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Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2012 07:02 AM · On: 5: Monster Mash
I love the pictures at the end of the costumes. This was a fun chapter.
Reviewer: FiOFiOnA (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 07:47 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
I would of liked the car in 2009 lol, my taste of cars varies when new models come out.
Author's Response: LOL. I figured since she has the money, why not get the newest model she could get. Plus I like the car, it's pretty.
Reviewer: Vulture (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 03:05 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
hey,
really enjoyed reading this, thx for this nice fic with that extra twist..
some german twiguy
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. ^_^
Reviewer: Bella MacLeod (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 01:43 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
I like,I like,I like!!!!Nice spin to SM's creative work.
I'll have Carlisle on top of my sundae!!!!!!!!!!!Partial to Peter Facinelli,what can I say.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, you can have who ever you want on the sundae ^_-. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: eyes4edwardonly (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 06:47 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
im liking this so far. can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you. Enjoy the rest ^_^
Reviewer: mmsa (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 05:55 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Pretty ingenious with the way you placed the notes in between the regular writing. I've read this story somewhere else but can't seem to remember which website, either way, it's one that I love reading over again.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this. This should only be on here and ff.net under the name Kagome Hanyou.
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 11:25 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
I liked it....I liked seeing other POVs.
Author's Response: Thanks...theres plenty more to come. ^_^
Reviewer: Quelf (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 03:14 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
I like how you intensified Bella's gift. I was disappointed with it in BD.
Author's Response: Thanks, it gets better. ^_-
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 12:01 PM · On: 22: Unexpected Visitors
I think I like mommy dearest.... hehe...what a twist of fate it would have been for Maria if Jasper and Bells did get together.
Author's Response: Oh the remarks I could have made if it was a B/J story. Bella and Jasper isn't my genre, though there was a brief mention in my Stranded with a Stranger OS. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Bitemeverywhere (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 03:09 PM · On: 12: It's a Secret
This story is fantastic so far.
Every thing about it has clearly been well thought out and clear.
Youre an amazing author.
The pictures at the bottom are really helpful by the way. No other author has ever done that. So thank you.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 04:02 AM · On: 20: Into the Wilds
The water fight was fun and a nice change of pace - It's nice to have the Cullens all together engaging in family fun! I'm nervous about what's coming - just hope we are able to see Bella in her powerful glory!
Author's Response: The future chapters will be different from what you expecting. ^_- thanks for the review.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 03:19 AM · On: 19: End Game
Hello, What an interesting way to incorporate the nomads into your story - I'm sure great action will ensue with such a terrilbe threat to our new found mates. Cant' wait to see how things end up!
Chyla
Author's Response: It's going to be fun! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 02:45 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
Wow what a great chapter! I love that Bella is so powerful and controlled - Can't wait to see her full potential realizedl!
I'm so glad that the secret's out - but uh-oh here comes the firestorm of the family! Really though I hope it's not too bad I mean they are planning to have a full family wedding after the school year!
That damn Tanya is so over the top! I 'm glad Bella shocked her ass - that was so awesome!!
Author's Response: It was definitely a fun chapter all around huh. For a 1k+ year old vampire, Tanya isn't very smart is she?
Reviewer: mylovedward (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Epilogue: Plans for the Future
wow amazing story, wonder epiloge. i want to go with them too :)
Author's Response: LOL, thanks. I want to go with them too.
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 10:38 AM · On: 5: Monster Mash
Love the pictures!!!!! I am finding your story very fun reading;)
Author's Response: Thank you. I like having pics to show the readers what I was seeing when I wrote the story.
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 09:11 AM · On: Epilogue: Plans for the Future
wonderful story, thankyou for sharing !!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I like sharing my imagination. ^_^
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:14 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers
I thik Esme or Carlise will figure it out first, not sur ehow the family will react
Author's Response: I think the results will surprise you. ^_-
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 04:58 PM · On: 12: It's a Secret
you know it was their wedding, their moment. They will give them another wedding later
Author's Response: LOL, the family can be a little, what's the word 'needy', thats not right. I know what you mean though.
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 04:27 PM · On: 11: You Got Me What?!
her crest is absolutley beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you. Wonder if I could buy the pieces seperatly and make my own....OH that's idea ^_-
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 02:04 PM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
really good chapter !!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 01:11 PM · On: Epilogue: Plans for the Future
The epilog was a goody and the wedding dress was simple, classic and gorgeous! Her lingerie wasn't bad, either. You just knew that Edward was going to love each and every one, a lot. The whole story was just a delight to read, even with Tanya and James being so crazy. It boils down to family, history and lots of love, I enjoyed the whole thing very much. Thank you!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this. I really had fun writing it, if you couldn't tell.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 11:14 AM · On: 24: Turnabout Is Fair Play
You did well, I thought. It isn't necessary to get gross about killing vampires, as far as the mechanics go, a hint is fine by me. I'm very glad, however that Bella managed to conceal her abilities from the Volturi. What they don't know won't hurt her or Edward. Pretty much a case of all's well that ends well.
Author's Response: Its not the killing of vampires that bugs me, its the killing period. I can't do violence well. I wrote it like I saw in my head and I saw Edward trying to shield Bella in someway. Who know what the Volturi would have done with Bella's absorbing gift if they knew the extent of it.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 11:00 AM · On: 23: I've Been Framed!
Just as long as things turn out with Edward and Bella together, where they belong,forever, I would never presume to tell you how to write this story. This is your baby, not anybody elses, and only you know how it should go. This last contretemps is pretty scary, Jane and Alec are nothing to fool around with. However,I can't wait until Bella gets here and absorbs their talents. They better watch how many times they try to incapacitate her, she'll get them good!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm avid about the Edward&Bella HEAs. Next chapter should be a douzy for you then, wondering how many things were guessing on and which direction they actually went.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 10:44 AM · On: 22: Unexpected Visitors
Such a surprise, to have Maria and Lillian show up out of nowhere. Makes me wonder why they decided to visit at this time. Also makes me question just who has been shadowing Bella and reporting to Maria all this time? Funnier than hell when Alice attacked Maria and shocked Lillian, nobody messes with her man and gets away with it!
Author's Response: Maria was actually checking up on Jasper, finding Bella was a bonus. Alice is definitely a force to wreckoned with.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 10:20 AM · On: 21: Tag, You're It
All in all, a very successful camping vacation, and the paintball fights sounded like fun, too. Alice got what she had coming, I think. The lemons were great. Bella and Edward are young, relatively speaking, and madly in love, lusty and newly married, what could be more wonderful?
Author's Response: "what could be more wonderful?" - No interuptions. I'm glad you liked the paintball, attack on Alice and the lemons. I've been young, in love and married, I know the lust thing works...hence our daughter. o.0
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