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Reviews For Long Journey Home
Reviewer: tammy9901 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 12:00 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

hope you continue this story. its really good.

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Can't wait to see how it progresses!!!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Family

Sorry I'm late in reading... RL is a pain...

 

Awesome, as always!!

Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

that jerk James! he screwed everything up. my hypothesis is that he hacked her email and erased it, and purposely dropped her phone in the puddle yup! and of course pretended that all the numbers in her phone disappeared. am i right???

Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

love this story! Will Edward get the letter?? So curious!

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Oh, no. Cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: GeorgiaRee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

It really sucks that she wasn't able to talk to him.  I'm pretty sure we can all guess James is not so innocent as he seems...bastard!  Wonder what he is going to think when he finds pit she's preggers. 

Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

i LIKED BELLA'S LETTER IT WAS HEART FELT IN THEIR CASE IT REALLY SEEMED LIKE BAD THINGS COME IN THREES .

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

*sniffles* That was a beautiful letter that Bella wrote to Edward - heartfelt and real. I truly hope it makes it to Edward safe and sound although I wonder what a few days delay might allow...

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Wow I hope Edward gets this letter before its to late. I feel as if James is going t o be up to something, I don't know why.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

and so it goes...Edward will have tried to contact her, and think she cut him off, and she'll think he cut HER off, and then baby will have no babydaddy. Sniffle.

This is going to be very, very sad. :(  Edward will be devastated when he finds out...

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

this is gonna get bad

Reviewer: Emmyjazzylove61 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

I can't wait to see the next chapter! update soon please!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

GAHHH  ... of course that happened. And when the phone rand it was edward ... and James found out and deleted all her email accounts and sutff ... either that or it was just fucked up luck ! GAHH ... crazy ... now he is going to miss the letter. Or someone else will read it and he wont get it :( this is messed up ... edward should show up like 7 months later to a pregnant Bella and then see his reaction ... that would be crazy although it would suck big time for poor bella!

Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

I can't wait for the next one. I'm anxious to see what happens and I'm wondering if James had something to do with Bella email mix up. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Oh my gosh. It's so sad that Bella can't catch a break, between Lauren and James and her cell and email and finding out she's pregnant that really blows. I wonder if Edward will get the letter, afterall the hotel never gave him the message. Please update soon!

Reviewer: luckychris37 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:36 AM · On: High School Sweethearts

i like the letter where she tells him it was unexpected but she consider the baby to be made out of love. so how could she think of anything but keeping the baby.

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

I really like this.

 

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

love this story, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Very well played! :)

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Ugh

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

well i know james has something to do with all of this ! cant wait to see where this story goes !

Reviewer: britishangelsoul (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Oh I hope he gets the letter. :(

Reviewer: cofey (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

i get that her server crashed etc ... but surely they have internet cafe's ???? and doesnt she have their cell numbers .. surely she could call him???? bet the letter gets lost or misdirected or they move around so it takes ages to get to them ... then what??????????

looking forward to seeing where u go with this fic

hugs ety

Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Technical Malfunctions

Such a great chapter.

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