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Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

HOTT! lol good job.

Reviewer: Tira (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

love it!

Reviewer: swandive (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

u know that probably what meyer was thinking when she wrote it...she just couldnt put it on paper! :)

Reviewer: famousmercury (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent story!:)

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hahahahaha, awesome! :-)

Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was really good!

Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this.  Loved the part about the fruit.  Very sexy.  Would love to read EPOV.

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well done!

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was well-written & yummy!

Reviewer: bunbun81 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow...that was great. I got a little lost but that was at first. Then I was able to keep them apart. Good job. I liked your writing

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good job

Maybe you should add a EPOV

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Mmmm. I love voyeur Edward, and quasi-exhibitionist Bella.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

hmmmmm ... wish I had dreams like that

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

"He had unconsciously licked his lips whenever a piece of fruit had touched mine. I had been unable to think of anything else but his lips for the entire afternoon."  LOVE THIS!!

Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hmmm... It would be fascinating to see that scene from Edward's POV!

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