Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
I LOVED! tHERE WAS SO MUCH EMOTION IN THIS CHAPTER. WE FINALLY GET EDWARD AND ESME FINDING THEIR PEACE AND BELLA AND CARLISLE GET CLOSURE. NOW THEY CAN TRULY BE HAPPY.
I THOUGHT IT WAS BEAUTIFUL THE WAY U HELPED EDWARD AND HIS FEELING OF BEING DAMNED AND WITHOUT A SOUL. I LOVED THAT PART TOO.
OH AND CARLISLE AND ELEAZAR WRESTLING WAS JUST HILARIOUS. YOU ADDED THE LIGHTHEARTEDNESS THAT JUST SEEMED TO SET US UP PERFECTLY TO GO INTO THE WEDDING DAY WITH A SMILE. GREAT JOB!!!!
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Wow i don't review most of the time but i wanted to tell you i love this story.... i cried, i laughed, i was turned on.... its great.... i love how edward and esme came back.... keep going i know i at least want to know how the wedding night for bella is!!!!!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
I got my sheets all wet with the tears you provoked with this chapter! VERY emotional chapter... can't wait to read the wedding day ^^
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
is it too much if I allow myself to jump up and down and squee omg omg the wedding is next!!
Loved the respective pre-wedding parties. The thought of Carlisle tackling ANYONE in such a fun manner is amusing :)
Reviewer: Yecats86 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
That was so beautiful with Edward and Esme giving their final blessings, yet also funny with the advice and the guys acting like guys for a while.
Looking forward to the wedding, will it be up before christmas?
Reviewer: miiss_ness (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Battle
omg I cried the whole way through chapter 1
Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
That was so touching. Thank you for bringing Edward and Esme back one last time. It was so great. Thanks for the warning about needing kleenex. You were so right. I'll be anxiously awaiting their wedding day.
Again, you totally rock!
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
What a wonderful chapter! I loved the gift giving and the words of wisdom from all of the ladies especially Esme. As someone who has lost her mother I could really relate to Bella's feelings. Can't wait for the wedding!
Reviewer: way2old4this (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Yeah. I cried. Then I cried some more. SO excited for the next chapter!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Aww, that was so sweet! I love the way you brought Esme and Edward back one last time.
Reviewer: strokesfan84 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Wow. I'm a tough broad and when I read this, I was like, pshaw, I'm not going to cry... DAMN IT I'M CRYING! Thanks for a beautiful chapter!
Reviewer: Inazoo (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
OMG YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRIGHTING!
Reviewer: drhooper (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Battle
Omg ... The Edward and Esme parts of this story are SUCH tear-jerkers, especially this time around. So poignant. I've NEVER shed a tear, let alone let out a sob reading even the most well-written fanfic, but that definitely changed with this chapter. Thanks so much for such a beautiful story. You've got something truly special. I can't wait for the wedding!!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
so i laughed and cried even more from this chapter!! OMG the wedding is nearly here!!!!! I'm just as excited as Carlisle and Bella!!!
Reviewer: KateCayce (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
*sob* You were right! I went through 2 tissues!
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
The part with Esme and Edward, it's so beautiful.
Reviewer: megspinelli (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
so so so good! it was so sweet that esme and edward visited them. i kind of wished edward visitied bella and esme to carlisle but i can see why they wouldn't. it's very nice to read about all the vamps bonding over the wedding and sharing their experiences!
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Tears defiently fell. Closure is such a hard thing. Cant wait for the wedding.
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
I cant wait!! im so happy for them to find happyness with eachother...<sigh>
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Oh yes. Teary. I kind of wish Edward would show himself to Bella, too. One last goodbye? Maybe it would be too hard. Sigh...
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
I'm not exactly a ghost fan, but with this chapter you had me close to tears. Great!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
You did a lovely job! =] It was sweet and emotional without going over-the-top. It made me smile and go teary. Well done, you.
Can't wait for the wedding.
Reviewer: bpcullen (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Oh my - beautifully written... loved it! I am glad you brought back Esme and Edward one last time... can't wait till the wedding!!!
Reviewer: littlehill (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
Wow that was a great chapter. I know that they will tell each other about that. And that it's self will be a moment in it's self. Can't wait for the Wedding!!!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 41: Gifts and Visits
love it
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