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Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter Seven

Aw he took her to school! But damn.. he didn't take her home again. Thats a shame : ( Can't wait for the next chapter.. shame you won't be posting it for ages.. I wonder what will happen when she talks to Phil. Great story so far!

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter Six

I like how you have introduced all the characters.. but oh no :| she didn't talk to Jasper and she harmed herself again. I really don't understand why she keeps going it. It's only going to get worse when someone - most probably Charlie or Jasper find out about it. But I guess I don't know very much about self harming to actually know why people do it. I hope they get to talk soon..

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter Five

Well that explains it. I guess that reaction does make sense. But urgh. Maria is getting angry.. I do hope he leaves her or just puts her straight about what is going on. I hope they get to catch up soon.

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter Four

Urgh, Jasper is with Maria. I usually like them together but not today. Not when he should be with Bella.. even though he should be with Alice normally. But I'm way cool with non canon. Um.. why didn't she run to him and hug him?! Why did she turn away and run into the house? Well. I'm sure I will find out..

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Chapter Three

Aw yay! She is going back to Forks! Good! I feel for Phil.. but she really does need to go. I couldn't help but smile when Jasper replied.. that was so cute.

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter Two

Oh my god! Renee is a BITCH. I hate her. A lot of people make Renee into the bitch because she left.. but your one is the worst. I can't believe she said that. Evil cow! Phil seems like a decent guy but even he doesn't know about the self harming.. oh god.. shes cut the name Jasper into her skin.. :|

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter One

I'm really starting to like this story! Poor Bella, that must be horrible being seperated from her best friend.. he seems like such a lovely guy as well. I tell you what, I'm adding Jasper on msn. Hahah. Jokes. I hope he gets the email.

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Prologue

It is so sad : ( Especially being  child having to endure parents arguing.. poor Bella. Her and Jasper seem so close too! I'd love to have someone like that who could sing me to sleep at night. Aw.. the 'I love you Bella' bit was really really cute. But no... she has to leave. WIll continue to read on! Can't believe I didn't start this one before, I had it in my favourites for ages.

Reviewer: saffy j (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Oh awesome, i just came back from a holiday in Queensland (i live in NSW).

I'm glad it's going to be a B/Jas fic, i'm really interested to see where you take this story.

Reviewer: xxlilmiztrublexx (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter Seven

nooo!

it ended too quickly!!!

i wanted to know what the conversation ended up like!

great chap anyway! cant wait till the next one is posted!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter Seven

 MERRY CHRISTMAS & A HAPPY NEW YEAR

to you as well

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter Seven

Great chapter. I am glad Jasper and Bella had a chance to talk. I am so glad he isn't with Maria, :) I hope Bella will sit with Jasper at lunch eventually. Can't wait for Feb to read more. :) Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you also. x

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter Seven

Happy holidays to you, too. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter Seven

love it.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter Six

Just read through the story and like it a lot. Update when you can it will be worth the wait I'm sure.

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter Six

it's a very interesting story, and I would be really happy to see an update sometime soon

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter Six

Thank you so much for the update. I was so happy when i saw this updated. :) Look forward to reading more soon. I will definitely stick by your story. It is worth waiting for. Please let Jasper and Bella talk soon :)

Reviewer: saffy j (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter Six

Queensland?

You're an Aussie?

I love this fic, but i'm kind of confused about what pairing its going to be?

B/E? B/Jas? B/Jac?



Author's Response:

i am in indeed an aussie. i moved when i was 11.
I can't wait to go to Queensland. i've never been anywhere except Perth.

it will end up being a Jazz/Bell pairing.

i'm glad you like the fic.

Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter Six

Jesus, a cigarett to the arm must hurt like balls!

I wonder what Edward thought of Bella during bio. He probably doesn't like her much right now cause she pretty much ignored his girl friend, lol.

Lets just get rid of Maria, yeah? hha



Author's Response:

xD a cigarette to the arm does indeed hurt.
dw. i think everyone wants to get rid of Maria :P

i'm glad you enjoyed the chap.
xx

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter Six

love it.



Author's Response:

i'm glad you enjoy it :)
thanks for reviewing.
xx

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter Six

Oh i loved it. i can't believe Bells is being stupid and hurting herself but I am sure she will come around and Jazz will be able to help her.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you love it. :)
thank you for reviewing!
xx

Reviewer: KalhanCullen (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter Six

Im not really a jasper/Bella fan but i do like this story :) alot



Author's Response:

i'm glad you like the story, even though you're not a j/b fan. :)
thank you heaps for reviewing!
xx

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter Six

Woot woot ... a J/B pairing! I absolutely love it and I'm thrilled I found your story cuz I can't get nuff of it. Please update soon!

Author's Response:

:) i'm glad you love the story!!
im happy you found it as well!

xx

Reviewer: ladybeth25 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter Five

...tease...thats what you are...Thanks for writing a Bella/Japer story there doesnt seem to be many on here!



Author's Response:

haha :P i dont mean to be a tease... actually no thats a lie haha.
I'm glad you like the J/B story. i just fell inlove with Jasper and i've always thought he and Bella make a good pairing.
:)

thanks for reading&reviewing!
xo
Cassie

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter Five

love it.



Author's Response:

:) i'm glad you love it!
thanks for the review!

xo
Cassie

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