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Reviews For In the Still of the Night [one shot]

Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very cute! This is not a situation that I have ever imagined E and B in, but you pulled it off brilliantly. I really liked how you incorporated the correct lingo into the story; having the language fit the time instead of the modern language being glaringly out of place like you see most of the time. Great job!

Reviewer: french_hornbby3 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

great story. i enjoyed every word of it :D

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it :)

It really means alot.

Cheers again lovely

xox

Reviewer: Cadance_Sparrow (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Absolutely LOVED this, ahaha, especially the bit about the Winnebago. Ahhaa, amazing.

Author's Response:
Tah very much, me lovely :) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

And yes, I thought it'd be a nice change from the typical tent reference ;) (and we all know what Edward's packing in the trouser department mmhmm....)

Reviewer: Hawklore (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great o/shot! Loved the scene you painted here - the characterisation and language was suitably authentic. And of course, Edward/Eddie is the ideal man - perfect combination of adorkable nerd and leather-clad bad boy. Swit swoo!

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review, it means alot to me to see that someone has enjoyed it and of course I'm really glad that I got the lingo down :)

Yes, I wanted to have my cake and eat it too - I think everyone's got a soft spot for the secretly hot nerd and the 'bad boy' in the leather jacket and this way you get both. Perfect.

Shooby doo, uh huh!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

I can't believe Bella couldn't recognize him!

Anyway, amazing writing! I wish you would continue this, or add more one-shots!

Author's Response:
Well we all know that Bella can be a bit stupid sometimes :) and of course he was dressed incredibly different - nerd to rebel!

Cheers so much for the review, it means alot.

I'm pretty sure that it'll stay a one shot, for the moment at least ;o)

Reviewer: cfinch (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

AMAZING, but just a note: Dartmouth didn't become coeductional until 1972. However, it's an au fic already so it's not a big deal :)

Author's Response:
Thank you :) And you know what, I hadn't even thought about researching that! Looked up all the other things but it didn't even cross my mind; maybe it's because I'm english? Haha, thanks again :o)

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good and original period piece. I would have never thought to put Bella and Edward in the 50's but it works. Especially liked the pocket protector!

Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I thought it'd be really fun to see them in a sort of Grease era but them being older.

And the pocket protector - that pwns me hard. I thought it was funny to put how much Bella lusted after it ;)

Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very cute story. It was a clever way of using Edward/Bella's repressed love theme. I think the reason Twilight is so popular is because of the repression. Good job!

Kudos on the use of The Lord of the Flies, I love that book too.

Author's Response:
Thank you :)

That's a really interesting point actually! I think that's true now that I think about it.

And Lord of the Flies, well I used it because it kinda fitted with the time period (even though I have no clue if they would study something that had been out for three years or something!) and I'd studied it endlessly for school so it made sense. It is a good book aswell :o)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like it!!!! I haven't read a 50's theme story before... I like sexy Eddie and Izzy, (as well as Edward and Bella) I'm glad they had sex...With the 50's theme, I was afraid they were going to be frustrated! :)

Author's Response:
Cheers so much for reviewing :)...and is if I wouldn't let them have sex! This is Edward and Bella we're talking about ;o)

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