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Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 37 What I Want

Well I am not shocked how the 2 Bitches acted they are just upset. And I loved the car bit. And I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 37 What I Want

 WAY TO GO..lol I so cant wait for them to finally get it on, the suspense is KILLING ME..lol

Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 37 What I Want

Oh yeah I love she's so mature that she can do Carlisle in the front seat of the Mercedes in the parking lot of a mall and not care a shit about it!! That's what maturity's all about.  LOL

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 37 What I Want

Great chapter! I expected that people would be shocked about the two of them getting married. I should have known Lauren would be a bitch about it. But really, calling Carlisle old? She knows she's just jealous. Looking at that man, no onewould dare call him old. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Mia-Mia (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dartmouth Year 1, Part 1

I find this really difficult to read, because the strange way in which you use tenses makes it rather stilted. It's a shame, as it's a good idea otherwise

Reviewer: erhea (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

I cried when I started reading this story... And I still cry from time to time, as I progress reading your story.

I love the dynamics of the relationships, especially those between the Cullens.

I can honestly say that when I first read the summary to this story I was surprised, because I never imagined a Carlisle - Bella relationship, but you managed to write it so well.

Bravo to you, and keep those chapters coming !

Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

great job! this story is awesome! I'm tired of all the J/B stories as an alternate to E/B.. this is a nice change. :)

Reviewer: Lys (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

Please update soon! I always look forward to reading more of this wonderful story. :-)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

I'm surprised Bella is letting Carlisle drag out the change. Especially since everyone's been through college before... Regardless, I'm glad Aro and Marcus agree, though Caius is sure to cause some problems in the future. It never occurred to me that Sam would need to step down to stay with Emily. But that was really good thinking on your part... Great chapter!

Reviewer: edwardsgurl731 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 26

WONDERFUL SONG CHOICES!!!!!

Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

I still can't get over what an amazing job you are doing with this story.  I absolutely love Carlisle and Bella together.  You have done a phenomenal job taking us on this journey with them so far.  I am beyond pleased.

Nice job on the closure with Sam and allowing him to go off into the sunset with Emily.

Was Charlie saying more than that Carlisle was a good person or that he knew that Carlisle was a vampire?

I love your strong Bella.

Reviewer: seargentlambchop (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 6 Saying Goodbyes

Aaah. I can't stop crying. I have to pause, sob for a good 5 minutes, dry my eyes, continue reading. I have repeated this process since the beginning of your story. Everything is very well written, and I feel like I mourning with everyone there.

Bravo.

Reviewer: Lys (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

I enjoyed all of the conversations....I'm glad everything is going so well for the amazing couple! Thank you so much for clearing up everything so that Carlisle won;t have to worry any more. :-)

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

Ohh wonderfull! The conversations between Aro and Carlisle and Charlie and Carlisle were obviously well thought out and well written. Great job!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

yeah.. five more weeks... i think they're both going to combust before then! hehe

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

I enjoyed the interactiona with Charlie and Sue the most. Charlie is finally happy and in Love

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

I'm so happy that Charlie is over Renee and happy...that was my favorite part.  I'm not sure if I could live in the Forks house after losing two very dear members of my family....but I'm glad they redecorated for them....I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

Great chapter! The conversation with Charlie was very touching. I'm glad the conversations with Aro and Sam went smoothly. I can't wait till the wedding gets closer!!

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 35 Graduation Dinner

lovely graduation chapter.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 34 Pomp & Circumstance

I loved Bella's visitors.  I totally cried.  Much love

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

awwww poooor carlisle..lol

Reviewer: Cloudie day (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

LOVED LOVED this chapter! As always I seem to be watching Dancing with the Stars when reading chapters like this and can only think of Carlisle doing the Argentine Tango.. yum or that Paso Doble from last week. *sighs* update soon! ;p

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

Liked the talk with Sam and Aro. I liked the one with Charlie, as well as the description of how he'd changed because of Sue, the best. That was sweet because I dislike it when people turn Charlie into an overprotective jack-ass. it's good to see him understanding and putting Bella's happiness first.

yea, their wedding night is going to have to be the Super Bowl of lemons after all this build up! LOL I know you can do it!!!! =]

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 35 Graduation Dinner

Sigh.  Wonderful and sweet and thoughtful - all of them...Did she tell the rest of them about her "sighting"?

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 36 Conversations

Ok I am just wondering how Bella will take the news that he wants to wait another year. And if they do then i am wondering if thy could really make love. Cause how would the venom in his fluid effect her? Can't wait for more.

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