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Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
Why to stand up Jasper. Cant wait for more. Poor Bella
Reviewer: k9border (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
such awesomeness... the hints with carlisle and bella... hmmm could it be? only time will tell... please write faster.
Reviewer: Hermya (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
Awww I really really want to read the next chapter. I've really enjoyed this story and the rebuilding that you've done with the family relationships. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
hmm it's kind of sad that Bella's managed to gain the group attention of others, but also understandable that she'd have some sort of response to seeing charactistics so closely tied to a traumatic event.
It's probably going to be a while, but it'll be interesting to see what role the Volturi play in later stages of the story (I'm guessing they'll be present at SOME point) hehe
Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
Another good chapter to see and feel whats going on with the Cullens and also with their new move and Dartmouth college for Bella.
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
I literally just read all 8 chapters of this straight through so much faster than I though possible. I cried for the first few chapters (I'm pregnant and a bit more emotional than most lol). I can't wait to know what happens. Anyways, this is my new addiction. Fuel it :)
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
I think i have a few things to say to you.
First, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE THIS SO DANG GOOD!? Couldn't you have made it terrible that way when sad parts come i could just be like, whatever and drop it. But no, you had to go and make this story all amazing and get me hooked.
Second, I cried like every chapter, thanks alot, my makeup is smeared! On the brighter side....
It is wonderfully written and very fluid throughout the whole story. Can't wait for more.
Word to yo momma,
Mj
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 8 Back to Reality
love it.
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 7 Isle Esme
I am so excited to see what New Hampshire will bring.
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 In Memorium
That was so beautiful and truly brought tears to my eyes.
Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 7 Isle Esme
Ok I. Was crying the whole time I read!! But its a wonderful story and I can not wait for more!
Reviewer: k9border (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Battle
Very well done, I look forward to the next chapters, keep up the great work, sad, but great. Warning! If you haven't read make sure you have the hanky's nearby. thanks for sharing with us.
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 7 Isle Esme
Atleast they are starting to heal...I like Carlisle in this chapter
Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 7 Isle Esme
Wow, a whole year passed already. I loved everyones POV, and how theres healing going on. Bella is definitely feeling what I think she should be feeling...not wanting to find someone else. After all Edward was her soulmate.
Looking forward to how she adjust to college life, specifically Dartmouth.
Thank you for pouring yourself out in your story. You would have to be a person with so much compassion to bring this story to life.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 7 Isle Esme
Nice little progression through the year! Smoothly executed and you ended the chapter with sort of a tease. Nice!
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 7 Isle Esme
Holy cow!! I think this is the saddest freakin' story I've ever read...like, ever!!! I just started it tonight (took me awhile to work up the courage to try it as I'm amazingly chicken about character-death stories) and I read the whole thing so far in one sitting. I cried CONSTANTLY and now have a stuffed-up nose & a headache!! Don't feel bad, though, because on the upside you apparently are a VERY skilled writer and you have a fantastic story on your hands if your readers can just handle the emotional trauma (and the headaches from too much crying!) I look forward to reading more, esp as the Cullens start another chapter at Dartmouth, and to seeing how the closeness between Carlisle & Bella develops. Great work! Update asap!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 7 Isle Esme
loved it.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 6 Saying Goodbyes
so sad, i hope they enjoy life on the island
Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 Saying Goodbyes
Numb, hurt, void, lost. Look what you've done to me. they are all leaving Forks now...gawd, it's so hard with. You want to stay for all the wonderful memories but yet you want to run away from all the hurtful memories. How do you go on without your Edward or your Esme?
Just remember, please no hookup with Carlisle and Bella, okay? Just wouldn't be right. Thank you.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 6 Saying Goodbyes
I'm glad that Bella had a chance to talk with Billy and Charlie and clear a few things for herself so that, hopefully, she can allow herself to heal on the Isle with the Cullens.
Reviewer: scottlee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Battle
Its so frustrating that canon Bella is an idiot, know it all teen. I can't read this knowing Bella is an idiot who killed Edward.
Reviewer: RedSummer (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 5 In Memorium
Seriously, I'm going to cry! Very moving and beautifully written. A wonderful piece of writing.
Reviewer: RedSummer (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 3 Letters
OMG! It's just so sad! Brilliantly written and wonderfully characterised. This is a fabulous story so far. Reading the next chapter right now!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 6 Saying Goodbyes
I hope that when you died, you knew that you were my choice.
boo hoo... more crying, you write sadness well
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 Saying Goodbyes
I loved Bella's words to esme and edward great job.
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