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Reviewer: lyssalani (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

well i think the chapters are too short and you started the story to early..... everyone knows what happened with royce... its emmett and their relationship that can be put into many diffrent veiws... other than that it was a good story and i am going to rate you an 8

Reviewer: becca-bella-bee-thatsme (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oooh, I love it! I really like when an author ties in some real facts with her fictitional story, it makes twilight seem more real.

You really did an awesome job! Keep it up!

Reviewer: GiKodaly (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

I really liked it!
Update soon!

Reviewer: Angelsstoday (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great Story! I look forward to reading some more and hope you can post soon

Reviewer: pigzrool (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2008 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

I don't think this is lame. I relaly like it. I think you should definitely continue.

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 3

very cool. Royce got what he deserved. Great writing.

Reviewer: GoldIwannaB (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow, I like it!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 2

I thought this chapter was a good build up to Rose's revenge on her old fiancé! It definitely sets the stage. I feel sorry for the poor soul! Rose isn’t someone to mess with! I can’t wait for Emmett to enter the picture! :) Keep up the awesome work!

Reviewer: ipunchedawerewolfintheface (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hmm, this is quite an interesting start. I also love Rosalie, and I think you're doing a great job with her. I'd love to see you continue and see where you're going to take this. Keep it up!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is the BEST Roseline POV I've read yet! I like how you made her relatable instead of bitchy. When will chapter 2 be up??? :)

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