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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: dorano (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 26

Wow... this chapter was amazing.  All those emotions felt so real! Unbelievable writting... what a journey this has been!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter and thanks for leaving your thoughts.

Reviewer: KCBC (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 26

Sorta crying and loving this chapter...even if they can't make this thing work.  They really love each other and help each other so much.  Awesome hand jobs don't hurt either.



Author's Response:

Awesome hand jobs never hurt anybody. True words, my friend. True words. =)

Reviewer: Synecdoche (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 26

wow... that was intense! I'm so glad they've finally decided to give their relationship another chance.

As ever captivated... please update soon



Author's Response:

Dig your screen name. Place or figure of speech or both?

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 26

So sweet...reminded me of their first kiss in Bella's bedroom, all awkward and sensual.Oh, I'm going to miss this story so. Whatever happens, at least they are back together, and forgave each other. It's so clear they need each other, hopefully they can overcome Edward's struggles and forge a relationship. This time, with lasting results.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I love me some awkward....

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 26

YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES!!!!!!!!!!  Take a chance, Bella, please!!  Don't let this man go. 



Author's Response:

YES! Caps lock enthusiasm! Thanks. =)

Reviewer: labelle (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 26

So, so beautiful.  Such a mature love.  Really great writing.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 26

Absolutely perfect! Loved how you unwound their passion and uncertainties, inch by inch, exactly in the right time.

I will miss this story so much when you're finished!

Author's Response:

Right now I'm just glad to be done with the writing part, but I know I'll miss it in a few weeks.

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 26

Beautiful as always. My reviews of this story suck, because I am under a spell as I read. I hope Edward gets a good job, I hope he doesn't relapse, I hope they can be good together.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And no worries about reviews. I'm horrible at responding to people when they do comment. Call it even? =)

Reviewer: mollybloom (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 26

Oh my dear lord this is the most perfect story......so well written!
I'm a bloody broken record but this is by far my favourite.
For effing sake get yourself published woman!

Author's Response:

I love the tone of your comments. Seriously. Made me snort a little. =)

Reviewer: montannaleigh (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 26

amazing :)



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 26

awesome. i don't want it to end



Author's Response:

Last chapter was hard to write...

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 26

Thank you for the reasons I can't list. Just, thank you.



Author's Response:

"Just, thank you" right back at you. ;)

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 26

Oh I just so love the way you write their interactions, it is so honest and achingly beautiful, my throat literally swells with emotion.  I really do want an HEA of sorts for these two, they have in one way or another been holding out for each other.  They have grown and deserve the real relationship they have worked so hard for



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad the story is working for you.

Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 26

Wellll that chapter was definately worth the wait lol thanks!



Author's Response:

Ha! Hope the same can be said for the last one.

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 26

Talk about an approach avoidance conflict.  Can't wait for the last chapter to see how they make out, I am so hoping for a HEA, and at the same time I will miss this story so much.  You have a real gift for story telling.  Your Edward is so realistic, no personal experience here, but he talks to me.  Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

"...no personal experience here, but he talks to me." That's highly complimentary. Thank you. Thanks for taking the time to leave me some words.

Reviewer: obsmama (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 26

oh such a great chapter the had a real and true convo about what this would intale to get back together.  I loved it if nothing else you write such real raw emotions perfectly!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: sacaco (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

a gift, for you:

here is the direct link:

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l292/kattfight/withteeth.jpg

you don't need to use it, but I noticed you didn'thave a banner.

 

:)

Reviewer: mybluesky (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 26

Beautiful. Love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: kpsp95 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 26

Sweet chapter. They both seem to be in a good place with themselves and hopefully leading towards each other.

Reviewer: kpsp95 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 26

Sweet chapter. They both seem to be in a good place with themselves and hopefully leading towards each other.

Reviewer: kpsp95 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 26

Sweet chapter. They both seem to be in a good place with themselves and hopefully leading towards each other.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: x_darla_x (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 26

I love how you have had them on this incredible journey with all oddsa against them, but made it all work in such a real way. There was no deus ex machina; all of their reactions were organic, natural. I love the way you write and will sorely miss this when it's gone.



Author's Response:

I'm going to miss writing this story.

Glad to find a fellow deus ex machina hater (unless well executed), and thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: mzotou (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 26

omg this was absolutely amazing!
You never disappoint to maintain the reality of their situation , the way you portray everey step they take is so realistic and just fits to the story perfectly.

I have  no words..brilliant..



Author's Response:

You've got words; I read them. =)

Thank you.

Reviewer: uselessid90 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 26

oh god, I don't know if I'm gonna be able to handle the ending. 

 

I don't know if I have enough tissues for it. 

 

I know I'm gonna bawl. I feel like I know these two personally. 

 

Can't wait to see how you wrap this up:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting. I look forward to seeing what you think of the ending...

Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 26

Ahhh, I want them together so bad....I am glad that they talked and they realize that there are issues and that there will always be issues.

 

They are good together....



Author's Response:

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