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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 13

This was a great chapter! I loved everything about it!!

Please update soon?

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

great chapter! can't wiat for the next one!!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 13

God I love this story!

I just adore the love and passion these two feel for each other and I so hope that they can have a baby some day!

Keep up the great work!  Look forward to every chapter!

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 13

thanks for another great chapter!

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 12

Go Preggers!!!  WoooHoooo!!!

Reviewer: 2grtkids (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 12

I am really loving this story.  Hmmm....shooting blanks...or not??  You have me wondering.  Can not wait till you update.  Thank you!

Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 12

toooo sweet, i am really hopeful to where this story should go. lets hope you are thinking the same way.

thanks really enjoy this story.

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 12

Thanks for updating! :-)

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 12

Cute - I love that they are just so comfortable with each other!

Charlie was great.  I always find it endearing that he is always a little wary of Edward, but knows that he and Bella fit.

The sexin was HOT!  And I am with you - a weekend with Edward...... bliss!

Reviewer: KiwiEdfan (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 12

Sending you a review from accross the ditch!

Im loving your writing and this story. Your detail is just great!

Hope its not too long before another update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for that!  I love NZ - my favourite holiday place.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 12

Yep a weekend with Edward was just what the doctore ordered and Bella is one lucky girl. Meeting Charlie went very well and provided Edward doesn't screw things up...well he probably has a "in" with Charlie. LOL...now all who's left to win over is Jake.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 12

soooooooooooooo love it

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 12

Ah, to have the freedom of nothing to do but stay in bed all day...sigh...

Things seem to be going very well for these two.  Hope they continue to stay as smooth.

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 12

that was really really sweet ! :))

Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 12

A weekend with Edward, just what the doctor ordered. Great chapter.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 12

Amazing!

This story is seriously getting much better with every chapter! It has definitely improved since the first chapter. I feel such a strong urge to review whenever I read something I like (or hate, which i think has happened once in my whole life), and I'm starting to really want to review your writing!

Keep up the fantastic work and please update soon!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 11

Excellent work!

I enjoyed this chapter so much, and not just because of the lemon (although that certainly helped my opinion go up!)

Do you have a picture of the dress?

Keep up the great work!

 

Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 12

I just love this story!  So sweet, and sexy, too!

Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 12

That was some great fluff!!! I love me some fluff!!!  I'm wondering about the whole "been about 4 years" since he was tested for sperm production.......a lot can happen in four years!!!!!  I'm really hoping they get a big suprise!!! Anyway, what a weekend...gettin' to dress up and gettin' some great lovin' from Edward, how could a weekend get any better??!!!  Great Chapter.....I must say i was just thinking when they get back to work...how are they going to keep thier hands off each other????  It's gonna be hard!!! (tee hee HARD!!)LOL! Keep up the great work!!!

Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 12

Great!!! Love reading this!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 12

Delightful and loving chapter.  Bella and Edward sure make the best couple.  Everything just flows right for them.  Then having Charlie meet Edward and actually appear to like him.  Edward is so sweet, definitely would be marvelous to spend an entire weekend with him.  There's probably not many women around the world who would have a different opinion of that.  Will Bella become pregnant from Edward?  Since he hasn't been tested in 4 years.  Things could change.  It would be nice if he could actually father a child naturally.  Looking forward to additional chapters to see how the story will progress from here.

Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 12

Awesome  chapter!!!  Keep them coming:)

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 12

love it.

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 12

beautiful, wonderful chapter. THANKS

Reviewer: kodak16 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 12

cute chapter wish i could spend a weekend with edward... cant wiat for the next update!!!!

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