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Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

long time no reading!!!!!!!!  I am glad to see  you are back!!!!

So we get a little bit more info, but not clearly enough....I bet that was what you were going for right?

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am so glad you're back to posting! I am completely intrigued with whatever happened to Bella and cannot wait to see her relationship with Edward develop.

One point, I think Tony & Maddie talk way too advanced for their age. Especially Maddy. Oh well. Details, details. It's all golden anyway! 

Can't wait to read more. Please update asap!

Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

i like this story a lot its really good



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Tweemad (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

Cute story!  But I am having trouble believing that Maddy and Tony are only 2.  They act and talk like they are about 5 or 6.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing. I am completely clueless when it comes to a child's development so let's say taht they're very advanced for thier age.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

Crap!!!!! I hope the kids are OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I guess you'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out -cue manical laugh- just kidding. Come on, could anyone hurt little Maddy or Tony? Oh ye of little faith.

Sorry, I'm a tad crazy today. I think I've been cooped up in the house for too long. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

oh god...that just caused my stomach to drop!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I apologize for your stomach dropping! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

I see... I understand... I've wrote a few things like that myself... Writing out like that, putting yourself in the character kinda helps... I havn't posted any of my stuff here though lol kinda nervous for other people to read it... But I am so looking foward to more chapters :)

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is already completely addictive! And the background on Edward's and Tanya's relationship was very interesting and original. I can't wait to read more. Please post more asap!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 3

I LIKE THIS: "I wanted to be loved. Not a familial kind of love, or a friendship, but the passionate kind of love that is almost sinful and should be illegal in all fifty states, Puerto Rico and Guam. The love that is impossible to run from and can pick up, mend and put back together all the pieces of a broken glass, no matter how shattered it was."



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It's funny, I went up to visit my family in MI for a few weeks, but my fiance had to come back home before me, so when I wrote this, I called him up at three a.m. and read it to him. He wasn't too pleased, but said it was good. Anyways, thanks for the review and I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

nice.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

What a place to end this chapter ;-(  (lol)! 



Author's Response:

Bella's dream will definitely be explained later on in the story. It may take a while, because what happened to Bella is what happened to me and the feeling that she felt are all based on a true story, but I'll try to update as quickly as possible. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh my gosh, thats hilarious, highly inappropriate, but hilarious lol

Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

I really love this story! I can't wait to read more chapters... I'm curious about Bella's dream... Will it be explained more in fututre chapters?



Author's Response:

Bella's dream will definitely be explained later on in the story. It may take a while, because what happened to Bella is what happened to me and the feeling that she felt are all based on a true story, but I'll try to update as quickly as possible. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: miszjuicyx0x (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 3

keeeeeeeeep going(:



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! Sorry it takes me forever to respond, but I keep on forgetting to check the website for reviews. FFn always sends them to you, but Twilighted doesn't.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 2

great story. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

"Some people fall in love after hearing a perosn's voice. Others, not so much."  That's funny!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Honestly, I had forgotten to put a song lyric in, and needed a quote, so I just made one up off the top of my head. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, and the comment Maddie picked up from Alice and Bella...funny.....but I bet Edward is going to read them the riot act for it.... 

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

I feel sorry for bella for all the past high school torture.

And poor Edward....he mentioned his daughter's scars... 

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

LMMFAO  with Edward's daughter that was priceless.   I have to say I love the story and I can't wait to see where you take this story.  I'm really excited.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Bexsta (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

You got me with that beginning. haha I thought that was actually happening to Bella.

I'm hooked. This interesting start can only lead to more interesting plot twists.

Update soon. :)

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