I haven't been reviewing. Sorry. I'm still reall into this story... my heart jumps a little in my chest every time I see you update. This quick chapter was definitely a welcome surprise.

I had a feeling that Edward would break up with Bella. That didn't make it any less hard to read, though. It broke my heart to see Bella leave like that... when Edward's so messed up in his own shit right now. I completely understand how Edward's feeling though... which may make the whole thing worse.

I have no idea what to expect next. I'm really looking forward to seeing if Edward falls off the edge he's walking right... and if Bella understands what's going on. Also, what happens with them when Bella moves. Does it make Edward's situation worse or better? Will Jasper step in?

So many questions... Please, please update soon! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

 

omg how could he do this to her. He should have at least talked with her, but it wouldnt be edward if he did

I.am.heartbroken.

What a painfully beautiful job you did with this gut wrenching chapter.

OMG such heart fail. People do that though and this is very believable.

OHHHH - My heart if breaking for Bella ... and Edward!

So the million dollar question is: what will happen now??? I for one imagine that he may relapse, but I wish that he wouldn't.  I wish Bella would fight for him, but I am not sure she can see that she should through the hurt.  I wonder where it will all go.  This is a great story, and you are brave to write it the way you have, with no apologies and no explanation...simply letting the story do all the talking.

Dear Ms. Blue

I'm sitting here sobbing like the silly girl I am. I mean I can't say I'm completely surprised by Edward's deplorable behavior but that doesn't make it hurt any less. *sniff sniff*

And poor honest trusting loving Bella. I just want to hug her and hold her and tell her he's just fighting his own demons. I hope Alice and Jasper can help give them both some sage advice and solace.

This is really one of my most favorite stories. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Cheers, 

Ouiser

okay that hurts!!!! not cool! he made her leave!!!!!! you are killing me! make it right!!!!!!!!

So happy to see another chapter so quick! I hope the next one just sort of happens, too :) We all knew something like this would happen, but hard to read nonetheless. This is such a great story - thank you!!

Bella may not be crying right now, but I am.

But...I've been this Bella before.  And although I couldn't understand it at the time, it wasn't going to work the way things were, just like they wouldn't work for Bella and Edward. He's acting like an ass, and doesn't completely understand what he's doing right now or why, but they were on a path to heartbreak already. The only hope is to change the path, and the question is whether they can find a new one that is healthy for them both.

I don't need to tell you this, Talula.  You clearly have a deep understanding of these two and their circumstances.  It frequently hurts me to read, but I never fail to recognize your talent.  Thank you.

This is one of the most real fics I've ever read.  The honesty and the hesitance and the heartbreak is breathtaking.  Thanks so much for giving us something new and different and real to read.

I eat all my crust.  I love it!  They are so cute and awkward.  I bet this is so new to him.