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Reviewer: Maxi Brux (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 12
I love the way that this story puts a different perspective on the various snippets that SM already gave us about the characters to give a new 'NM'. I want to know how Sam reacts to the news that the Cullens wiped out Irina's army. I want to know how/if Rose and Em fix their relationship. And I want to know what happens when Tanya finds out (she does, doesn't she?)
Reviewer: MistyH (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 12
It's tragic and beautiful. I hope you are able to update soon.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow. The insult is so much better with teh backstory....and it is a serious twist of the knife, isn't it?
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 12
Hi you. I got an alert for this chapter and I discovered I had not read a word of the previous ones. I wonder what happened. But I love, love, love it.
So, an angry Bella. I hope she starts seeing the truth. Stupid as Edward was when he left her, he does say in New Moon that he could not believe that Bella had immediately believed him when he said he did not love her. Boys, the girl has problem of self evaluation .. Now that she is sto strong that she can send Rosalie to hell, maybe she can reasses what really happened with Edward..
Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 12
This story has a nice, creative twist. Please update again soon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
Ah, what a cliffie!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 12
Very intriguing so far. I don't think I've seen a NM twist close to this one- I like it.
Author's Response: Red Shift has a similar twist. I highly recommend it.
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oh wow. That was heartbreaking. I am so very curious to find out what you have planned next!! Great chapter!
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh that story about Mrs. Plattsmier is sad and its heartbreaking that Bella thinks thats how the Cullens view her. Not that I can blame her. The way they all left her was so very very sad. Glad to see Jasper supporting Alice. You have done such a great job exploring the Cullen family and the problems that lie within them. Great chapter!
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh I like the twist with Irina! Loved it!!
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
Go Bella! Girl needs to drink more! Gotta love that liquid courage. And wow. Love what she said to Rose at the end there. It does make sense that so much of Rose's resentment would be the fact that Edward wanted a human girl when he could of had her. Really great chapter. I loved seeing Bella let out some of her anger towards the Cullens. They have much to make up for. Loving this story!
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 7
Stupid idea Rose. Seems Edward has cracked. Loving this story!
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh no. Oh Edward. Loving Alice yelling at Rose. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
Interesting! I like the twist that its not Victoria! I like Bella letting Alice know how she feels. Again loving your Alice. And your Bella. And now Edward is going to listen to that hurtful voicemail. Sad. Fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow Rose. That was unbelievable harsh. Loving Alice. I love that she is trying to fight for her family and standing up to Carlisle. Really enjoying this story!
Reviewer: miasmiclouds (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow.. I rather like the imagery of Jasper's view of the reunion. To be honest, I had forgotten about this story. I do hope you choose to continue with it.
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! Excited to see where this goes.
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow... simply wow... please don't take so long for the next update. Only kidding... we the readers are just happy that you the writer is providing such a tale. So, I'll simply eagerly await for you to continue this thrilling tale! :-)
Thanks for sharing your intense talent!
Author's Response: I'm sorry. But I actually submitted this chapter several weeks ago - had to delete and resubmit. I was beginning to wonder if it would show up.
Reviewer: shailienieves (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMGEE!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
Reviewer: shailienieves (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
lmao! thats just,,,LMAO!!! bella...and alice....and rose...then carlisle....i love this chapter
Reviewer: saya4haji (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
interesting...I hope bella has this strength when dealing with the cullens and edward without the artificial courage of alcohol. i like the tell it how it is, no bull sh*t bella.
thanks for the update, pls keep writing.
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hmmm...will Bella be different once she sees Edward and realizes what a mess he is? I feel there is still more confrontations to come. Does she even want to be changed now? Or is Carlisle just going with what Bella wanted in the past.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
love the story
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 11
Just found your story today and I love it. Excellent story line and writing. Keeps me wondering what will happen from chapter to chapter. Do you have it on fanfiction.net?
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 11
I have forgotten what happwnd before. To re-read everything is not very practical. Why don't you add a short recap to the chapters?
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