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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: jkl (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 20

agh! as always, it just KILLS me to have to wait for the next installment. I thought this was a very impressive chapter...can't wait to see what Bella's up to...

Reviewer: SugarBluesSmoken (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 20

what an idiot.... can't believe he let himself fall back to where he was before... but its gotta be hard to stay afloat. hope everything gets righted soon!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow. Just....WOW. I have never read anything so profoundly written as though you suffered through every bit of what Edward was experiencing with his drug taking and withdrawls.

Seriously, your writing has me just mesmorised. I truly hope that Jasper can help Edward sort himself out - if he ever wants to deserve Bella again, he owes it to himself and to her to clean his act up. Right now, he's copping out big-time.

Reviewer: readingisbliss (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 20

Thank God he went to Jasper. Last chapter nearly killed me. Please, please let him get clean.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: kellyprovence (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 20

I swear you kill me with every update! LOL! 

They are like a slow dripping water fountain...You keep trying to get more and more, but its going at its pace and not yours.

LOL! AHHHH! Your words are soo amazing though!

Thanks! Can't wait for more!

 

kellyprovence

 

Reviewer: epwatts_85 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow. your writing is great. you captured everything wonderfully. i almost feel like going to rehab lol

Reviewer: EdwardsBloodType (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 20

I knew his POV after he saw her would be immensely difficult to read, and I sat on the edge of my seat cringing the entire time. The way it seemed in the bar was that he was just having a beer.

A beer.

I had no idea that he had really gone off the deep end, and I suppose thats my lack of experience with addiction. I would very much like to know what transpired between that time he asked Bella to leave and this point. I hope we get some insight.

I love this story to pieces but I can not forsee a HEA for them together. That makes me very sad, but it is also okay.

 

Reviewer: jkl (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 19

had to go back & reread the end of this chapter before I start the next & I just have a desperate need to tell you how impressive this bar scene is. You can practically feel it, smell it, hear it...my heart clenches for her.

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 20

HOLY SHIT, this make me so so sad, I think I might be developing IBS from this story! HAHA!!

Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 20

It's gut-wrenching and heart-breaking, but I love how you went for this no holds barred.  I almost felt delirious being inside Edward's head - I felt a bit dizzy and disorientated and that's because of your writing; it's so vivid and punchy.  The road is still dark, but we have some hope now, just a little, but it's enough to get by.  Thank you for giving us something meaningful.

 

x

Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 20

My mind keeps going back to when Charlie said something like they always go back; he may not sell again, but he will use.  I really hate it when people do not want to give people hope, that once you are an addict that you can never have any hope to be a fully functioning member of society or be worthy of associating with "decent" people.  I do not buy that.  I have to believe within myself that we CAN overcome anything, any adversity, if we want to badly enough.  I get it that Edward slipped.  I get it.  But I really hope that this is a story of hope in our darkest hour that ends with a journey to the light. 

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 20

wow... that was painful but if could have been so much worse if it wasn't for the format you chose. like a band-aid. we went through his months of shit with a lot of details but swiftly.

You are an incredible writer, that is for sure. I don't know how you have manage that, if you just made your research very well or if all this came from empirical knowledge but i felt like i was in edward's turbulent head. it was so real. great reading experience. a rare one too.

thanks for that. :)

 

Reviewer: TwilightLover418 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 20

my heart seriously aches for him  :( amazing chapter, as always!  :)

Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 20

I knew a relapse had to happen, and you handled it well.  Poor Edward, but you write him in a way that if tells me he might get it right, one day.  He wants to get well.

Thanks for the update, you're doing a great job with this fic.

Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow. That was intense. I don't know how you know what it's like to be an addict; mayve you do know. But I felt Edward's despair deep down like I was watching it on t.v. or right in front of me.  I do hope he gets better, for good this time.

Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 20

wow, this is literally heartbreaking.

he was doing so bloody well :/

cannot wait for more though, i need to know what happens next so badly :)

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 19

:O

well, we knew this was coming but it is still hard to read.

but please, please please please don't let bella use jake to get over edward. i hated bella's new moon. and i will hate yours too if she does that...

Reviewer: Mephis (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 20

Thank you for this chapter. It exceeded my expectations. It was well-written and I like the way you built up the tension. Edward's POV was also well-done, and you didn't fail on conveying the inner monologue of an addict. In short, this chapter didn't hold back on what it's like to be an addict, in terms of both actions and the self-justification that an addict undergoes. As I said, I like this chapter. Thank you!

~ Udo  

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow. Poor Edward. Some bender he went on.

:(

 

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow, uggghhh!  i hope it can only get better from here for him.  i hope this is his "rock bottom"......i love this jasper.

Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 20

this chapter has made me feel sooooo much better about Edward. i was seriously about to kick his ass after how the last chapter ended :p

Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 20

God. Oh god, oh god. I literally feel sick, like ive taken every drug that Edward has taken, i feel dizzy for godssake! Your words grab me, shake me and spin me around like i'm right there inside his head. <3 it. HARD

 

P.s. - which ward is this??

Reviewer: bacchanalia (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 20

i have a feeling this chapter is going to stay with me for a very, very long time. it was haunting, and painful, and very poignant.

and absolutely wonderful, as usual.

Reviewer: Mol (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh, this is so heartbreaking. Really well written, and conveys just how horrible it must be to feel like Edward. I very rarely feel moved to tears reading fanfiction, but this is so moving, great writing...

Reviewer: greeneyedmonster (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 20

Riveted and in pain.... are you happy now? If you have any self-respect as a writer... you should be.

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