Oh poor boy...he took a big gamble telling her I love you...hopefully she can say it back soon. Doesn't she? Sigh...

Oh my gosh, the boy makes me melt!

I love these two. Thanks for not going for the cheap thrill, in sex or in love. I am taking notes and hope to be more like you whan I am a big girl.

Edwards overthinking-intensity makes me want to weep.

xox

songirl

I like the way the chapters end; it's not forced or contrived, but instead really natural and graceful, like the end of a thought.

I love this story.  I can't help but start every review with that fact.

 

My heart broke a little for Edward, it always crushes you to not hear it back, no matter what people say.  I do understand why Bella couldn't, though.

 

Great chapter...loved the bit about them "working on it" and the puzzles...

Ooh sexy Edward! I'm sure you get this all the time, but the realism in this story is so refreshing, and it works beautifully with these two broken characters. I also love that they never seem broken beyond repair; unlike other stories. And yet, I have no idea what's going to happen and could see the story going any number of ways. I always look forward to this update in my box; I apologize for not reviewing faithfully. Confession: this is the only story I read on Twilighted, and I'd never navigated or reviewed on the site before! But it's definitely well worth the trip over! Any particular reason you publish here only?

Thank you again for sharing this heart-rending, urgent story with us! Three cheers for FF Bella's first bladder infection! ^_^

XOXO

NS

Aww, Edward told her. he loves her. this chapter is freaking amazing, can.t wait to read more.

I love this story! Im preparing myself....I know the angst is coming:)

yay. fabulous update.  i really like these two.  such an enjoyable story.  thank you :)

Awww, as always, I scream and get super excited every time I see that you've updated.  Amazing chapter!  Can't wait for the next one!

Aww, I'm pretty bummed that she didn't say it back but I guess I understand where she's coming from. For a second I thought Bella was pregnant lol but she's on the pill and there couldn't be any disease.

I really love your story ;D

Awww I love how these two are growing closer. I'm still not sure exactly how Bella will react when she learns more about Edward's past, but I hoping it's not in the way Edward is imagining. Bella's a smart girl, so I have faith that she'll stick by him. Edward is always his own worst critic.