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Reviews For Turn to Stone
Reviewer: sugunary (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Surprise!

ok, so yay they are engaged, Edward's dad is dead, so Jake is what Ed Sr illegitamate child? oh brother on that if its true. Poor Em, was it the crazy guy  that caused Edward's accident and followed Bella at work?- Those Cavanaughs are a crazy bunch of ppl. James's father is willing to break all kinds of laws including murder to get his psycho son out of trouble!

Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Surprise!

Well...I think that Jacob is Edward's half brother, probaly a son his father had with one of his mistresses...The reason why I believe this is because it's seems pretty obvious, plus the fact that his mothers name was Billie Jean..."Billie Jean is not my love she's just a girl who claims that I am the one, but the kid is not my son, she says I am the one, but the kid is not my son."Billie Jean by Michael Jackson.... :) As for Emmet, the guy that ran him down is probably the same guy that ran Edward off the road.....And now, the end of my review....This chapter was great...I can't wait for the next one,love the fact that he didn't wait for the perfect "moment" to ask her...'Cause I don't think there is a perfect moment...Not really. ;)

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Surprise!

Jacob could be Senior's child through an affair and well, Emmett's accident was courtesy of non other than someone from James's camp. I maybe wrong but that's what came to mind. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Em is okay.

Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Surprise!

Sounds like Edwards got a brother and Jame's father's men have been busy again! 

Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

this story is amazing and intense.it is also very well presented.i hope it will be updated soon and will reach a good conclusion.i will be looking out for it.thank you for making so much effort.

Reviewer: adriana05 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

FUCK JAMES! POOR BELLA! EDWARD SHOULD KICK HIS ASS!

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

I like how you showed certain chaos in the beginning of the chapter with the chase and then the media. Then the mood shifted and became a bit more calm and organized.

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

Wow this was a great chapter!! Gosh James is sooo sick! Aro is totally creepy! So cant wait for the next update! Thanks so much for the update! :)

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

Great Chapter

Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

omg!!!!!!!!!! i just discovered this story yesterday, and am absolutely riveted!!!!!! i can't wait for more!!!



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Reviewer: we live for love (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

Great update. I hope this means that James is going to get what's coming to him and Bella can finally get past it. Boy, I could practically feel how slimy Aro is. I am glaed she is living with Edward. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: skfh (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

Really good story, you are really good with the words.

 

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

Holy f*ck James gives me the creeps. He's obviously trying to rattle Bella, knowing that she'll have to be a star witness for the prosecution but he definitely is a complete cretin.

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

As always a great chapter. Thanks. Nance

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

I hate that smugness of the Dark Haired Man.  The nerve to actually hold Edward's cell phone and smile at him.   Looky Looky what I have, how immature.  What is he in elementary school?  It's too bad the cops didn't get him or follow him.  Who knows where he will be again?  Since he did try and kill Edward on the highway.  Watching the cafe where Bella worked for 4 days.  Not a safe occurrence for Bella even if Ted's man Jared is there to keep an eye on her. If Edward had not driven down to the cafe, then the police might have been able to approach him.  What would they do just tell him to move along?  But at least Edward convinced Bella to quit her job.  Because it wasn't safe with the trial pending.  When everyone arrived at Bella's apartment to discuss the safety issue for all parties involved, it was decided that Bella would move in with Edward.  Alice would move in with Jasper.  Since he only has cell phone no address listed with phone number.  Because all of Edward's friends/family's home and cell phone number are listed.  With a home phone number you can find the address of the party and threaten/coerce them in an attempt to prevent Edward from pursuing against James.  James's family tipped off the press and attempted to create a 3 ring circus.  Bella insisted she wanted to go to see James's face.  Edward saw who the defense attorney for James was and dreads Bella being questioned by him. Edward felt Aro is much worse with a witness on the stand. Judge Crowley didn't waste any time refusing everything Aro wanted for his client.  The prosecutor had built a good solid case against James.  Not only mentioning previous, but establishing a pattern that continued across state lines.  Since the state's shrinks found James to be competent and sane he will be tried for his crimes.  The last nail was to transfer the case to Federal so the evidence will have all of attacks in Oregon and California as well as Bella's in Washington.  Since the trial Edward had him a verdict of not guilty, the information of the rape on that trial matches his mo when he attacked Bella and then knifed her in the back. What a sick creep?  James had the nerve to smile at Bella and lick his lips and blows Bella a kiss.  No remorse at all the man has no conscious.  He is just pure evil with daddy's money fixing everything he does wrong.  James has never had to deal with his actions.  Hoping this time the court will lay into him and add additional time for each subsequential victim from Washington, Oregon, and California.  Did anything happen in AZ why at the funny farm?  A man like James doesn't stop, he probably attacked someone there.  Possibly a fellow patient.  Get that cocky bastard.  If I thought it would help having Edward beat him to a bloody pulp, but that would only make things worse.  Bella has to remain strong, the tough part is just beginning.

 

 

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Attack of the Pixie

Wonderful chapter! I can't stop clicking NEXT to go to bed.  Alas...it's already 2 am! I will continue tomorrow.  Thanks for the awesome story.  It really entertained me tonight.

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety

"She’s definitely my best friend.  Screw Emmett."

That line was hilarious and so very true!

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark

WOW, truly excellent chapter.  Edward's reaction to Bella was so very sweet and understanding.  I can't wait to read his POV of her revelation. I have to admit that I kinda teared up when she was telling him.  You wrote everything so beautifully that it's hard not to get emotional over it.

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 13 – Sunshiny Day

AWE those two are too cute! Loving it. I can't get enough of Cynthia and Edward. She has got to be one of the best original characters ever.  I'm still not liking Emmett at all though. I kept wishing him gone throughout his brief appearance.  Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Ms Jones

Excellent chapter.  I'm not anxious for Edward to find out because I'm not ready for the light stuff to end.  As soon as he finds out...the sad heavy stuff will begin. Edward and Bella are super cute together.  I really hope that everything works out well.

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

james is a creep and i hope they can stick him with every crime he ever committed and his father should go down as well for trying to keep him out jail

just hope it wasn't to much for bella and causes her to regress

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 11 - An Interesting Conversation

Excellent chapter! I loved the zoo...LOVED the kiss.  That was very sweet.  The video store scene had me laughing because it's a running joke in my house how I refuse to touch rented stuff and always run to best buy to buy the actual DVD's.  As a result, I have more DVD's than I know what to do with.  I love Jasper, his accent is hilarious.  I really hope that he and Edward can become friends. Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning

Ugh! I can't stand James. I really hope he gets what's coming to him. Glad to see that you are back on track. Can't wait til the next update!

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 10 – Round Two

Excellent chapter, can't wait to see how the zoo goes.

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show

I'm not sure about Emmett redeeming himself yet.  I think that Edward was correct about Cynthia possibly being his best friend as oppose to Emmett.  Emmett just seems very childish and immature.  He enables Edward's bad behavior instead of trying to help him. I see why Cynthia doesn't like him.  Excellent chapter.

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