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Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:05 PM · On: 11 Millais

nah edwards a moron of epic proportions, i hate when people say shit like "i think i'll always love this person" because thats bullshit, fondness and a love over memories are not being in love with someone, he needs to grow a pair, your bella is fucking amazing, this is one of the first stories where i think she should be with a guy better than edwards character because sad emo face is creepy :P awesome job can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:54 PM · On: 11 Millais

I like the battery reference.

Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:09 PM · On: 11 Millais

yay, some answers. I like the easiness they have with one another, and also how quickly that turns in other directions. I liked their discussion about Hamlet, it was very realistic.

The art references are fantastic, I love Bella's paintings, you describe them so vividly I can almost visualise them. And of course ArtWard/BikerWard is so lovely. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:08 PM · On: 11 Millais

Excellent chapter.  I am loving this story.

Consider this a bribe for an outtake.

 

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:59 PM · On: 11 Millais

Bella kindness is slowly seeping out into the story.  It's interesting to see how controlled she is with so many of her responses.  It's clear she is infatuated and perhaps a bit sad that Edward isn't really available for more than friendship.  The kiss at the end was terribly sweet.  I know you aren't writing Edward's POV, but I would give way more than a penny for his thoughts after the kiss...

What's your favorite kind of chocolate?...Happy to arrange delivery for you for further information on Edward's POV...

Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:42 PM · On: 11 Millais

I really like how Bella and Edward's friendship is progressing. I think it's important for her to know what he's dealing with

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:06 PM · On: 11 Millais

AWWWW!! Have I told u I wait impatiently for your updates and do a little happy dance when they show up. Keep up the great work -just gets better and better. Hey, I would so love an EPOV every once and a while because I would love to here what he has to say about your Bella - I think she is quite incredible and would love to here what he thinks. Just every once and now and again, ugh, no real committment but just a little taste - now u should know I am not to proud to beg - so here I am begging - PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope that is a good as chocolate!!!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:44 PM · On: 11 Millais

Very interesting about Edward's past with Tanya.  I like how you didn't make her into this horrible person, just someone who wants different things than Edward.  Great chapter!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:13 PM · On: 11 Millais

Ughhh... This story is wonderful, but it is making me seriously sexually frustrated...their chemistry is undeniable, but I almost feel like they are moving forward at a snails pace....it surely keeps me on my toes though.

Can't wait for another update....LOVE this fic!

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:38 AM · On: 11 Millais

Awesome awesome chapter!  I can't wait for resolution!!!!!

 

Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:57 AM · On: 8 Rembrandt

Okay, so my hubs and Brad Pitt both have a Triumph Speed Triple...its a 3/4 position back, not a half position like a crusier...so, I am guessing it's a different Triumph...

I think Eddie has a thing for Bella...he really doesn't like other guys touching her...

Totally loving this story!

Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:55 AM · On: 11 Millais

I hoped he slept in Bellas bed but you can´t get it all I guess. But isn´t sleeping on the sofa very sensible? Or did I just have less cautios "friends" at the university? There is something about charing a bed with a male "friend"....

Hmmm, where was I? Oh, yes I was just going to say that I´m so hooked and I can´t wait for more Art school!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:52 AM · On: 11 Millais

thanks for another great chapter

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:39 AM · On: 11 Millais

Oh, this was a sad chapter!  Edward is nursing a broken heart and Bella has to deal with the fact that Edward is not open to anything other than friendship.  And he's leaving!  Poor Bella, but she is being a good friend by encouraging him to talk about it!

Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:24 AM · On: 6 Kirchner

So, my husband has a Triumph, and to me they are so much sexier and sleeker than a Harley...when I think of Harleys...I think of fat bald old dudes in leather vest...when I think of Triumphs...I think of Brad Pitt...cuz that is what he has....

 

Loving the fic BTW!



Author's Response:

Triumph's are hot.  Sleek, classic, and I saw one Saturday that I nearly eloped with.  I didn't know Pitt rides a Triumph.

Reviewer: nepenthean_kiss (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:06 AM · On: 10 Caravaggio

fabulous! now we're (they're) finally getting somewhere!

Reviewer: manal111 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:59 AM · On: 1 Michelangelo

I really like this fan fic. Although, I find this Edward very vague.I do not understand him. What is he thinking and his feelings for Bella I can not understand. That's why writing his POV will be very helpfull.

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:31 AM · On: 11 Millais

great chapter..it was interesting to learn that about edward

Reviewer: g8r_gal (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:52 AM · On: 11 Millais

I love your Edward and Bella.  I squee every time I see an update for this.  You've got me hooked. 

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:08 AM · On: 11 Millais

Good chapter, we finally find out Edward's deal. Bella bet get her skates on, cause he'll be gone soon. Or will he........

 

Reviewer: Colena (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 03:49 AM · On: 11 Millais

OMG they kissed!!! I have to confess that I would love to read the EPOV too!! 

Especially to see what he's thinking about the part with the kiss! I have not chocolates with me but I have a review;)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Elli_goes_into_the_Twilight (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 03:30 AM · On: 11 Millais

This story makes me sad, its really quite emotional  ):

Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:48 AM · On: 11 Millais

hmm always wondered what licking a battery would be like, i guess i have my answer. great chapter!!! cant wait for more edwardness!!! great story!

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:28 AM · On: 11 Millais

Oh man, these two kids have some issues to work out!  I loved Bella's straight forward attitude in this chapter; and I found her view on women's portrayl in literature very interesting.  I think it's important for girls to realize that they don't have to play into the whole 'damsel in distress'/fragility thing, and that they can be strong, resilient individuals. Anywhos...I'm still lovin' this story, and I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:01 AM · On: 11 Millais

This chapter is a downer. :/ I feel bad for both of them - Edward, for Tanya not loving him enough (it's not cool to love someone but want to change them) and Bella, for crushing on Edward when he's leaving, still loves Tanya in some way, and she'd be the rebound/amIreconciling girl. Gah! I hope that Edward soon realizes that Tanya is best left at the curb with the rest of the trash - change for me and ultimatums are not loving! 

If I were Bella, I'd have him naked for the rest of my painting sessions - at least she'd have THAT memory! hahaha. :)

Thanks for the update!!

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