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Reviewer: Gran6 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2024 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Look Out Tundra...Here Come the Cullens
I am absolutely in love with this Edward and Bella! You are so very talented and I can't wait to read more from you.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2013 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Gawd, Edward is an idiot. Why is there a debate about changing bella?. He knows the 'has' to do it. What an Fing idiot. His decision making skills are the worst.
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Edward needs to lighten the eff up. Emmett is only joking around, thats emmett. Learn to take a joke you tool.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2013 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Company's Coming...Not in That Way
Ah ha, MN called out of nowhere to give the last glorious cockblock of the day. LOL
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2013 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
I can really see why Alice is his Favorite sister. She has got his back in everything.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2013 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 34 - No Good Deed Goes Unpunished and the Other Shoe
I don't get it... she is literally dying by the second, and could die any moment and now is the time everybody choose to pause and have private conversations. FTW. That doesn't sound like edward. I would have bitten her and have her call from somewhere else. F taking a chance like that!.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2013 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
Glad charlie didn't make a big deal out E&B hooking up under his roof. I guess when your getting some yourself, you want to make sure everyone is as happy as you. LOL.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2013 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
First off, It was edwards Idea to go to the meadow, so how did JB know where to meet him?.
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Jb has is own girl now. Edward is sure breathing a sigh of relief. That guy seemed like a hound that would never give up.
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Billy has one leg in the grave, good news is he won't feel it!. LOL.
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I don't see how getting head is punishment. But if you want my number we could date for 4 yrs then I could get you mad at something random, and then you could show me exactly how that turns into a punishment. ;D.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2013 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
I think its absolutely Belltastic that she would want Edwards Volvo as her new car. She has always been against frivilous spending. This seems right.
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But seriously, pissing bella off before she met up w/ the mongrel...Bad move homie.
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Taking one look at Rez life and Bella was back on the wedding wagon, quick fast and in a hurry. LOL>
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2013 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 7--A Day at the Springs and an Unexpected Request
Things are going well, the couple is discussing 'bringing it home' before the wedding night. Which I kinda mind. To me them working up to the wedding night is enough.
I see alot more coins going into the swear jar in your version; not just emmett.
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JB is requesting a meet Bella. So what, cancel all plans and run over there? F him. Jk. I know she was going to go anyway as suppport for charlie. Billy doesn't seem to have much time left.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2013 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 3-Desperate Times and Desperate Measures
Ha, This is very OOC Edward. But I do like it better than to suuuppperr repressed SM version. He read normal, and doesn't stress me the eff out.
Reviewer: Once bitten (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Esme's Advice
Cute , I have never read a story that contained info regarding Edwards( mom and Dad)...
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Look Out Tundra...Here Come the Cullens
Wow the brain tumor was a new one and made for a sadder ending than BD but overall I thought it was pretty good.
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Look Out Tundra...Here Come the Cullens
What a awesome story! I laughed, I cried, I moaned at the stupidness that can be Emmett sometimes, but gosh do I love brother bear!
Can't wait to find whatelse you have written. Thank you!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Look Out Tundra...Here Come the Cullens
Great take on Bella's change! Everything seemed as natural as breathing, even though they no longer need to. I so very much enjoyed this story, you did a wonderful job with my favorite characters, and they had a great time doing it!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 34 - No Good Deed Goes Unpunished and the Other Shoe
I don't blame you one bit for crying as you wrote this chapter. It's pretty sad to find out your bride has a brain tumor, even though you have the ability to save her for all time. Renee becoming hysterical was to be expected, but Charlie was a surprise. At least he knows he won't completely lose his daughter. Still it was tough to see them crying on each other, and don't get me started on Jacob breaking down! Pretty emotional stuff!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Out With the Old and In With The New
Just when things are going so well, something bad is about to happen. There's a reason Jasper and Alice are here and I'm betting it's not a good one!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Christmas Sexcapades
This was a really nice Christmas for the newlyweds, except for not much alone time. I think Edward really dodged the bullet, when he and Bella had it out over her change, At least they got clear about spending too much time with Rick.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Why would Alice still see Carlisle changing Bella? I thought Edward was reluctantly going to do it hinself? He better not screw this up and have Bella never forgive him!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Happy Hour
Sex must have really addled Edward's brain if he thinks Bella will meekly accept that no changing deal. She will be so hurt at his not considering her feelings, she may do him damage. Of course, if he damages her trust in him, it's all over anyway. How can he be so stupid?
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
This is a little different for Edward, as well as Bella. It's always exciting to set up your first home together. I love reading about their grand adventure, starting a new life together. Hopefully Bella's lab partner won't be a problem, and Edward won't have to kill him!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Afterglow...and Aftermath
Lovely honeymoon, judging by the list of repairs to be made on Isle Esme. Of course only Alice and we readers got the full benefit of the how!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Paradise Found
Truly sounds like heaven on earth, especially for a honeymoon couple!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Torture at 40,000 Feet
I think Edward finally scared Bella when he had to bite his own arm to save from biting her. You should always be careful what you wish for, just in case you get it. This is starting out to be a fabulous honeymoon.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Going to the Chapel
Just right, a beautiful, romantic wedding and lots of pictures at the reception. Then dancing, toasting and cake, followed by lots of hot, passionate lovemaking. Sounds perfect to me!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Company's Coming...Not in That Way
At least they are in the home stretch now, so maybe Bella and Edward can hang on just a bit longer. Poor naive Edward, thinking he could escape Tanya's predation. She's relentless! Maybe a round with a wolf will calm her down a little.
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