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Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 15

What a perfect way for our lovers to meet after being away from each other for so long!  That rocked!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 15

great chapter! update soon!!

Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 15

Yeah, definitely would not complain about being stranded...


Thanks for the update-Kate


Reviewer: eifeltwr (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 15

Thank goodness Bella's plane landed, in the RIGHT city!!  Such a great story.  I get excited every weekend knowing that I get to read the newest update of your story..  Please keep it up.


Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 15

Well first I think they'll play checkers, and then move on to shutes and ladders.  That'll last them a few hours and then they can watch Finding Nemo.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 15

love it.

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh yes....any hotel and the Edward Cullen is a great fantasy :)

Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 15

Stranded in a 5-star hotel with Edward Cullen?  What we wouldn't give, right?  Right.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 15

its 5 stars for 5 star sex

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 15

It almost makes me sad that I live in Southern California.  No snow here.  Ever...


Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 14

just found your story again and was excited there were so many chapters. Love them! can't wait for more!

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hahahaha oh dear!! At least someone was nice enough to tell you.

Perfect date...I dont know that I would have the self control that Bella had if Edward was looking at me like that...grrrrrr

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 6

God Edward just says all the perfect things...cant wait for the date.

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 5

OMG!!! That was...phew! hot!!

Edward certainly knows what he wants eh....wel that kiss certainly changes things now!!!

OK next chapter here I come...

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 4

Woah, that was rather a hot chaste kiss! Lucky lucky Bella!

Great chapter, I'm glad you are writing from both POVs!!
Ooo whats it going to be like a work with these 2 next!! The tension just keeps on building... :D

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

"Edward Cullen was sexy as hell" Plain, simple, and the truest statement of all !!

Im really enjoying this story, it's funny to see Bella thinking she has no chance with Edward...shes not very good at picking up his body language eh...glad there's a certain meddling pixie to help things along!

And Bella surely wont be the only one dreaming about him in the privacy of her own home...mmmm mmmm

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 2

I completely agree with Bella...Edward holding a sweet! Makes a man even more attractive.

So my christmas list is your Jasper, and now your Edward....I've been a very good girl this yeat :)

Hopefully these kids will get to see each outside of work at some point...?
Please tell me they do it on a desk though at some point..mwahahaha

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

ummm Vampires don't exist?? What is this nonsense you speak of :)!!! you'll be saying there's no such thing as shapeshifter?!?!

So I just finished reading your AMAZING A/J story....and trying to cheer myself up so I'm trying your other story..(and no waiting for updates for me..good times)

Something fishy going on with Edward here....whats so secretive??? 

Im British so not weird for me, but I didnt realise the American system was different!?!   

Well, you've done it again...i'm hooked already...god...the tension is built up here....and docward...swoooooooooon!!! Please tell me you have a pic of Edward in his doc uniform...needa visual on that one :)


Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

can't wait to read more

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 14

so sweet

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 14

Yay! :-)

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 14

Edward and Bella celebrate Christmas a day early with his family.  Then he takes her home and spends time with her and exchange their Christmas gifts.  wonderful gifts on both sides.  Then she flies to visit her mom for a few days.  Boy talk about hard on both of them being apart.  It's great that they are talking to each other daily, but still not the same as being together.  Bella leaves Florida to fly back to Seattle.  Their time apart is almost over.  Nice Phone lemon.  Looking forward to future chapter.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 14

Bounces around with anticipation...Christmas with those two is likely to burn the house down! It's great to be reminded of young love and the sorrow of separation. Brought to mind my seperation of my boyfriend and the thrill of being reunited back then...sigh...yes many grand memories. That Christmas was definatly one to remember!

Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 14

They are so in love! I have a feeling that Bella is preggers.  Thanks for the great chapter.

Reviewer: flippa (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

lmfao omg you must have been mortified . im realllly enjoying this story

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