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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 23

I envy them. I wish I could have a similar conversation instead of carrying past burdens on my shoulders. Reading that made me wonder, how it would feel. Thank you.

Reviewer: AuroraBlue (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 23

God. I just love this story. I actually "feel" what you are writing.

Thanks

Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 23

I don't usually review because I honestly don't feel worthy and can't ever articulate my feelings after I read one of your chapers.  I'm just utterly blown away by this story.  I feel these characters in my soul.  I have been where Bella is, but I never got the amends that she's getting from her Edward.  This story, I just love it.  

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 23

hmmmm not sure what i felt during this chap.

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 23

so bittersweet, sigh.

Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 23

Yay talking! Now Edward needs to grow some balls and start talking to her more! Loved the chapter :D

Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

Friend, Bella understanding her weird habit of playing with her own mouth is priceless. This is such a slow burn for me, but I'm hanging in there because your B/E have more depth.

Reviewer: KyuketsukiInOki (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 22

WOW -- it's been almost five YEARS since Edward thrashed her heart?  Yeah . . . wow.

So, I'm guessing, since it's been that long, that Bella has finished her schooling and has some kind of real job by now.  Cuz it's not mentioned or anything in this chapter.  Just kinda curious as to what she's doing.

And I am SO beyond glad that Bella & Jake didn't stay together, cuz I'm a consummate Jacob-hater.  Forever.  Yep.  Hate.  Him.

-Q

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow a lot of time has passed, but I like that you didn't dwell on things. You kept them moving. I like that Bella took the iniative and kissed Jake even though things between them didn't work out. The fact that she couldn't give herself to him wholeheartedly proves that she needs to talk to Edward, let all her feelings out.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 21

It's taken him some time but I think he's on the right track this time for real. He's really trying and I like that he's going back to school to pursue something he wants.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 20

My heart is in so much pain. How could he let himself relapse? Why wasn't Jasper there to keep him on the right track? Isn't he Edward's sponsor? Isn't he supposed to look out for him? Gah!

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 18

No! What the hell has happened to him? Damn him for being weak and having a woe is me moment...hurting Bella. I am proud of her at the end, trying to act like it doesn't hurt.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh, she told him she loved him and it was during a sweet moment. I'm surprised he didn't respond to it right away, he waited until later that night. I do hope they continue to date once Bella moves to Seattle.
I'm curious to find out what's up Rosalie's butt when it comes to Edward.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

I knew Edward felt deeply about Bella but I didn't think he'd be ready to tell her 'I love you'. I'm proud of him for doing so though.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh no, he's thinking Bella is too good for him. This is not good.

Reviewer: Lyssa Cer (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 22

I LOVE this story!!!  Can't wait for the update!!

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 22

Wow, this whole chapter was intense and so revealing of all the characters - for Bella, in the relationship with Jacob and how she just couldn't commit although she was with him for nearly 2 years and knew she loved him, for Jasper to let her know how messed up parts of his life were due to the drugs and drinking, how he was capable of really screwing other people in his desire to get and keep using drugs, even when he was with Alice, for Bella to see how she hadn't seen inside of the Alice and Jasper relationship and that she really didn't know what had been involved for the two of them, for Bella and Kate to rehash how Bella had still not gotten over her intense reaction to her loss/anger/betrayal at Edward's actions......... and the beginning of Edward's reveal to her, in his attempt to offer his apology to her...........  just an incredible chapter!!   ;)

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 22

OMG...your story breaks my heart over and over and over again....I of course am an alcoholic and I have hurt people int his way so I know these tales...but I so want to make amends and be allwed to make amends so these are such poignant moments....and I also know how hard it is to see epic old flames like this when you know that you still love them...

I love with teeth so much, it rips at so many old wounds....

xoxoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Katiedid (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 22

 

Started reading With Teeth this weekend and have truly loved it.  I love your writing style; no gimmicks or clichés, just heartbreaking, true to life storytelling.  Looking forward to the next few chapters.  Fingers crossed for a happy ending for B and E but know that doesn’t always happen in life

 

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved that Edward not only offered to drive Bella to Forks but also drove there a day or two later unconsciously. The moments between these two just get better and better. I just hope Edward doesn't regret what happened in Bella's bedroom.

Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 22

AAAAHHHHH! That's it??? I cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: lifeis1000 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 22

Please hurry with the final chapters!!!!  :)

Reviewer: katytx (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 22

WOW - I started your story today and just could not stop.

I cannot wait to see how their talk goes.  I am hoping that Edward wanting to talk to Bella about how he treated her will help him stay on the wagon.  My heart just sank everytime you wrote about him relapsing. 

I love HEA, but it may not be possible with this Bella and Edward.  I think this Edward love his Bella too much to bring her into his daily hell of trying to stay away from booze and drugs.

Can't wait to read your next update and see where the road takes these two.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 8

I love how much detail you give not only with their surroundings but also their fidgeting. Thanks for another great chapter.

Reviewer: pipi (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 22

why am I as nervous as her?

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