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Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
I was so happy when i saw this updated. :) Excellent chapter, but i am upset with Edward at the moment for lying to Bella. :( Loved it. Please update real soon :)
Author's Response: I'm glad the update brough you some joy. I know it was a difficult chapter but I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think everyone is upset with him, and me, but I hope we can be redeemed. New chapter coming soon! Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
OMG!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating. I know...it totally threw you didn't it?
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
Why?!?! did he have to be so mean?!? I'm trying to figure out the reasons for his reaction. Does he think Bella really wants Mike? I don't know. I guess I will just have to wait like everyone else. I have never asked this before, but please update soon!! I love your story.
Author's Response: I know he was very mean, but do you think Bella would have believed him any other way? She barely believed him just now. I know it hurt her, it hurt me to write it, but Edward will try to explain himself eventually. I will be posting an update soon, much sooner than I had originally anticipated, but I won't pin point a date.
Thanks for sharing and I'm glad you're enjoying my story.
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
Holy shit. I can't wait for the next chapter, though I'm pondering why Mike would go to such great gestures for Bella...Is it so he can prove his love to Jessica at the wedding? How humiliating.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter. Mike's reasons for why he suddenly started to lavish Bella, might just surprise you. Keep reading to find out why and what happens next. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
great chapter!!! i cant wait for the next one!!! im so excited for them to be outed!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing. Difficult chapter but I'm glad you liked it. The outing coming soon!
Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
I totally didn't see that coming. I hope the next chapter comes quickly. I'm sitting here with a box of kleenex trying to pull myself together. My husband thinks I have completely lost my mind. My heart is just as shattered as Bella's, so PLEASE post the next chapter ASAP!!!
I love your work. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: I am so glad you like my work and this chapter. It was difficult to write and I found myself all teary-eyed during it, but I managed to get it out. I know it came way out from left field, but Edward has his reasons for what he did and he will explain them to you. I hope, as he does, that he can be forgiven once he does. New chapter coming soon!
Thanks for sharing and for the rating.
Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
What the heck??
Oh Edward you are an ass right then. What are we going to do with you?
Love the update.
Author's Response: Glad you loved the update. He is being an ass but he thinks he has a good reason for it. He will explain himself very soon and hopefully find some redemption along the way. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
Oh my God, how unbelievably cruel... top this with the outing of Jessica and Mike and Bella is due for a good nervous breakdown...
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing and for rating this chapter. I appreciate it. Edward was unusually cruel here, but he will explain himself very soon. I promise. The outing coming next!
Reviewer: rocknredbrit (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
Oh my heart! I didn't see this coming at all! I hope that Bella still goes through with telling Mike because even though Edward broke her (for the time being) she still needs to be herself and find her right path.
Author's Response: She does need to find her path and she will eventually, but lots to come in between. Keep reading and I'll keep writing. I knew this chapter would blindside a lot of people, and I really hurt to write this chapter, but it was what Edward said he had to do. Since I know why he did it, I can understand and I hope eveyone else will too.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know!!!! I promise you will forgive me eventually.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
Ouch, my chest is actually hurting! You ARE evil, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I didn't mean to be evil, but there was a reason behind this I and you will find out soon. Sorry your chest hurts but I am glad you can share Bella's feelings in this chapter. Thanks for the review and the rating.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
This makes no sense. This pretty much ruins it. How could she forgive this.
Author's Response: It will make sense later, and most things can be forgiven, it's just how much grovelling you'll have to do in order to get there. Don't lose hope. More coming soon and you will find out the reason why Edward did what he did. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
My whole weekend is ruined now unless you are updating in the next day or so? I do want to know why he would say those hurtful things to Bella. Don't leave us hanging!
Author's Response: Oh no, I would't want to ruin your weekend. The response to this chapter was as I expected and the resulting effect on my muse is just wonderful! Should have a new chapter up sooner than I expected, but I won't pin point a date (though I will try not to ruin your weekend ;) ) Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 16- Breaking Wings
You should be cowering, leaving us like that! I hope that Bella still breaks it off with Mike, even if she doesn't think Edward wants her.
Author's Response: I know. I know. I am still hiding out on my island...oops did I just say that? Nevermind, no island here. Dont' worry, the reviews on this chapter so far have done so much for my muse early on this Friday morning, that I might just have an update for you sooner than I expected! Look out for it, and thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: SamiLep1 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
update please!!
i love it love it loooooooooooooove it
Author's Response: I'm glad you loooooooooooooooove it. Update coming soon.
Reviewer: KellieR (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
Love your story and I am looking forward to your next update! I hope we find out the truth about Jess and Mike.
Also as much as I would have loved a ripe and juicy lemon in this chapter, I am glad that they stopped themselves.
Author's Response: I am glad you've enjoyed the ride so far. More to come soon. Thanks for sharing. I think most people agree that even though we all wanted Bella and Edward to steam up some windows and cause a fire alarm or two to go off, we all want it after she's done with Mike.
Reviewer: 2grtkids (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
Stumbled on to this story and I have now spent the entire morning reading...Thank you!!! It has beed wonderful so far, you just need to follow your heart and soul sometimes. I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for sharing. I'm always happy to hear from new readers. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I hope you stick with it till the end. Next chapter coming soon.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
I know, I know, I fail as the awesomest reviewer. In my defense my teachers must believe that we have no socail lives and that our sole reason for being is to do homework. Moving on...
YAY!!!! Bella FINALLY sees reason!! I mean it wasn't even a choice here. I'd pick Edward over Mike any day. Who wouldn't???
I really liked the story about Christmas in New York. It sounds so wonderful. But then it was sad too because that was the last Christmas thye all spent together :(
The a day in the life of Bella thing was very well written. I loved it. It's so different from what life at the Estate is like for her. It all just seems so much more Bella.
Still waiting for Mike and Jess to be discovered. But then Bella can't really be as mad as because in a way she is cheating on Mike too. Just not for the same reasons or as extremely as Mike.
Excited to see what happens when the wedding is called off. That's gonna be drama!
I'm now going to check out your other story :D
~ B
Author's Response: B!
As always happy to see you reply here. Of course you don't fail as the most awesome reviewer. School and life can bog us down, but I'm glad you finally were able to comment.
I know everyone was happy to see Bella finally get herself together and realise that she belongs with Edward, YEAH!!!! I really liked writing this chapter as you got to see what Bella's life really is about outside of the stuff existence at the Newton estate. The Christmas in New York took me by surprise, but I just write what comes to me from the characters.
One more chapter to go before Mike and Jessica are found out. I know everyone has been waiting so patiently for it and it is almost here. I can't wait for it to be read as I have already outlined the entire chapter.
Glad to see you commenting on my other story as well.
More coming soon!
~C
Reviewer: missrenee (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
wow i am glad she picked edward. cant wait to see what happens when she tells mike and his mum but i am sure he is doing jessica anyway looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing. I'm glad you're enjoying it. More coming soon, I promise. Edward was doing an internal Snoopy dance when she chose him. Good for Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
So worth it! I am glad that she chose him. Now the cat needs to come out of the bag about Mike and Jessica.
Author's Response: De-bagging the cat in T minus one chapter. Thanks for sharing and reviewing.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
Even thoe I love this story, I found the chapter to be bit to repetitive ,yes we need to hear Edwards point of veiw but we also need the story to move forward without rehashing the whole last chapter the best part of the whole thing was almost to the very end. Hope you don't get mad it,s still a great story but some parts of this chapter needed to be cut. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Updating soon. Thanks for sharing and for rating. This chapter does repeat a lot from the last, but Edward wanted his point heard. It was actually going to be part of a longer chapter, however I decided it was best told from Bella's point of view. Thanks for your candour.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
great chapter! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
I'm a little disappointed that this chapter mainly just recounted what already happened. Though it's nice to sometimes have someone else's point of view, I don't think it was necessary to have the whole entire afternoon they spent together re-written in Edwards' POV. Some stuff could have been skipped. Now that we all know that she chose him and he's thrilled about it, I can't wait to read what happens next and how Bella breaks it to Mike.
Author's Response: Thanks for your honest appraisal of this chapter. I appreciate it. More coming soon.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
I'm kinda releived in a way, that they didn't have sex again, yet. I totally see your point of view in wanting to be free from anything. Plus, it'll make it that mucy sweeter when Mike and Jessica get caught! LOL
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 15- Basking in Her Light
OMG, I just found this story . Be still my beating heart!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing and for rating. I am so glad you joined me with this story. More to come soon.
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