I think they are already 100% in a better place this time around. I love them together...Bella is strong if not stronger than Alice.

You are doing these characters justice. The way you let them work through things, but still be honest and feel...

 

That's why I'm not a writer - I can't even explain how much i love your story. I'll be sad to see it go, but I've enjoyed every chapter.

I'm going to miss this story. :-(

This was a very intense chapter.

Wow, this chapter was so light in the beginning and so heavy at the end. Love can be really hard, I think that while Edward's past drug use does present certain issues Bella is more afraid of just letting go. I think that this might be an issue for her in any relationship. There is always something to be afraid of when you put yourself totally out there. Love does not always come all folded up in a nice neat package.

forgiveness is a road...a long windy sometimes bumpy road and in the end it's about faith - taking a leap and hoping for the best.

 

It's something we all do, taking that leap to fall in love.

 

This story has been truly poetic.

I just love the conversational dialogue that you write. In so few words you say so much. I can feel the heat and electricity between these two from here in Australia. They are perfect together. They have the act onconversation down pat even to the point where they are comfortable with each other in silence. But you know that. Thank you so much for taking time put of your busy social and homemlife to write this and give the priledge of reading for free. Kudos to you babe. Excellent

Sooooo good!

My belly is all tingly after reading this chapter. Crazy, I know, but Edward is just some kind of wonderful, agree? You wrote another beautiful, heartfelt chapter and although I am not looking forward to you ending this, I really want to see them have a HEA because they've been through so much pain and agony together and apart...they deserve it. Please be merciful and not have us wait too awfully long. Hugs!

So sad that it will be over soon!!  I love love love this story!!!  Will there be an epi or will the last chapter tie it all up?

 "It's perfect" .

I love this story. You pull out so much emotion. I love their conversations. They are difficult. But you make them so easy and sweet. It has taken them so long to get to this point in their relationship. Bella is so honest about her fear of her own short comings. You are too good. I am so lucky that this story was recommended or I would have never found it. Going to miss it when its over.