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Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 – Round Two
They really are falling hard.
I'm wondering how long they have before THAT conversation :)
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Poor Edward.
btw, I did hear about this on Twitter, but I don't remember who recced it :)
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
That was such a big step for her. She did so good. Its coming together so nicely. I know there's still rough times ahead but its good for them to have some fun now. Ok, on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
I'm glad she at least told him a little bit. And he was so good about it and so protective of her. ANd he's helping her. So sweet. So sad. Another great chapter.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 13 – Sunshiny Day
I love the dynamic between Cynthia and Edward. And Cynthia and Em. She's good for both of them. And now I'm nervous for Bella to tell him. And I'm secretly hoping to be the 800th reviewer. My goals are very simple, lol.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Ms Jones
FYI, I love Jasper. So glad he's in the story. And how supportive he is. Another good chapter.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 - An Interesting Conversation
They kissed! Yay! They are so sweet together. And I love Jasper being all protective but I'm surprised he doesn't know exactly what happened. That was a great date.
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Call
Poor Edward, he's so cute when he's anxious!
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Definitely NOT Gay
LOL, of course it's not Alice :)
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 - They Speak
I'm glad he's calling her. :)
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 – Round Two
Can't Bella and Edward go out on a double date w/Jasper and Alice at night and she'd be ok? Have I mentioned recently how much I love this story? You are an amazing writer. So glad I have tons of chapters left to catch up on.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 – Round Two
Can't Bella and Edward go out on a double date w/Jasper and Alice at night and she'd be ok? Have I mentioned recently how much I love this story? You are an amazing writer. So glad I have tons of chapters left to catch up on.
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Day Five
Cynthia is great :)
Author's Response: Please vote for her at:
http://thefaithfulshipperawards.webs.com/
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
“You could never do anything that would make me never want to see you again.” That sounds like the eventual kiss of death. I was afraid Em was going to be a dick in this but it seems, hopefully, that he's going to get nicer.
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Bella
I'm a little confused about the identity of her rapist. Was it the man at the bar who misdirected her? Or not?
Author's Response: Keep reading. It comes out.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Dinner
I think its funny that Bella waited for Alice to get in the shower to start the garbage disposal. So sneaky. So her issue is going out at night?
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Call
I've said it before but I love Cynthia. She is to damn funny. I love that Edward wanted to take a pic of his putfit and send it to her. Priceless.
Author's Response: Love her enough to vote for her... PLEASE!
http://thefaithfulshipperawards.webs.com/
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Definitely NOT Gay
Its nice to see Jessica not be a bitch for once. And now her and Cynthia are mirroring each other's pep talks! So loving this story.
Reviewer: addictedtotwilight116 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Revelations
I'm glad that Bella decided to go back into the apartment and talk to Rosalie. She is very brave and strong for deciding to go through with the trial. Also, I'm glad Bella had that little talk with Edward and told him that she forgives him and that she loves him. I think he needed to hear that. This chapter is one of my favorites because it brings everyone together, and Edward and Bella are back together.
Reviewer: nch2691 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Revelations
great chapter
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 - They Speak
Cynthia is my favorite new character. Or my new favorite character. Whichever, she's awesome. Kind of like Alice. Really enjoying this so far.
Author's Response: She's nominated at the Faithful Shipper Awards. Please vote!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Day Five
Yay! They met. And the're both so insecure and unsure its heartbreaking. Another great chapter!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Bella
Amazing. You told it brilliantly. I still like how their POV's kind of mirror each other. I am officially in it for the long haul. Just amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you. It gets a little easier to handle for the next few chapters. Thanks for jumping on board.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Revelations
Glad Bella came back. Edward was truly broken when she left him. Edward needs to forgive himself for the wrong he did to Angela and thereby to Bella. He has changed, he is no longer that ambitious self serving jerk. I am glad she forgave him for what he did to her. I understand why she doesn't forgive for the acquittal. But I am confused about this line. "because that is not something I feel you should be sorry for; at least not to me. You didn't know that I would be his next victim." Is she trying to say that she is not blaming him for her rape? I understand not forgiving him for the acquittal, but she doesn't blame him for getting James back on the street, That she is putting blame for the rape where it truly belongs on James himself? I am glad that the case will be moving forward. Putting behind bars does give you both a feeling of justice plus a new level of safety. Totally helps you to heal and begin to live again. Great job with a very sensitive subject matter. Edward and Bella are going to be together right?
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Edward
Wow, that was brillaint, scary, emotional. You did a hell of a job w/it.
Author's Response: Thanks for pushing on through. Again, if you make it through Chapter 4, you should be ok.
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