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Reviews For What Alice Saw
Reviewer: tbdrew (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just wondered, since Alice sees the future, not the present, why couldn't she have called Bella when she saw the vision of her death to warn her? But, either way, it's a beautiful story - touching and soulful and beautiful.

Author's Response:

good question.  My understanding was that Alice can see the outcome of a decision once that decision has been made.  If the decision is changed, she doesn't see that future.  In this case, Bella did not make a decision to trip and fall.   She just did so accidentally. 

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was amazing. just amazing. sad, yes, but lovely.

Reviewer: emchelle (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, this is heartbreaking. So sad, but really, really well done.

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