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Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 21

I have very little knowledge of AA, NA, & Alanon(?) but I was wondering what they would advise an addict who was in a relationship before they decided to sober up? I understand how it would be wise to work on yourself before you attempt to start a relationship. But only if you have other types of relationships in your life, such as friends and family. Edward has no one. No support system. I think Jasper, as Edward's sponsor, should have advised Edward to handle his & Bella's relationship, when they had one that is, the way a married couple would have been advised. (that sentence so messed up I hope it made sense) I think it was best that Jasper quit being his sponsor. Now, he can be a friend who understand what Edward is going through, part of his support system, because apparentally he wasn't being the sponsor he should of been. Anyways, never agreed with the whole "no relationships" thing, but after reading this chapter and realizing just how lonely he is, did I start to think the people who came up with those rules (suggestions) are huge fucking idiots. So, in regards to AA and NA, is this story factual?                  

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 21

wow this chapter was pretty hard to read...but so necessary dying to know what's next.  Am i right in assuming it's been 2 years since Bella and him were together????  How long has he been sober then....a year?

Reviewer: s1mone (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 21

I'm glad we see Edward's lengthy struggle instead of just a quick easy fix. It's honest and gives this story weight. I love that Edward has reconnected with his love of music, and that he found something he can be passionate about, a positive outlet for all that restless energy. Great writing, great story.

Reviewer: Kristina79 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow. You are really a Queen of words. I bow my head in awe. A very very fine chapter. Thank you so much for sharing.

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow, Edward has had it rough.  Sounds like he might actually be doing better.  Good that he is in school and playing the piano again. 

Reviewer: carebear309 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 21

Ugh, why do I feel bad for Edward when he thinks of Bella and him being upset that she doesn't want to hear about him? I shouldn't feel bad for him because of how he treated her and self destructed.

Funny that Edward ended up talking with Seth. Wonder what Bella is up to now??

Reviewer: amcas (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 21

A rollercoaster of pain.

Reviewer: yogacat (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Heart wrenching. So real and so raw and so good.

I would so like to talk to you about you and your writng and your story.

 

Reviewer: prlgirl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 21

Just heartbreaking. Its so realistic the on and off again with being sober, but still so hard to read. you write such a great story. I'm happy he got the news from Jasper that Bella doesn't ask about him. I want them back together, but he hurt her so much, it can't always be the easy road home.

Reviewer: fancastride (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 21

Oh my, that was just wonderfully sad.  Edward is going through so many emotions all taking a toll on him.  I can't imagine how lonely it must be.  Can't wait for the next update great chapter.

Reviewer: AshleyinTexas (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 21

Made me cry!

Reviewer: fargoner (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 21

Another flawless chapter! It made me want to weep for Edward. It's so painful to watchhim struggle so. I was so happy that he's gone back to school and is doing something he likes. I am not sure if he is clean now, or is able to catch himself when he slips. I don't know how that works in case of former addicts. Can they still have a drink or get high once in a while? I really hope he and Bella can find a way back to each other. As always your writing is captivating. Can't wait for the next chapter. Much love! :-)

Reviewer: Lurecyka (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

Another really nice chapter... I'm so happy to know that I got more to read. 

Reviewer: KeeWit (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 21

Another great chapter!

Reviewer: Pat1983 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 21

I love this story so much...although it makes me cry most of the time!

Thanks for the writing.

Reviewer: anduril1134 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 21

I think this was one of the best chapters so far. Good work...

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 21

wow 2 years passed huh?  wonder what will happen next? how will they meet again?

Reviewer: brittbritt408 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 21

Ugh... this kills me. Such a great chapter. I love this story so much, it's one of my absolute favorites. I'm so anxious for them to meet again. It's been two years since they broke up? Craziness! I wonder what Bella's been up to. I love your writing style and I seriously can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't keep us waiting long!

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

Is Edward feeling sorry for hisself? He needs to man up and take responsibility for his actions, then maybe he can mend fences with Bella if she's so inclined to allow it.

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 21

Just breaks the heart to see him get up and fall down, be a jerk and then lonely, be so flawed and yet wish to be normal.  I can't help but wish he could beat the monster by himself, and be better.  But in the book, Bella saves him.  She couldn't do it before when he left her and it is scary to think what he might do if he were to return to her.

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 21

wow, I really appreciated that Jasper let Edward have it and let him go from being his sponsor, it needed to be done and Edward needed to see that Jasper was putting the work in that Edward couldn't see.  Happy to see that Edward is working day by day to try to move forward, love that he is playing the piano and going back to school......  so much work to reach the goal each and every day!  ;)

Reviewer: Nirbaan (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow! That was powerful. I didn't expect 2 years to have passed by already. The repeated relapses that Edward is going through is heartbreaking. I want to cheer for him and see him strong and invincible. To have the will power to kick it once and for all. But that is not the reality of this story. And what a reality you have created here! Kudos!

I have a feeling I wont like what is to come in the next chapter. But can't wait to read it nonetheless. Thank you very much for writing this amazing story.

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 21

This is so poignant and painful, as well. So beautifully written. Thanks for writing so realistically about his struggles to get clean and sober. Anything less would have been a copout, and you'd never do that to your loyal readers.

Appreciate your clarifying about the 2 year timeline since he's seen her. Nice little foreshadowing (maybe) re: Bella finishing her M.A. and heading to Forks for the summer.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on the site. Thank you!

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow, so I know your coming to the end here soon.  I am so sad about it but at the sametime I feel like I have traveled along Edward's difficult journey with him.  So happy to read that he is going to school doing things he loves.  I wonder how you will end it all.  It's so great to see Edward back on the wagon though I hope he reaches out and contacts Bella :)

Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 21

This was incredibly sad and I definitely had to get up and get my tissues!  You do such a great job depicting his struggle and I really enjoyed how you showed us how he has to constantly pick himself up and start all over again.  The part where he was crying on the bed...wow!  I am glad that he is back in school studying music and hope that he can find his way.  I also hope that it leads him back to Bella at some point. 

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