's Response:

^_^ I'm glad. Thank you for all the reviews too.

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:52 AM · On: 19: End Game

Ooohh enjoyed the game, wondering what happened when Bella knew James before. 

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:19 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

Wow Bella's power is great, I know she can only use those certain amount of times but it sure came in handy with Tanya.  I think its sweet that Jasper has this protective bond for Bella, just like most big brothers.

 

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:10 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever

Blimey that Tanya cannot take no for an answer can she!!! looking forward to seeing if Bella has any other powers.  Enjoyed the kissing game x

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:33 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

I love Emmett he really makes me laugh.  So Esme and Jasper hit the nail on the head with the whole wedding, i'm not sure Edward and Bella will be able to keep it a secret till graduation.

Loved the lemonade x

 



Author's Response:

LOL and they didn't even know it. We always hope it remains a secret.

Reviewer: nutmeig (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:24 PM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

:D nice



Author's Response:

Thank you. You're 900th reviewer so double thanks.

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:59 PM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

I think it's either James or Tanya, we haven't seen Tanya in a while.

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:03 AM · On: 12: It's a Secret

Just perfect :)

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 08:00 AM · On: 11: You Got Me What?!

Loved the gift giving I lol at Bella's gift for Tanya.  Thanks for posting the pics its always nice to have a visual to look at.  Thought the Cullen necklace was fab also loved Esme's.



Author's Response:

Emse's necklace is real but Bella's isn't, wish it was...I would soooo buy one. And just think, Bella isn't done with Tanya just yetl ^_^

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 05:06 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Great chapter. So pleased Bella was able to kick Tanya's ass, she totally had it coming to her. T x



Author's Response:

Hehehe, g;ad you liked it because she's not through with Tanya yet.

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 03:09 AM · On: 7: Snow Angel

Argh Alice!!! an almost kiss, hope they get there soon.  Wondering what the arrival of Tanya will bring.  Really enjoying this fic.

Reviewer: readlots (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:56 AM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

Not James - probably Tanya then. Or Maria if not Tanya. Enjoyed your story - as should be obvious since I read all 20 chapters. Might be nice to see a bit of what Bella and Edward's relationship is outside of just the physical? Looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

You got it! But I won't say which, its a surprise. With them being newly mated, I think its mainly going to be physical for the next decade, ie: Em & Rose.

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 11:20 PM · On: 4: A Past Revisited

I enjoyed reading Bella's back story. Great reading so far.  I'm thinking it may have been Edward who growled. T x



Author's Response:

I left the growling open for debate - mainly between Edward and Jasper...it could have been anyone. ^.^

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:16 PM · On: 20: Into the Wilds

hmm wonder how that feel for 1 full year of honeymoon, not that i mind ;p

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