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Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 4- Bounty Hunter
I'm officially addicted to this story. Sorry for the short review, I'm really behind and I need to get back to reading. Great job! ;)
Author's Response: At least this addiction won't harm you :) Thanks for sharing and rating.
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 3- Criminal
Uh oh! Wonder who that could be? I'm still feeling that Jessica was up to no good. Gotta get to the next chapter. Another good one. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing and rating. You are definitely on a roll :)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 2- Angel
Wow! Your attention to detail is amazing. Edward's POV was excellent. I'm dying to find out what happened. I have a sinking feeling that Jessica isn't as good of a friend that Bella thought. Well only one way to find out, huh? Great job! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed Edward POV. You might be right, but as you said, only one way to find out :) Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1- Stranger
Wow! Just found this story and I must say I'm glad I did. Great job! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for showing an interest. Always happy to hear from new readers. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: twilighteuphoria27 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 13- Moonlight and Valentino
loved this chapter so much!!
Bella's mustang "Bellas Heart" - that part of the story was so beautiful!!
when Edward heard her in the balcony was priceless hehe xD
Author's Response: This entire chapter was a one secong thing. My keyboard took me where the story wanted to go and I just followed. I loved the idea of Bella's Heart being a metaphor for Bella herself and of course, Edward had to discover it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far. Until next time!
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
So I kind of just skipped this chapter. Haha. Sorry I just don't really like lemons that aren't Edward/Bella. I'm also not like a huge Emmett/Rosalie fan cause I don't really like Rose.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
~ B
Author's Response: B
No problem. There is an Edward/Bella lemon in the future, just not quite yet. Until next time. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: twilighteuphoria27 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 12- Fatherly Advice
awwww loved how Edward went to check on her.
I'm glad that Mike and Jess are messing around hehe. I know they are right?? lol.
Author's Response: Edward is a sweetie isn't he :)
Keep reading, you might just be right, but I wouldn't want to spoil it for you ;) Thanks for sharing and rating.
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
Wonderful chapter; Emmett and Rosalie getting back together was great! And that was one hot lemon; you can write more of those any time ;)
Author's Response: Emmett and Rosalie had to get back together, this story wouldn't be complete without our couples ending up with one another. Glad you enjoyed the lemon. It seems to have gone over better than I anticipated :) There maybe one or two more in future chapters, but one for sure. Edward and Bella have to have their turn too. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: livedays (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
you rock i love it
Author's Response: Thanks! So do you! Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: edwardssinger (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
Very, Very good!! I think by now we have earned a detailed B/E lemon. Especially since you did so good at this one. MUCH LOVE!!
Author's Response: Awe thanks. I was nervous writing this, but it seems to have passed the bar in the readers eyes. An E/B lemon will be in the future I promise, just not quite yet. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
It was really good ... dont doubt that. It was hot and im SOOOOOOOOO very very very happy that they are back together again. Nobody deserves to feel pain like that. I feel really weird saying this, but I am jealous. I am jealous of their pain, I am jealous because they know the pain of losing someone you love (other than a family member or a friend) but I dont. I fear I never will. I want to know a love so great that it could break your heart, but I fear there is none left in this world we live in. I am depressed, cause nobody will take the time to get to knwo me. And I am alone. I will never know that kind of love.
Author's Response: Dear Reader
Check your email. There is a message for you :)
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 21- Unexpected
awwww, i'm so happy bella is gonna try...
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing. Look forward to hearing more from you over the following chapters.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
Great chapter! Great work on the lemon. It was smokin hot! I hope Rose and Emmett can continue to patch things up along with Bella and Edward. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing and rating LisaF29. I'm glad you thought the lemon was was a good one and that the rest of the chapter was as well. More coming. Until next time.
Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
Damn, that was Hot!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
loved it
Author's Response: Wonderful! Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
I was seriously so excited to receive this update today. :) You have no idea how happy it makes me. I loved this chapter so much. I loved how Emmett didn't give up and went to see Rose and fight for her. It broke my heart when she wasn't hearing him out and told him to leave. I understand where she is coming from but I was in tears the whole time through their reunion. I think the ending was just perfect for Rose and Emmett. You did a great job writing it.
I look forward to reading about Edward and Bella next. :)
Author's Response: Ange!
Thrilled to know this chapter was so well received by you. Emmett was lagging behind with Rose for far too long and he just needed the right incentive to fix things-helping Edward and the little talk from Jasper. Rose was definitely fully prepared to give him the boot out of her life permanently, but thankfully Emmett wasn't about to let that happen. It was very emotionally charged, especially for Rose. She misunderstood everything so much and it really hurt her. Glad you appreciated their reunion.
More Edward and Bella next time :) Until then, thanks for reading, rating and reviewing.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
That seemed just perfect for Emmett and Rose! What a reunion.
Author's Response: Glad you think so. Emmett and Rose have a more intense relationship than Bella and Edward, and with a lot more history, that's why they had a more volatile and intense reunion. Glad you enjoyed it. Until next time, thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Off Guard
Rose and Emmett always has the steamy hot sex.
Author's Response: Yeah they do. In my mind they have the more sexually charged relationship than the other Cullens and it just stays that way in my head, no matter what the story I create with them. However, this doesn't mean Edward and Bella's can't be equally hot ;)
Thanks for sharing and rating.
Reviewer: This Shattered Disaster (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride
AAH I was almost right haha.
Author's Response: Yes you were :) Hope it lived up to your expectations and that you enjoyed the ride so far. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: AngiJ (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 2- Angel
I love this story; great hook - I HAVE to keep reading. But, Edward's a little pansy-ish. Man him up, please :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate you saying so. I certainly hope you do continue reading. I look forward to getting your opinions of Edward as he progresses through the story. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: This Shattered Disaster (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 6- Collision
So far I lovd this, and I'm gonna take a wild guess that Mike is the guy that won't leave for Jessica, and Bella's pregnant?
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing! I won't spoil anything for you by telling what is and isn't true in that guess. You just have to wait and see for yourself :] I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I hope to hear from you on future chapters.
Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 21- Unexpected
It's a hit. Great job. I loved this chapter. Alice was a little sneaky but she's forgiven. Way to go Emmett! I love him in this one. Forgive him Rosalie! Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing! This chapter was a lot of fun to write for me, even though it did make me cry too. I loved the Bella/Alice interaction and that Edward's Plan B worked to some extent. I loved Em too. Look out for the next chapter to see what happens next with the gang.
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 21- Unexpected
I cried at the end ... <3
Author's Response: So did I :) Thanks for sharing and rating.
Reviewer: twilighteuphoria27 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 11- Friction
squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! lol Such a beautiful chapter!! you are pure genius. :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I do appreciate the feedback. Thanks for sharing and rating :)
Reviewer: 2grtkids (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 21- Unexpected
Totally a hit!!!!!!! A very emotional chapter, but so worth it. Finally, they can start on them. Thank you....look forward to the next update! Marcy
Author's Response: Thanks so much for sharing. I'm very pleased with how this chapter turned out and that everyone has enjoyed it so far. See you next update Marcy!
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